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>>4223
Yo. I think I critiqued this at some point, though I don't remember what I said. This looks good, but I don't think you have gotten much farther than when I last saw it. I like the idea! Keep going.
My best advice would be to lose the pillow shading and use hard edges. There's some variation in the tones but not much. I think using a technique like the one on the left (by kakimari on DA, used to/still is a poster here) would help this particular image a lot.
>>4225
That is adorable <3
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