I need to find a style for me

>>707
I like this! Your style is neat so far. I'd like to see more.

no dicks here

>>791
You should redraw his arms because they look very weird due to the perspective. I like the pose idea but his arms don't make sense like this. Try to hold you arms like if you were Solly in this, see how a natural posture would look in this perspective (mirrors are your friend).

I must compliment you on the face and the muscle structure though. Nice!

>>835
will try to fix that, thanks!

people usualy says, "what is anathomy?"
I say, "what is perspective?"

scanner, why you hate pencil?

I don't mind a red line for those...

>>860
His face doesn't line up properly. It looks a bit wobbly (if that makes sense). Also, the head appears to be kinda giant. Watch out for proportions, especially with perspective heavy poses. (I know how tough that is, so don't give up)

>>867
Not much wrong with this at all! Again, well done muscle structure.

Man, your muscle structure is really, really good. I just wanted to make sure you're aware of that. Keep doing what you're doing, man.

Just work on your perspective/angles in facial structure a bit and you'll be out of here and into /fanart/ in no time! :D Look forward to seeing you in there!

>>871
I learned a new word today, wobbly lol. but is true, i see that now.
>>872
yeah, I realy like muscles... I wish I had them

Thanks for the critiques , thats helped alot

>>860
Hopefully this redline helps clarify what's off. Really it was just the face, though the shoulder and the hip just needed to be fixed just a little to fit with the angle.

I can drool at these muscles all day, excellent work there.

>first thing I see when I wake up, Kilo's red line
I have no words to tell how I'm felling right now

Thanks Kilo, that helped alot to notice somethings I wasn't before.
Well, next time I try harder.

What is the secret of tablet drawing? Dam, it's so hard..

>>881
the eyes...
I draw better when I'm not looking at reference

>>924

Mmmm. I'll quote a friend of mine in saying 'The only thing better than a man in uniform is a man who should be in uniform out of it.'

Color please. Maybe add some delicious battlescar action.

>>964
I'm glad you like it.
Currently I'm on a quest to find my painting/drawing style (and trying to learn how to use a tablet, urg...).

wip..meh

Small head.

nope

>>1047
Daw, cheer up Engie. You've been drawn really well!

>>1048
Thanks!
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I blame perry for this one, she demand me to make it.

>>1068
Hahaha, I did? One way or the other, I lol'd.

>>1047
I wanna hug him. Well done drawing!

>>1069
"need to draw sexy solly's abbys³"
It was like being hypnotized
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My "oc" is a soldier doesn't uses pants and steals hats from another classes.

>>1086
Haha, I see. If I inspire you that way I should talk about Solly's abs more often ...

Also had to grin at that "OC". He should steal some of Pyro's hats.

I need a good legs tutorial...

>>1103
It's like if a scout ghost have possesed a soldier... meh, not funny anymore.

-That bad drawn shit up there is not ME! It's a SPY!

Ugu I'm Kawaii desu?
Supai kun!

I did this one for Kilo.

This for Perry.

>>1132
SUGOI KAWAII UGUUU

>>1145
That's really sweet. You did well on the poses! It conveys a lot of feeling.

>>1146
Haha, is that me? Aw man, thank you! That's really nice! If I was any good I'd draw something for you. I SHALL TRY

>>1149
Hahah thanks perry! No need to rush to do anything, just pratice to be a better artist!
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Need more hoovy, since is the class I play better (after medic).

>>1154
He looks a bit too slim and bodybuilderlike to me here. Heavy is pretty much built like a strongman competitor - Try to draw him more in that direction.

I'm start to get how to use this shit thanks to someone stream!

almost a dick

>>1154

Stop making medic looks like a fag dammit.

Oh god, what have I done?!

Made this for you cat.
Gueixa medic is not ugu~
HATSUNE MEDIC IS UGU~~

Helmetparty4evah

>>1243

Oh lawd, Medic.

Did you lose a bet?

>>1243
OK, now this needs to be colored.

