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No. 3432
Back and starting afresh. I must post something or I'll never get around to writing this at all...

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It was almost dark in what was currently being used as the lounge, just the flickering light of a small black and white telly and a few candles. Sniper could guess that it was the Pyro in there just from the candles, even if he hadn't been cackling through his gasmask at whatever he was watching as well.
"Move over a bit, wiil ya?" Sniper muttered, plopping himself down on the sagging sofa as well. "Been a shitty day and I've gotta sit down"
"Shmmph." Pyro grunted, shifting over to sprawl on the end of the couch.
The Sniper lay back too, sticking a hand under his shirt to check a healing scar in his belly. "Ah..." Damn thing still hurt.
"Phmmph mmpht?"
"This? Got hit by a stray bullet a few days ago. I did get it looked at, but I reckon Medic's saving on medigun juice or something..." He rolled up his shirt and vest to see what was going on down there. The scar was raised and a painful shade of purple, and no doubt it had been irritated by all the climbing Sniper had done to reach hiding places that the other team's sniper wasn't already aware of.
He didn't have time to get out of the way when a big gloved finger shot across and poked his stomach. "Pht's sshee..."
"Ow, get off!"
As Sniper nursed his molested wound, Pyro drew back with an apologetic mumble. He fumbled with the collar of his rubber suit. "Yhrr mrr mh pmmsshy, thrr."
The Sniper growled, "Hey, did you just call me a..." but was cut off in mid-complaint by what he saw. Pryro's skin, his neck melted into his collarbone, like flesh-coloured candle wax. Immediately, he saw the point. "Ok, mine's not too bad, really."
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>> No. 3433
Tease! TEASE! I have been waiting for this since I read the first pic, and cannot wait for more!
>> No. 3437
Oh you cannot leave us hangin already! Please continue :)
>> No. 3438
FINALLY!
>> No. 3452
I literally squeaked with joy. Hurry back!
>> No. 3517
I delurk to politely request MOAR.
>> No. 3524
Ah! Moar please. So eaaggeer.
>> No. 3532
THAT'S IT?!?!
>> No. 3539
Thanks for the demand! Appreciation is wonderful, I'm tapping away as fast as I can on my little iPhone until the 'net on my big computer gets working.
Thank goodness for Google Docs.
>> No. 3551
iPorn. I wrote a lot of this update on the bus, making sure there was no one peering over my shoulder.
The next lot might get written in college if things get boring.

