ONCE UPON A TIME HEAVY STUCK HIS DICK IN MEDIC'S BUTT AND JIZZED THE END
brb fapping forever
It's like a masterpiece.
I came buckets.
THIS FIC IT IS BEAUTIFUL
Brought a tear to my eye.
Amazing
happy that the chan is back up. goes to see if anyone uploaded some stories. TrollFic. dammit guys. reads comments. again dammit guys. i love lulzy porn stories as much as the next person, but c'mon guys. at least put some effort into this, this isn't even funny at all
^ Implying that this post is serious.
I cried at the end.
My favorite part was the part with the crash.
Beautiful. This shit deserves to be published.
Fucking masterpiece. Sequel?
i'm working on chapter 2 guys
I laughed, I cried, I came gallons.
I came with the force of a thousand suns, my body was not ready, avenge me with Ch2
tl;dr
>>8 I know, they didn't bother with grammar at all, what was this writer thinking? And why capitalize the entire story when you can put it in italics? I wont even begin with this story's complete lack of plot line. I mean really, this story is a train wreck that isn't even worth the time it'd take me to concrit every single mistake made. JKJK, I want to make sure my sarcasm is readable. Also: this story is a true masterpiece. I wish I could write this well.
It has a certain jejeune banality that resembles an amalgamation of Beckett, early Poe, and Dr. Seuss. The way you have salted and seasoned this work of fiction with homoerotic overtones, and yet shown the consequences of being a 'deviant' in their sort of society- as a young, straight, white female, it really REALLY speaks to me. It really does. I yearn for more, good sir and/or madam.
A kawaii fanfic or the concise history of TF2 fandom? You decide.
This is like life changing. At first I was like, "Oh this is ok..." then I was like, "He did what to his what!?" Now I'm like, "Oh shit, I shat my shit to this shitty shit."
I find this extremely easy to masturbate to.
So simple yet so perfect. Teach me your ways of writing!
brb writing thesis paper on the inner meaning of this fanfiction
oh god anon. You are my new hero for writing this .
oh anon, you are my hero for writing this . Please bless us with more .
Where's chapter two?
Your characterization is just... spot on. Amazing. Can't wait for chapter two!