>>1235
Definitely an improvement! Well done.

>>1238
>>1243

... FABULOUS.

>>1258
Looks sweet. The only thing that bugs me are Soldier's hands - Not sure if they're right like that.

>>1279
:)
>>1259
He did haha.
>>1260
Not coloring it, his arms are so ugly.
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Engibee!

>>1286
AWWWWW

bananieer

Hnnngh... muscles... ♥ this stuff, your pics are great! And, Engie cuteness.

meh

Redlines are welcome here please.

unfinished

Thanks rev for the tips and fix.

>>1387

I'm not on a redline-enabled computer right now, but the one thing I keep noticing about this one is that his femur is way too short; his knees should be about halfway along his legs. Aside from that, it looks quite good to me. I like his expression.

I redlined myself lol

A little help please?

less of a red-line because apparently I suck at them and more of notes as I attempted to red-line.

I'm not sure what exactly your end goal was to the picture which is why I'm uncomfortable giving this critique. It appears as though you wanted to make both characters very muscular and ripped to the point of a well defined six pack. In this couple I actually like the difference in their body types Engie's soft and roundness to Soldier's more square musculature. However if that is not what you were going for between them it's only a suggestion.

Some small obvious things though. Engie's ear should be lower and back farther. Soldier's head should be turned a little more toward Engy so he can reach the ear/neck with his teeth and tongue. If you've ever tried to lick someone, you know your tongue only goes so far. There needs to be a real proximity of the mouth to achieve your goal.

Also the intimacy of the act is intensified i think, as the two characters lock together, emphasizing overlap.

I couldn't tell if Engineer was completely naked or partly, so I had two versions. Really from his expression it's hard to tell what exactly is going on here except that he's uncomfortable with the situation. His posture felt wrong to me.

I have one where he is srunching inward to protect himself, on the left. The defensive curl allows him to protect the family jewels but inadvertently pushes him back toward Soldier's ass grab.

On the right he's only slightly reluctant as he curves out and away from Soldier, while soldier try's to coax him back.

Drawing two characters interacting like this is very tough and I congratulate you for tackling it. I find that drawing through the overlapped character helps me keep scale. If I'm working in pencil as you probably are, I use a light colored pencil for the back character until the two fit together, then go over both in dark pencil.

Because you had Engie in front, soldier got a little thicker than I think even you intended. And the direction of Solly's body got confused as well. Anyway I've yakked enough.

I hope I was helpful

>>1428
I..I.. thankyou so much for this, you have no idea how happy I am now. that sure help me to understand some problems I have to interact two characters together.

I shall sacrifice a goat in your honor.

bah I thought it would be easier to explain my
process as I did it, but I was very wrong.

If you like the way this is going I can finish out the drawing similarly I just don't know if this is helpful...

>>1437
aw dude, this is some good lesson to me thanks. I will pratice more now.
Who are you? Why don't post your things here too?

I will try to make atlast 1 scarp for day. Your tips inspired me sir godfather/mother!
Can you help me with arms/legs/neck? is hard find good tutorials about those parts.

>>1449

The best site I've found for male body reference is oddly enough, http://koalaswim.com . It's an 'exotic bathing suit' website, which is to say that it has a catalog of men posing while wearing little or nothing. Having a site that's free of junky pop-ups or porn ads, (aside from the owner's, obviously) is nice, and as they've used different models over the years, it's also been a nice way for me to get an idea of how different body shapes look. Another option I've used in the past is going to Wikipedia and looking up articles on the muscles of the human body. Not surefire, but it's a start.

>>1450
aww dude thanks, but refereces not the problem for me, I draw since 1999. Have piles of book in my room about that. I just can't see in what I'm doing wrong. But thanks alot yang! (keep drawing too hihihi)

>>1452
I mean, I have problems to see in what I failing.

>>1449

blargh my hand hurts now. Anyway vast improvement
here! Hopefully this helps

>>1456
aw sir thankyou again! gonna study this.

