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No. 5385
Old thread died out so I'm startin' a new one with this shiney new update. I hope you guys like this! I wanted to get this out quick...

link to old thread >>> http://www.tf2chan.net/afanfic/res/3313.html

(thank you cashewwwww :] )

--

Quiet. The RED Spy had accompanied the Sniper back to his van and sat him down. The humming in the shooter's head had not ceased. He took in a short breath and fixed his eyes upon the assassin who pulled a chair in front of him and sat.

Nothing was said for a long stretch of time.

Sniper didn't feel awkward, quite the opposite. He was comforted by the familiar presence. A thin stream of smoke came slowly from between the Spy's lips after a long pull from his cigarette. His mouth curled into a smile that the Sniper misread. The Aussie had assumed too much about his comrade. Assumed that his caring was genuine. Assumed he would be like /him/.

The masked man leaned forward, his body stiff and at the same time fluid. Sniper equated the man to a snake, smooth and very aware of his own physique.

"What 'appened in ze battle today, mon Sniper?"

Sniper was unaccustomed to hearing the accent come from another source.

The sharpshooter wasn't deterred when the man advanced, looming over him, looking down upon him as if the Spy were a cobra ready to sink his fangs into his prey, wrap his body around the Sniper.

The bird didn't move.

"Eez it because you are still shaken from your captivity?..." the Spy smiled in the same gentle way the BLU Medic had smiled at him, "None of us really know what 'appened to you though, mon ami. The Soldier did not care to ask you anything." He shook his head shortly, eyes locked on the Sniper's.

"They were messy. A bunch'a amateurs." Sniper answered back.

"So you escaped? By yourself?"

Sniper didn't respond.

"Someone helped you didn't they..." Spy sat down next to him on the bed, "don't worry, I won't tell anyone..." he exhaled a long puff of smoke and waited for a response in vain. The Sniper was inside his head now, unwilling to respond, becoming introverted again.

"It was the BLU Spy wasn't it?"

The Aussie turned, eyes going wide.

"O' come now, do you think I am stupid? Ze watch I found on you-"

"I stole it from the fucking spook at the BLU base-"

"You killed him today," Spy enjoyed the tiny flinching reaction he had elicited from sturdy Sniper. The snake was enjoying himself.

"Leave."

"You do not want me to go, because I remind you of 'im."

Sniper's breathing hastened, as a sexual fantasy swirled around in his head. He began to wonder if the RED Spy felt like /him/. If his body would give in the same ways that the BLU Spy's had. If his sweat dripped down his body in the same patterns or if his throaty moans would make the Sniper's cock hard...

It was the shooter who closed the distance between himself and his RED comrade. He shoved his tongue inside the man's mouth, felt himself falling backwards onto the bed, the weight of the body atop him pressing down on him entirely. Small whimpers escaped from the Sniper's mouth as he felt the Spy grab his erection through his zipped pant and give it a rough rub.

He couldn't move, didn't want to move. He wanted the Spy to tear his clothing off, sink his teeth into his muscles, make his badly stitched wounds bleed. He wanted to be fucked. The Sniper's arms lay limp at his sides as the Spy tore the clothes from him, digging his fingers into the wounded skin as he pulled the shooter under himself.

The assassin left his clothing on, pulling his hard cock from his pants after inching them down slightly. He would give the Sniper none of what he needed. No tenderness, no gentle touches, nor soft skin against his; only the pain he desired.

It came slowly at first, the searing ache that made the Sniper arch up from the mattress, as Spy's two saliva slicked finger entered him quickly. This is what /he/ felt; the feeling of inescapable pain the BLU Spy must have felt as the Sniper prepared him for sex. If it was the only way he'd ever feel close to the man again then he would embrace it.

The RED Spy was forceful with his movements, his body felt heavier, stiffer. He seized the shooter by the throat, negligent of the black and blue that painted the skin from still relatively painful wounds, and forced the head of his cock inside the man.

Had he, the Sniper, ever hurt his deceased lover this badly? Regret, and unspoken apologies began to run through his head as he recalled everything he could have said or done to the man that could have hurt him this badly. Physical pain subsided and was replaced by mental torment he'd brought upon himself.

The man above him pulled out quickly. And for the moment, as brief as it was, the hand was removed from his bruised and torn throat allowing a long breath of air to rush into his lungs. The gulp of air ended in a strangled sound as the man pushed into the Australian again. The hard cock felt slicker, colder.

There were no words, no sweet whispers or charming questions. No "mon cher" or "mon ami" or French ramblings that made him hot with want. This was hard sex, like two animals that'd stumbled upon each other and decided to fuck for the sake of fucking.

Sniper felt himself open around the man as he slid in and out in long strokes, fragments of pleasure woven in the pain he felt all over. Without warning the man flipped him over onto his stomach and pinned his face into the blankets, leaving the Sniper to struggle to his hands and knees.

Spy continued to ride the man until the small moans that escaped his throat were followed by louder cries from the man beneath him. He grinned widely, grabbing the submissive man's neglected cock.Each firm stroke drove the pleasurable streams of feeling farther up Sniper's stomach.

