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No. 1569
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The face is alright and so is her torso. I agree with Perry in saying that her limbs need work. Her feet are so tiny and her legs feel like they're stubby, but that may or may not be the skirt's fault.
Also, when I look at her arms, the forearms don't quite line up with the upper arms. It's like they're not even connected. The problem happens right at the end of the sleeves, which tells me you drew the sleeves, stopped, and then drew the arms.
As a suggestion, I would say that when you draw, draw your subject without clothing first, to make sure their body is all alligned, and then draw the clothes on top. That would fix the arms (along with anatomy practise) and would also help the legs look less stumpy.
Does that make sense or am I just rambling?
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