No time for full body today sorry.

today's pratice. maybe finish later still

>>1472
You should try more different poses, too! Practice only goes so far when you don't try new things. I actually found screenshots from TF2 to be quite inspiring when it comes to poses.

>>1473

Seconding, and posting some refs for you :3

Have fun practicing :D

Fixed the extruture, thanks cat.

>>1472
I will start to make them making cool poses when i get used with legs and arms.
>>1474
Thanks!

>>1475
Hey! getting better and better! I was having a hard time figuring out what was going wrong with this one.

1. Perspective. The dotted line is your eye level. There are a few oddities. Everything above the line we should be looking down on, and lines recede down toward the horizon line i n perspective. Everything below we are looking up on.

Part of the reason Soldier looks like he's tipping over is his shoulders are receding up which makes it look like he's tipping.

2. Planting the feet. I see this a lot, where feet don't seem to stick to anything. Draw a ground plane and make sure the sole of the foot rests on that plane. It will give the character weight.

3. Exaggerate the pose. Push that chest out more and bend the arms a little more. We really want to read this pose!

That's all till next time. Keep up the good work
>>1446

I have a ton of homework still. I do this to cool off after a long day it's very relaxing and I like seeing the improvements.

And I won't lie. It's easier to draw over other people's work than to start a whole new picture of my own

One day I paint this.

>>1478
Sir, you are my fairy godfather/godmother. Thanks again!

Fixed some details.

>>1478
Forgot to say, DAT STAR NIPPLES!

>>1482
OMG! So well done! In fact I didn't even have to hit this one with a tablet. All I did was rotate some things and stretch out others with a mouse!

the correction is literally all your drawing! SON I AM PROUD

>>1484
yay! but I will let it be. The next one will be better!

WIP
You only draws Helmet Party Furei?

Don't complain I do heavy and Medic too.

Helmetparty4evahdealwithit.

>>1541

It is still the best kind of party. Engi must have a strong back to be able to carry that load of bricks around...

>>1541
I really like the pose.

I'm so creative to draw poses.

No motivation to live.

>>1589

Big sad solly eyes. Gets 'em every time.

Congratulations furei, you just lost tf2chan's respect.

dok

first demo try

second try

>>1680
Those are some really giant hands.

Generally, nice, but you should work out Demo's face a bit more.

Solly is lighter than a sentry.

redlines?

your sexy grampa...

Wip, thanks alot anonymon!

captcha - heretu their

Mr Hale, please take me!

saxton hale is easy to draw!

no comment

>>1815
Looks kind of derpfaced because of the crossed eyes and the chin being so long.

>>1816
yeah..
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Still praticing before the masterpiece...

>>1817
Sparky said the heads was big.

Cuddling time!

Sparky vs me

>>1822
This wasn't incest

<--- THIS IS.

(USER WAS BANNED FOR THIS POST)

>>1830

I think that's enough.

>>1831

Riiiight. While don't give much shits about incest, what makes Radigan/Engineer wrong and Scout/ScoutMom okay if you don't mind me asking?

>>1831

Furry shit and CP is one thing, but this is another ball game, as there are no clear rules against incestual content (or any for that matter). The image is not breaking any international laws whatsoever, either. Yes, the image may be in bad taste and may offend some people whom are against incestual content, but that is no call for a ban. There has been incestual content before in the past and there was no problem, and it is still not a problem.

The ban has been overruled.

>>1839

Okay.

Sorry, then.

...

Hot Anal Sex (with a bullet)

teaser wip.

>>1851
forget about this, I got pissed whit that creepy thing and did this non creepy instead.

It seems like no one likes manly mature men here, so have some necrophilia.

>>1864

Sorry... I just have an inexplicable dislike of moustaches. They really really annoy me.

>>1865

More testosterone.

Stop being so handsome soldier, I missed draw you.

There's a giant error in this draw.

he's clothed

>>1896
I lol'd hard. Without the spoiler, i search for an error for like 5 minutes.