He remained on the edge of orgasm as his body shook, muscles straining under the rhythmic pounding. He squeezed his eyes shut as the man fucking him moaned out loudly, cumming inside the Sniper with one last thrust.

Spy pulled himself from the body below, sticky semen dripping from his half-hard dick. Maybe if the Sniper said nothing the man would not notice he hadn't experience release. Muscles flinching, he eased himself down to the bed, laying on his stomach, breathing in the very feint smell of a human he could barely remember.

"Roll over, now."

Sniper slowly but obediently moved to lay on his back. The Spy looked over the sharpshooter's hard flesh, that stood proudly in the air, slit lightly wet with pre-cum. He studied the Sniper's body, stopping at his flushed face and half lidded eyes.

"'ave you not enjoyed yourself?" Spy smiled gently, sitting back on his calves, clothes disheveled.

Sniper's head lolled to the side, becoming aware of the open wounds on his body where stitches were carelessly pulled and ripped.

"Eet eez usually frowned upon," the assassin said gently, as he seemed to wipe his hand down his face, "but I think it will make you feel much better."

Sniper had never seen a Spy disguise its form before so closely. The man's color changed, his body, the look of his face under his mask. Suddenly he was staring at his BLU Spy. The BLU Spy was stroking him slowly, laying his head on his thigh as he looked up at the man with a slight toothy smirk.

"Eez zees better, mon cher?" the assassin purred as he took the head of of the Sniper's cock into his mouth slowly. The Aussie jerked up into the man's mouth quickly. It was impossible to hold back the waves of pleasure that followed his orgasm with that face staring up at him. He shuddered, crying out loudly, stomach muscles clenching as he dug his fingers into the masked face drawing cum from his cock.

As he opened his eyes he was met with the smirking face of the RED Spy, who looked victorious, grinning.

Sniper laid his head back, embarrassed and angry with himself.

"Eet eez alright to miss him...just remember, I can give this to you again if you ask."

The prospect only made the Sniper more upset, he could not admit what he felt to himself but he was truly heartbroken. He asked the man to leave, mumbling an order and pointing to the door. The RED Spy did not hesitate to abandon the man.

--

The long day that followed was filled with the burden of focusing while the steamy heat rose from the gooey mud field. Is there ever a fuckin' day where this place doesn't seem like hell, Sniper thought to himself as he routinely scanned the terrain.

Neither his team nor their enemy made a move. Neither of the energetic little runts ran on to the field in their uncontrolled zeal. Waste of fucking time, although it did keep him busy. Kept his mind off of things...

A long rest was needed to really get his head straight. Gather his thoughts, perhaps come to terms with things that he could not change and move on. Maybe visit the Medic to get himself checked out. He'd ask for some drugs, see if the German would do him a favor. Or he could lie, say he was in pain all the time and see what that got him. A stay in the man's ward or a bottle of pills, it really didn't matter.

"Somethin' to take the edge off..." Sniper mumbled to himself as he stood at the door of his van, unlocking the knob and giving it a sharp turn. Rifle in hand, he entered planning to drop off his equipment before visiting the doctor.

It was he last thing he remembered before breathing in a deep lung full of chloroform.


--

A stream of slurred curses followed Sniper as he came to. Dizzy, nauseous, tied up, lying on his side....and seeing things. It always did end in him bound up in some way. At least his imagination was trying to put him at ease with the image of the BLU Spy seated next to him, looking peeved, wrapped up in a similar way.

"Get up already." the blob of BLU snapped at him.

Sniper stayed in an awkward reclining position. He felt himself pulled up into a seated position, still swaying back and forth on the bed of his trailer. In nearly the same exact position, in the same chair, sat the same RED Spy from the night before. A small smile played at his facial features.

The Sniper quickly realized he was not imagining the BLU Spy beside him. He was very real and appeared annoyed in his composed manner; his smirk bent upward more to one side and his eyebrows arched unevenly.

Sniper couldn't care. He was so fucking confused, freaked out, and...happy. The fact that he was knocked out and bound up by his own team mate was irrelevant. The fucking BLU Spy bastard was alive. He wanted to grab the man and embrace him, tell him how happy he was alive and didn't have a giant fucking hole blown in his chest. He could only muster up a short, confused, "You..." that came off a bit more aggressive than he meant.

"Yes, alive no thanks to you," BLU Spy replied bitterly. His RED counterpart sat, musing over the exchange between the two 'lovers'. He carefully and very deliberately placed a cigarette between his lips. The flick of his lighter caught the pair's attention, as the tied up Spy looked at his opposite almost expectantly. RED Spy's dark eyes flicked to the man across from himself, then to his own lit smoke. He stood, flipping his cool silver case open, Sniper's eyes fixed on the man whom he trusted less and less by the moment.

The snakish assassin plucked a long cigarette from its tightly packed resting place and set it between the bound Spy's parted lips. He flicked open the lighter and held it inches from the end of the cigarette. BLU Spy leaned forward quickly only to have the tiny flame snuffed out before him with a snap.

His brows furrowed in frustration as he looked at the man dressed in deep RED who stood above him, smirking.

