Some backstory questions first so I can figure out what sort of advice to offer:

1) Is it still 1968-ish in terms of the setting?
2) Does your Tits!Scout have 7 older sisters or older brothers?

Not too bad of a start!

Since a scout's job involves running everywhere, every day, I fetched a reference of female athlete physiques.

Side by side, you can quickly see you've got a bit of imbalance going in terms of proportions - your scout's top half is teeny compared to her bottom. Notice in the reference photo how shoulders always stick out further than the hips? And while their legs are muscular (dem thighs), they're still quite trim below the knee.

I also took liberty to put more weight to the pose. Remember if you're ever stuck, get a reference! Look at yourself in the mirror, take a photo of your own body, or resort to a photograph taken off Google Images.

Last thing was facial proportions, which I didn't really cover in the redline, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to have a closer look at Scootyboy's skull structure.

Hope that helps. Keep it up and let us see how you're going!

On the uniform side of things, the male Scout has his sleeves rolled up both to look cool in his own mind and to minimize the feeling of drag (whether or not the sleeves actually reduce his aerodynamic profile is an exercise I leave for actual physicists, but there's a reason most competitive running outfits are sleeveless).

The length/fit of the pants also make no sense to me. A quick GIS shows that running shorts are generally much more tight-fitting and not much longer than where the thighs might touch during running.

(Aside: Depending on the backstory, a female Scout might choose to wear a different uniform. Male Scout's is evocative of a baseball player's, but Little League didn't officially accept female players until 1973, so unless your Tits!Scout is wearing hand-me-downs it makes less "sense" for her to be in an identical outfit.)

>>1704
I can see how you mistake that for a gap. I'm so sorry about that. It was to be a fold from the vest, where her zipper would be. And the square is the starting of a belt buckle. But I really love the red lines though I am colourblind with red. I will try to fix what I can make out what you drawn. I hope I did this respond right

>>1705
Oh shoot! Is there a colour that would be easier for you? Let me know so I can use that if you need another "redline" in the future.

So here is a quick painting of the two coloured. >>1721 greens or blues are always better for me. thank you for the help.

This is sort of a WIP, but I really wanted to design a legit Pyro, and not fall into any of the fanservice traps (not that some of the fanservice stuff isn't awesome)...I have lots of ideas about how/why she ended up as Pyro, but I'm not really sure if there's a right place to share that stuff around here. Sorry, new to TF2chan, came looking for fem Pyro, lol.

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE
(DONT TALK SHIT ABOUT MY WAIFU)

I love this girl's Fem Scout design, because she TRIED to make it look like it was viable.

>Normal hairstyle, nothing that gets in the way
>Leotard + skirt; leotard's weird, but skirt is good
>High socks
>Comfy running shoes

This is doing it right.

>>1682

Didn't realize that comfy running shoes had heels.

Siiiiigh. Pose meant to convey dynamic action but looks generic, boring, and static, horrifically dislocated hips, balloon boobs that guarantee wardrobe malfunction, a mask that may as well not be there, clothes that seem to defy physics (is it one piece or two? What magic space material is it made out of that can be so form fitting and allow such an extreme pose with minimal wrinkling?)...

and the original picture of her in which i was fucking with my own style *barfs*

>>1544
Nyawh, cute!

Overall cute style. You have some anatomical issues going on with the legs in the first image, but I'm not sure on whether I should post a redline here or what.

Without a redline, I can at least tell you that her left shin looks way too short, and her foot twisted at what appears to be a very uncomfortable angle.

Hope that helps. Keep posting!

That looks like a barely prepubescent girl who wants to play ball with her older brother but none of them picked her to be on their team...which might be fine for a backstory, but not for present day, lean mean cocksure asshole fighting machine Scout, not even one who happens to be a young lady.

Every single one of your posts. I do love them with the fire of a thousand suns. They are fun and cute and did I mention I laaaav them? I think I did, but I'll say it again. They're awesome. (I especially like Demolaydee and Pyro and also your sniper. They look like they can get shit done.

long time no see, here have a doodle

This shit makes me all tingly as fuck. loving your art.

Well, I finally finished it!

>>1370
Nice. I like the lighting especially.

>>1370
"Engie, grill me a cheese?"

*chkchk doosh*

oh dear HELLO again

>>1332
Someone needs to make a model of Little Jack!

>>1444

Lil' fan drawing for you!
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