Alright, I love you and I love Breaking Point, but this... er. I'm sorry, but the ALL CAPS QUESTION MARK EXCLAMATION POINT?! really musses the whole tone. I know you're going for panic, but you should be able to carry that across without ALL THIS STUFF?!, because your words should stand on your own. If you removed the THREE EXCLAMATION POINTS!!! and such, this still would have been nice and disturbing.