Here's the dick version of the same image.

A gift I drew for a friend. This is my first completed piece I've ever done in Sai and I'm pretty happy with it. I think the blood and shadows look a little funky though. Thoughts?

>>3279
That is pretty attractive. The only thing I have to say about the blood is that it has some really sharp edges on his chest and needs to be blended a bit better. But apart from that I think your Scout looks pretty hot.

>>3279

My big complaint is simply that the image is so physically big it's hard to get a good look at how the figure's proportions and pose line up. The things that stand out to me are Scout's face, which seems a bit off-center with his head, his fingers, which are rendered a bit too simply, and his left foot, which doesn't quite seem to be set against the ground it's standing on. Aside from that, it looks good- I like the job you've done on his arms and calves.

>>3281
Yeah, it's little bad because I sort of tossed that on there just to finish it off without consulting reference... oops. Thanks for the tip and I'll fix it up!

>>3282
Sorry I didn't realize it was so big... here's a n easier view on my tumblr: http://bit.ly/zG8wh7 Yeah, his left hand still bothers me, though what would you suggest with rendering the fingers? Also, could you clarify a bit about what you said about his left foot? Does it need more dark shadow underneath, or is it a fault of placement?

A little sketch I put on my tumblr. It might be finished at a later time, so if anyone wants to take a look at it for me before I resume working on it again?

>>3283

Sorry for the delay in answering this! Here's a bit more detail on what I was describing. The toe of his left shoe seemed angled a little too upward.

>>3292
Ah, thank you for drawing over! I'll certainly put these tips to good use.

Here's a piece I recently did just for fun and practice for painting in SAI. I find that I'm happy I'm learning how to do things one step at a time. It's a homage/parody[?] of the Dirty Projector's album cover art for Bitte Orca. A bigger version on my tumblr: http://bit.ly/HmNQVe

I recently went over a sketch I did in my sketchbook because I want to use it for a print. It'd be lovely if I could get some critique on it, especially with the placement of Spy's arms. I feel like they should be doing something other than just hanging there, but I'm not sure what.