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Oh. My. God. That was undoubtedly one of the hottest things I have ever read. I write a bit as a hobby, so I kind of knew I was asking for something somewhat difficult, but I did and I'm so glad I did, you rose to the occasion beautifully. I cannot sing your praises enough. I especially love what you did with the formatting, how the reader's reflections break up encounters with the individual mercs. It's not what I was expecting, but in the best way! I also really like the way you had each team member act sexually, they all felt true to character and each new paragraph had me wondering who would be next and what they'd be like. Sorry for the length, I just. Gah, such good writing!