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No. 5235
>>5210
Dude, I totally know how you feel. But I gotta say, I don't like this picture much. The problem isn't really anything in the drawing itself as much as it is... the mood. The mood is waaay off.
For some reason, when I look at this picture, I almost feel giddy and silly, and then I'm all, "Oh, wait... This is a sad picture. Medic is dying." But it makes me think of the carnival.
I don't know shit! We gotta keep movin'. anything about art, really, but I'm certain the problem is the color scheme. It's way too bright and colorful and saturated and fucking FUN for a subject so serious. Seriously - it makes me crave cotton candy and balloons and shit. Try duller, muddier, GRITTIER colors. It'd probably help.
Another problem is probably Medic's facial expression. He don't look particularly... concerned that he's dying. Which, I mean, he probably shouldn't - especially since respawn is (probably) on, but the aim of the picture is to make us feel BAD for him.
But when he's just kind of looking at his bloodied chest like, "Well, damn. THAT happened. :/" it kind of takes away from the feel you're trying to establish. Try "OH MY GOD I'M DYING IT HURTS SO MUCH" despair or "And to think... I never got to tell Heavy that... That I..." sorrow, THAT'D really reel us in. His "... Damn, this sucks. Meh," face isn't doing anything for me, is all.
I HOPE THIS HELPED. Can't help you with anatomy and stuff but on the basis of >>5232, I have to say that I think the hand and the way it's grasping Medic's shoulder is fine. (That's just me.) Yang is definitely right about the arm, but I like the thumb placement, actually.
I'm not sure how I feel about the picture itself, though. Maybe it's just because I've seen WAY too many "KAWII DESUUUUU" Medics in my day, but that "uguuuu~" face he's giving Sniper really irks me. The scar on Sniper's back is a nice touch, though. Dat wily Spah.
Rest assured, I'll be keeping my eye on you. Continue doing what you do best.
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