Sollys tounge and engis mouth make me fucking lol. haha

I'm literally speechless.

Gee, Engineer, you sure got some interesting lips there.

No man. Y'all are just jealous :awesomeface:

>>2766
umm...those arent his lips
he's opening his mouth

>>2768

It's, uh...

It's very hard to tell.

>>2769
have you tried clicking on the thumbnail?

>>2770

lol dont get hostile now :3

>>2770

I did.

And I didn't notice it until I looked at it full size.

I'm sorry, I think you really need to go back over it. It doesn't look right at all, and I think I see what you were trying to do, but I can't unsee those lips.

>>2771
No, let them. I'll go make the popcorn, it'll be a good time.

>>2773
Can you make kettle corn? Thats delicious noms. Ill bring the soda :D

>>2773

Oh, geez.

You should really delete this and put this in the critique thread. That or the people here are gonna have a hayday on you.

I wish more people replied :p
>>2771
I'm sorry, I just get overworked when someone says something silly about my artwork
but don't take it the wrong way. I'm always okay with critiques and jokes. They both help me improve my artwork in the future. The reason y I was so sensitive is cause I spent a lot of work on it and almost trashed it
I hope I didn't give u a bad impression :(
>>2772
It's alright :D
well, keep in mind this is my first porn drawing ever, so I'm open to suggestions. So what part doesn't look right and what do I need to fix or improve on?

>>2776
what's the critique thread and where can I find it?

Let's see...

The arms bug me a little. They look a bit too round at the elbows - try bending your own elbow and you'll see that is has very defined angle rather then a gnetle slope - and just seem a bit oddly placed without a background. Solly's arm also looks oddly proportioned, as his forearm is a lot shorter then it should be. It probably requires repositioning so the elbow is placed higher and the bend is more noticable.

As everyone else as said, Engies lips just look wrong. They're far, far too big (I'm assuming that you added the stubble and left the white ring around his mouth as the lips).

Engies chest looks like...well, like it's been drawn on. It lacks depth and doesn't seem like it really is a part of his figure.

The critique thread is always at the top of the page - it's titled "Bootcamp for Drawfags: Late Night Edition". Can't miss it. Hope you improve upon this, since there is some potential there.

>>2777

Yeah, that particular detail kind of... jarred me a bit. I felt it warranted a comment.

Usually, if you're going to draw porn, being able to draw the human body is a requirement. And yet I still seem to draw it. Heh.

>>2779
wow thanks for the critique!
it really helps me a lot! :D
also thanks for telling me what the critique thread is. I've been wondering y that thread is always at the top I AM A FAGGOT HUMP MY RUMP

>>2780
wow drawing porn is a lot harder than I thought, especially tf2 porn
so what particular detail r u talking about?

>>2782

The area around Engineer's mouth.

I realize it's supposed to be simply where there's no aftershave, but it makes him look like he's got big ole' Sambo lips.

I SMELL UNDERAGE B&

honey how old are you? honest answers ok

>>2761

I'm almost afraid to fullview this now.

>>2787
DO EET, EMZY.

Totally worth the five seconds of your life. Esp. the tongue.

I hope you get unbanned soon. I want to see more of this hahahahah

hon hon hon

>>2761
this is just surreal

Even though you were banned, maybe you can still see this.

I ♥ Engie's expressions and sweats in your pic. Even though "the others" don't like it here, I also think that focusing on your strengths PLUS weakness in drawing helps you get better...other than just fretting over the negative things when you draw to grow...so really amplify the expressions. I think you have that going for you.

(YOU SHOULD KNOW BETTER)

>>2795
and don't forget what a very delicate, unique and special snowflake you are. very important.

>>2796

☺

(USER WAS A SPECIAL MAGIC SNOWFLAKE AND VERY, VERY CLEVER FOR THIS POST)

dont feed it

This is all I can think of now.

Cannot unsee.

>>2816
Homan, just comparing the two gave me a good laugh.

>>2788

LOLLING FOREVER AT ENGIE'S '80' FACE
You're right, this is amazing

I fucking lost it at the arms.

GOLLY GEE PC TANNER

THANK GOD YOU MADE IT

I'M AFRAID I CRASHED MY CAR INTO AN OLD MAN AND NOW I HAVE TO RESIT MY DRIVING TEST AND SO MISSED THE FUN

hahaha oh wow

the tongue + ears

this is great

>>2855
he looks so frightened

Fucking saved!

... though not for the reason you hoped it would be.

And I thought nothing could gross me out...

oh fuck yeah it's wallpaper sized

I've seen this at least 8 times and I still can't stop laughing.

this creeps me out but i'm lolling aaaaa my mind

Jeezus christ I keep coming back to look at it

WHY GOD WHY

>>2948
I do the same and every time I just lol I AM A FAGGOT HUMP MY RUMP

>One day I accidentally threw it away in the trash,

And you should have left it there.

Oh, jesus christ. I laughed so hard. I read all of the comments before I looked at the picture, then saw the picture, and the former ensued.

>>2968

Don't listen to this guy, I'm glad you found this again. Especially since it makes me laugh every damn time I look at it.

>>2970
I agree this is wonderful

are those buttcheek ears

oh god, I think they are.

This is beautiful.

>>2761
The longer I stare at it, the funnier it gets.

I showed this to my straight male friend. He thinks it's hilarious.

ohhh this is a glourious new discovery

Engie doesnt have eyes on his head, his eyes are his nipples :3

>>3041
Man, don't tell me things like that. You know I won't be able to unsee them. ;_;

Upon looking at this again, I think my favorite part is the kissy-lips ears.

Holy shit I don't think I've ever laughed this hard at porn in my life. Oh my god his tongue... and the pecs aren't where pecs are supposed to be... and is that a nipple in the middle of Engineer's chest?

This brought a tear to my eye. It's the most beautiful hand drawn porn I've ever seen.

if it wasn't so terrifying it would be good.
Provided that you actually worked on it more.
And uh, learned what elbows are.

Study anatomy.

>>3132

>>3149

Finally, someone else who isn't an asshole.

I hope Wim is a better artist than all you artfags someday.

Keep drawing, please!

>>3169

Yes, do keep drawing

I gotta see this

>>3169
>implying that you expected a small or nonexistent number of assholes and that said assholes would spare this horrible travesty against art, god, country, and humanity from any criticism it might require, regardless of whether or not it was the artist's "first porn art ever"

DAMMIT PEOPLE STOP POSTING HERE