I DEMAND MOAR.

Proportions. Anatomy. Reference.

>>909
Agreed.

>>909
Concrit: awesome when it's either constructive OR criticism. Pretty useless in this form.

>>932
This

>>932
Forgive me, I was too tired to type out and spell out anything substantial. I'm still pretty out of it so I apologize for the quality of this crit.
The torso is too short. Generally you want to follow the heads rule, one head length from chin to nipples, one from nippes to belly button etc. refer to
>>>/fanart/1993
for further enlightenment. The muscle definition, while present especially in the silhouette of the figure, is pretty flimsily rendered, refer to the previously posted image. I find it helpful to work with reference, if you can't find the exact pose you're going for, use multiple images. His neck feels really thick yet his shoulders feel fairly narrow, the arm feels a little short and the legs as well. If your going for foreshortening, the knees need to be pointing more forward, not downward and they may appear a little thicker than when they are straightened out. Fingers, hand, check out this tut. I posted earlier for assistance with the structure.
>>902

>>938
and apparently I dunno how to refer to posts on other boards. Go to that anatomy guide thread and take a look.

>>938

I shouldn't even be replying to this because it'll end up as a BAW-shit rant but.. Thanks for crits. I knew what I was doing was horribly wrong but its my own fault for not working with ref and for drawing something out at 3am just to get the idea out.. and for for giving into peer pressure to post something on a board that wont meet up to the standards.

So, once again, thanks and I doubt you care but I wont be posting the edited picture since.. well.. I don't normally draw porn and this isn't a art tut thread. I'll just stick to my corner from now on with my fluff and weeabo crap and be done with it.

>>960

Hey, it's not because you're not up to the standards, man. You're pretty good from what I'm seeing from here! You just need to remember to draw more muscles and reference rather than keep to your corner. We want you to improve, and you won't improve if you stay in the same place drawing the same styled things all the time.

P.S. You should really post the edited version up. I can help with some blue/red lines if you need it.

>>962

Thanks~ but its coming out way too flat no matter what I do to tweek and alter it. Although, I keep getting that annoying poking at the back of my mind for the red lines..

Let me see what else I can do, gather up my balls from half way across the state and I'll get back to you. -_-;

Well, if you ever need red-lines, you know you've got a bunch of people here who'd be happy to help you out!

Definitely don't stick to your corner; I'm sure everyone would love seeing more from you! We're just stuck in our ways of concrit.

>>981

I hope this helps!