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No. 1049
A different anon here this time. I really like your character design, but there's a few things you could change which would probably help your drawings look slightly more... well, for lack of a better word, right... So, concrit incoming.
>>1041
You've got your general pose for this one down pat apart from the leg on the right, which is twisting downwards unnaturally... If her leg was at that angle, her top of her foot would be facing us. As it is, her calf-bones would have to twist 180 degrees to accommodate that position.
Apart from that, some minor things, such as the clavicle (if present at all) should sit higher up where the neck joins the chest.
But you probably know that already considering your more recent work has improved a lot.
>>1042
Your overall construction on the Heavy is really good here! The only thing I'd really suggest (apart from one thing I'll mention later) is to either move her hairline down a bit or give her more at the top. You've got her looking down a bit so you should be able to see more of it, but it's not that big of a deal.
I think your problem with the Medic lies with her shoulders, not the shirt per se. You've given her quite a manly physique in that her shoulders are wide. If you look at her, and imagined her with her arms hanging at her sides, from where they are they'd just dangle there; if you look at yourself, as a girl your arms touch your sides. Girls naturally have thinner shoulders regardless of how built they are, so you might want to smoodge those shoulders in a tad, then the shirt won't make her look overly masculine.
>>1043
Looking good, except from one recurring problem.
BOOBIES.
It seems to me that you're having some difficulty drawing boobies. Might just be that you haven't drawn them in a while and are still getting used to it, but for my sake just let me ramble on here a bit. You know all those things you tutorials you read about "boobs are like water balloons" and whatever? That only applies to porn stars. Real boobs are like... Well, they're like flaps of skin filled with mammary glands and fat. At thirty-something years old, they're not gonna be perfectly perky or round. Quite the opposite. I await the day with dread. They're going to lie flatter than you've made them most of the time, and they're not usually going to be the same shape as you've made them. I think your Spy's are the right shape, but your Heavy's are going to be bigger + flatter, and your Medic's have been outlined funny to make them look bigger than the shape on your sketch. I- ARGH, I NEED MY TABLET TO SHOW YOU THIS PROPERLY. Can't describe what I mean when it comes to boobs. TOMORROW. If you've still got the will to draw after this huge fucking rant tomorrow I will find my tablet pen and redline for you. And it will be awesome.
TL;DR
Read it, I spent ages typing that you lazy bastard.
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