I will SO redline for you, Fluff, darling.
<3

I don't think I have the energy for a running commentary, however. So hopefully you can interpret my lines without too much of my mindless prattling.

Okay, so, here are my red-lines.

I watched some of the video you used as reference (-blushes-) and one thing I noticed is that they were leaning into each other a bit more than how you've drawn them.

Pushing a pose can really bring out its essence, and I think this could use some more 'lean' to it. Right now it's mostly vertical. (I tried to just bring out the anatomy, but I think if you wanted to, leaning Rosso in a bit closer, and leaning Bleu back a bit would look ace.)

You might want to look into posemaniacs.com.
It's a great 3D resource for poses, and will help you understand anatomy, if you don't have access to life drawing.

>>213
Thankyou <3

I'll work on it tonight, if there's not much going on.

Haha, oh wow. I'll look forward to seeing this finished.

I watched some of the video too, I can't keep from giggling at the fact that the phone keeps ringing. Someone really wants to get in touch with them.

>>213
How's this?

It might be just me, but some things still don't look right to me...but I can't figure out what. I can't wait to color this :3c

I know I probably should've waited a little longer, but I colored it. I also made some adjustments to it beforehand. Oh god, I suck at shading >>

>>470
I like the shading. I can't shade at all so I can't really critique you on it but I like the improvements and the coloring. Red's face seems a little fat though... maybe it's just me.

So...uh...I drew another porn :D

Little man taste good, yes?

Drawn with no references. I'll leave it uncolored for the time being, just in case there are anatomy flaws.

>>900
Hm, how the hell is spy floating all crosslegged there? Not pushing all his weight into heavy's barely supportive and inhumanly strong hands, his thigh resting on such an incredibly flat plane. More muscle definition would be nice, instead of having a ridiculously smooth, undefined and blank silhouette of a body. The hands are fairly formless and rubbery, without grip or structure sam could be applied to the rest of the body. The upper arm is about two inches too long. The foot would look less unnatural if it were at some sort of angle. The ear would look better if it weren't shaped like a staple, spy would look better if he slumped in a more natural posture and wasn't so ramrod straight. The profile is shaped like an egg. Tighten up that scratchy linework.

Use reference.

and also

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>>905
Thanks...I don't think I'll be able to really work on it, until my summer vacation, though. I'm really burnt out from today's assignment right now, and I'm gonna be swamped with homework for the next couple of weeks. I will work on it, though.