>>1896
pffff sorry..
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Creepygineer, put your googles back, please!

New sexy weapon, necktail and boots!
My body is ready sir!

No weapons for Engie?!

engie still sad...

Someone give that man a hug before I do.

And by hug, I mean cuddle session devolving into mindless fucking.

oook.. back to the training! (i mean drawing training)
WIP still

my hand hurts...

I will paint someday...

>>1945 Nice!

>>1945
My good sir, you have been improving in bounds.
I especially like their body hair.

>>1951
Thanks! I have praticed alot..
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I hate painting... even cell shading...
Unfinished.

>>1960
Oh, some coloring going on in here! Nice. You should definitely practice that more.
You're also getting better at letting characters interact. Bravo!

>>1960
thanks sir!

Linework

>>1983
This looks really good! I love the way you drew Solier here.

My only crit is that Engineer's nose is just a hair off center.

Oh hey I finaly can enter this site again!

>>1984
thanks for that, I fixed it.

>>2016
I really, really like this one. Especially Engineer's broad shoulders; nobody ever draw his shoulders the way they appear in-game. (also, I'm assuming you drew that he slings to the right; I sort of like that detail. Aheheh.)

>>2019
Thankyou! I'm glad you liked it!
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Demopraticetiemz

Moar demo

>>2147

You da best.

Furei, you have improved greatly in both art style and anatomy over the course of being here. I believe you ought to graduate to the /fanart/ or /afanart/ boards.

>>2147

Mmmm.... Demoman. Good to see him getting some (art) lovin'.

>>2155
Aww thanks!
>>2156
Dunno if i'm ready yet.
>>2157
Ihate him in game because he's my weak spot, but he deserves more fanarts!
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I think there's something wrong here, can't see what..

>>2161
I think it's his arms. The forearm seems to long for the rest of his body.
Other than that I don't see any problems. Looks good.

>>1911
>>1960
>>2016
>>2147
You have improved outta sight, mate. You've developed a recognizable style and I join the vote that you ought'a graduate to /fanart/ and /afanart/.

>>2167
thanks for that, but I think will not finish this my dog died wille i was drawing...

>>2169
If everyone's ok with this I post the next colorized ones there then.
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Soldier and his imaginary friends rule 34 WIP

>>2206
Needed to be done for great justice. Thank you, friend.

Also, I'm really sorry about your dog.

>>2206
Brilliant. RIP your dog.

>>2206 this wip is enough to make me jizz
And my condolences.

>>2231
>>2221
>>2212
hehehehehe!
also thanks.

Now Soldeir is the imaginary. Wip still.

Is this Helmet Party?

>>2241

Spah

Trying some Spy and paint techinique.

>>2295
Proportions could use some work. I know you like drawing beefy men, I do so too, but Spy is simpy not that beefy. Look at his body form - He's more slender and agile rather than muscled. Remember that his field of work doesn't require muscle power, it requires fast thinking and good reaction. Use reference for more slender body types and draw Spy accordingly. It's not like he doesn't have a fit body, but defined muscles are nothing you need in his line of work.

Coloring is improving, keep it up!

>>2295
The coloring here realy sucks, sorry.
I think spy have some definition on his torso, since he have a large shoulder, but yeah the arms I aggre..
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That's is what happens when you try to mess up with Engie, Spah.

I will stay with the solid colors.

>>2324
The coloring was a decent base to work off of, don't put yourself down. Research different shading techniques and experiment.
Also I don't only mean the arms, but the legs too.

The new drawing is pretty nice, you did well on the face.

>>2325
Have lots of references already, just don't find my techinique yet. Eternal quest researching my style...(put some dramatic music here)
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My otp²

Probably I will try to fit a medic somewhere there.

Inspired for something anonymon done and was on my hipsterboard today..