--

Pyro nodded in encouragement, gesturing towards the confused Sniper.
"Ok, it's you show me yours and I'll show you mine, right?" Sniper asked.
The gasmask bobbed up and down again eagerly as Pyro quickly unzipped his suit. He took it literally of course, he always took things literally. Thick rubber gloves still on, he shoved up his grubby red vest to show off a triangle of scarred skin framed by the suit's zip. It looked like some sort of foodstuff, Sniper tried to suppress the mental image in case it was a food he actually liked. Pyro stood back for a moment, candle and television shadows darkening the textures of his scars.
Biltong, that's what it looked like. Sniper shuddered.
It was his turn now, apparently. The maimed creature reached towards his shirt now, and Sniper had to bat him off. "Yeah, ok mate, I get it..."
It was best to play along with the Pyro's whims. Usually, he was harmless enough. Just childishly determined with adult strength to back it up. After making a quick check that no-one else had dropped into the lounge, Sniper gracelessly stripped off his shirt and vest.
Pyro liked scars. From his own experience, he was well aware that the affect of fire on people led to scars. But how did they get there, when did they go away, and did other people scar like he did? People here didn't bother to heal burns like that, they just took the faster method to a healed body. He was pleased to see that the Sniper had a few good old wounds at least, mostly just pale indents and thin lines standing out against his tanned skin.
"Hey, hey, whoa..." Sniper backed against the couch as Pyro reached for his belly. One big hand was tucked under his waist to hold his in place while the other bunch of rubbery fingers poked at his most recent scar.
"Hddn'mph srrn yurrs phphur," the Pyro explained.
It took Sniper a few seconds to work out what the guy had said, distracted as he was by the inquisitive groping. "Sure, but you've seen 'em now, and they can't be different from anyone else's."
There could be nothing further from the truth! Pyro knew that every injury left a different mark. Everyone's were different; the Soldier was known to exercise with his shirt off, showing several indented bullet scars; the Demoman had that missing eye; he'd even found a big whitish patch on Scout's knee before the kid had woken up and waved a bat at him. Engineer was the only person who seemed to tolerate Pyro's fascination, he was usually willing to reveal his rather unimpressive collection of small work-related marks. Eventually, Pyro would know exactly what everyone was hiding under their clothes, and surely at least one of them would have burns like he did. But for now, a fresh scar was fine too. He asked Sniper to just keep still for a bit, shoving him down on the cushions to make it more obvious.
Sniper had been pushing back playfully until then. The firm, gloved hand on his chest warmed him down to his groin and inspired an instant urge to spread his legs a bit, to get comfortably exposed. Oh god, this was the wrong time to get aroused. It wasn't like it didn't -hurt- as well, which made arousal feel even more out of place. He froze, muttering a particularly serious, "Ok, that's enough..." but the other mercenary wasn't listening. Pyro was absorbed in his 'study'. His gloves were still on since he wasn't interested in actually feeling skin, just pulling and pressing around the scar tissue to see the difference from healthy flesh. Sniper felt a little like he was being used without his opinion on the matter counting. He knew he should have been annoyed, and he was... but he was also embarrassingly turned on.
The process carried on unrelenting and the assassin's mind began to drift. Why worry about it, Pyro wasn't aware how he was feeling, right? And it wasn't like anything else would happen. He wasn't attracted to this creepy and almost pitiful man, but somehow attraction and even personality wasn't mattering after several long seconds. It was a familiar feeling, although he couldn't remember ever having experienced it at all.
>> No. 3556
*steeples fingers* It appears that I've arrived at the right time. I am most pleased with this update, most pleased indeed.
>> No. 3557
Ohhh yes, scar fetish. Just give in to it, Sniper, just give in.
>> No. 3558
Oh man, I like where this is going.
>> No. 3559
"And it wasn't like anything else would happen."

muahaha. PROCEED. I like this.
>> No. 4013
Ooh I like this a lot!
Keep writing!
>> No. 4045
I demand an update! And I refuse to sage!
>> No. 4052
No update, no peace!
>> No. 5047
bumping so this is now before its predecessor and we might get more iUpdates.
>> No. 5081
Ah, I'm embarrased about my writer's block. College, Expo/SCA sewing, people digging up my house, it's all making me too dumb to write.
Will try harder.

Sage for nocontent.
>> No. 5455
omg yes! I love pyro and him fondling sniper is even better.
>> No. 5743
I hope you do get a chance to continue this soon, Ciepher. I really like your characterization of Pyro (the line about him being childlike but with adult strength is standout), and I'm curious how much Sniper remembers. In conclusion: MOAR.
>> No. 5964
'a fresh scar was fine too.'

...A pyro is fine too. <3
>> No. 7905
>>And it wasn't like anything else would happen.

Apparently not. Oh yeah, bumping this for posterity and (hopefully) an update. Remember....
>> No. 7927
Awwwww. Disappointment, it buuuurns.

Yes, God yes. Update pretty please when you feel better and have more free time to do so.
>> No. 8039
>>It was a familiar feeling, although he couldn't remember ever having experienced it at all.

Oh ho ho ho ho ho ho.
>> No. 8507
>>3432

I miss you.
>> No. 8784
D8 Another bump for more, please!
>> No. 8786
>>3432

COME BACK! Or at least, someone link up the first part so I can read it obsessively again.
>> No. 8835
:(


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