Looking for some concrit, feedback, suggestions, what-have-you for a fem!Solly OC I've been trying to put together. I was going to wait until a friend of mine had finished going over her file, but... somehow, I don't think there's going to be a lot of harm in posting it here before that?
Link to her file is here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1J6dAh00Nf-sj2vDdagNpSkqJs6RnyxFksLL8KOZEzLA/edit
Please, have at it. This is my first online RP character, and I want to make sure she's a strong-enough one to work with.