It's actually the suit that makes Spy appear to have such broad shoulders. They're tailored to give men a more appealing, masculine silhouette by broadening the shoulders and tapering into a more slim outline towards the waist. The inverted triangle shape this gives is more imposing and helps skinny frogs like Spy not look so wimpy. Yay for Suits 101!

And I personally think your style would be best using solid colors and cel shading, perhaps blended with a few softer techniques like it is in-game.

>>2335
Yeah I forgot about this detail.. oh well.
Also aggree, I should realy work more on cell shading.
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Getting frustrated with this piece.. drawing is hard sometimes..

I think the best way to pratice fast drawing is doing a comic without fear of do errors, it's a constant drawing, where or you get better or worse...
O well, here we go.
Also helmet party needs a comic

>>2360
I see solly's dropping in from the 'fags' side of town. And yes, helmet party comic is good idea.

>>2372
hehehe

Nothing to say

hummm.. I think I liked how the coloring comes out.

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE

junepay idea

reference used

Engie can't resist when he saw solly in that pose.

I must say you are really getting into drawing body hair and I approve. Good job!

>>2513
Still like my hary man shaved,but needs to be hairy to shave them ehehehe..
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Humm.. I miss some feedback.
Kilo's request.

WIP

I'm doing some requests...

wip just to see if someone notices any error I didn't

another one

I deleted my afanart thread because I realized I still have much to improve. Thanks for all the sincere crits, I will keeping working to improve.

repost (nothing was fixed)

repost

repost

trying new scribbling techiniques

I have no idea what's happening here too.

>>2683
The feet could be made a little smaller and the elbows brought down some here. The forearm seems too long compared to the hindarm.

>>2685
FLYING DAT ASS SLAP

Animu

that paintchat is hard.

The dream I had today...

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE

>>2703
I like this. Like, this is really nice.

Color this. Please.

>>2703

Very nice! I love the job you did on his arm.

>>2703
<--- In the best way possible

>>2704
>>2705
>>2707
I'm happy you liked!
I'm not planning on color that sorry.

artblock

tryed again...

>>2728

One of the things I've really noticed in your recent art is that you're missing a lot of realistic detail in your rendering of human buttocks, skipping the upper half of the gluteus maximus when you draw them. This makes your characters' torsos look too short from behind, and gives their butts an unrealistic balloon-shape. I know that it's a tendency of erotic artists to exaggerate the shapes that they like the most, but you shouldn't be doing that at the expense of realism. While I'm sure you probably spend as much time ogling butts as everyone else on this board, it would really help you to spend even more time doing it and studying the muscular structure that gives them their shape.

>>2730
Like I said before, I have dificulty in see in what I'm doing wrong. You have no idea who you helped me to clarify things I realy didn't see before, thanks alot!
I will not fix this one, but the next thing I will do is study and pratice backs, I think I never in my entire life stoped and studied them.
Also i like big bubbled meaty asses

10min quick doddle

It's Tavish tuesday!

More Tavish Tuesday.

Helmet Party Wednesday!

>>2745
Your helmets are the best helmets. Sorry I missed helmet Wednesday, but this more than makes up for my absence...ho ho ho

>>2746
it's far to be the best, but thanks (your helmets are better than mines tough)
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wednesday already?

going to put this here

cannot unthink about this when I heard those lines.

>>2895

Sadly, all I can think about is how Solly is so batshit insane that nobody can stand to live with him for the sake of their own mental health and safety.

Critwise... it looks to me like you drew the box first, then tried to fit the Soldier's head in the gaps and it came out a bit stretched-looking. If this is the case, I'd suggest sketching the two parts- head and box- on separate layers, to keep track of them.

>>2896
I will sound like an asshole that can't take crits now, but I did this in 10 minutes just to express those lines haha. I didn't even think to draw this lol. But thanks for care and give crits. also I hurt my drawing hand...

>>2897

Heh, it's okay. Just figured I should add something constructive and actually related to the picture you'd drawn when I commented on it here. Also, my drawing hand is feeling pretty maimed lately too.