RED Spy was the first to break the silence, "'ow long 'ave you two been meeting in secret?"

The BLU assassin's eyes fixed on the lighter that was dangled in front of him, lips curling around the long white tobacco stick in his mouth.

He'd never talk, Sniper thought surely to himself.

"A month and a 'alf," Spy nodded his head from side to side in thought, "geev or take."

The sharpshooter's mouth feel open slightly. He watched the man next to him lean forward again trying to catch the flame that appeared, beckoning him once more.

RED Spy retracted his arm, "And what 'as ze Sniper told you?"

"Nothing important really, only zat 'e enjoys burying his cock inside me."

"And 'ow many times have you... fucked?"

"Only once-"

"WOT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING-!?" Sniper burst out.

Spy continued, "But we screwed like cats in heat..."

"STOP TELLIN' HIM THINGS YOU FUCKIN' IDIOT!"

Spy growled back, "I WANT MY CIGARETTE LIT."

Sniper sounded his disbelieve in a loud exhasperated grunt.

RED sneered, "I would wager you would tell me 'ow long ze Sniper's dick eez if I asked-"

"Seven and a 'alf inches-"

"SHUT UP ALREADY YOU FUCKING BASTARD!!" Sniper interrupted.

"But you would already know zat on good authority, wouldn't you, mon ami," BLU Spy didn't break eye contact with the RED assassin as he let the light catch the end of the smoke.

Sniper's heart felt like it'd fallen into his stomach. The Spy had seen him with his teammate, fucking around, and from what it sounded like, out of context. The only reason he'd ever wanted to touch the RED Spy was to feel /him/ again. As hard as the sharpshooter tried, he could not forget the man he felt something for.

The man in control murmured to his counterpart in French, //"He is good, I'll admit that,"// he nodded to the Sniper, who seemed uneasy with the language barrier, //He must be, for you to wander into such an obvious trap. Did you think I didn't realize you were alive? Do you think I can't spot a dead ringer when I see it?"//

"Wot is he saying?"

The BLU assassin ignored the Sniper, opting to continue the conversation is his native tongue, //"What is your end game?"// the murmur came as he sucked in a short drag of his cigarette.

RED leaned back stiffly, body tense and lithe all at once,//"To kill the both of you if I don't receive a good enough reason to let either of you live..."// he motioned to the both of them, cigarette in hand.

BLU Spy's eyebrows knitted together in thought.

//"Can you give me that reason?"// RED asked.

//"I love him."// came the answer.

It was worth a shot, to win over the man's emotions. Like the situation could get any worse as it stood, and it was really the only good reason he could come up with at the moment. The man's eyebrows arched upwards at the admission, giving short choked laugh that ended in a cloud of smoke. The RED Spy looked at his comrade and laughed shortly again.

//"HIM?"//

Somehow the BLU Spy did not share the same amusement. He sat stone-faced as ash fell from his smoke. RED Spy chuckled.

//"You're lucky I have a soft spot for doomed romances."//

"SPEAK ENGLISH!! FUCKIN' HELL!"

The cobra looked at the bird, sneering with bared teeth. He took a long pull from his cigarette as his eyes narrowed studying the Australian.

//"Do you think he feels the same way about you?"// his eyes flicked to the enemy Spy, sneer still apparent.

Well, BLU Spy thought, he had wooed the man, betrayed him, and left him to be beaten in a basement for a good two days. He did deserve to be shot, really. He stayed silent, attempting to work his hands from the ropes.

//"Why would he need you when I can be /you/, a better copy even."//

Spy was still touchy about what he'd seen. The Sniper under the man, being mercilessly fucked, scratched and torn, crying out. He'd left when the RED Spy flipped the man face down and rammed into him. He couldn't watch anymore. It had only been eight hours since he had 'died' that last night; was the Sniper really that loose or had he moved on that easily?

BLU Spy watched the man glide over and untie the Sniper's hands, murmuring in a low tone, "You can leave if you'd like."

"Wot about him..." The Aussie motioned to the BLU Spy.

The only response was a shrug from the masked man standing over him.

Sniper remained in place, squeezing his fists open and closed.

"Do you really care what 'appens to zees man? 'e 'ad you captured and tortured. I'd consider zees justice, wouldn't you?"

For a moment the point seemed to be considered. The sharpshooter looked over the tied up man but remained, unmoving from his spot.

"Nah I think I'm where I need ta be, thanks mate."

RED nodded, //"At least he doesn't want you dead, that's a good sign."//, he smiled at the Sniper, //"He knows if he tries anything, I'll kill you. I think he would miss you after all..."//

He was really starting to piss the BLU assassin off.

//"Since I'm in no mood to see the bushman cry, why don't we come to an agreement yes?"//

The Sniper was already working the ties from around his lover's wrists, paranoid and frustrated at not being able to understand either of the men for the most part. He searched the BLU Spy's face for any indication of what the other was saying.

//"Show me what your 'love' looks like and I'll let you both live for the moment,// He spoke in a taunting, condescending tone.

//"How..."// the freed assassin asked reluctantly with no desire to actually hear the man's request.

RED Spy breathed in the last bit of his cigarette, flicking it to the ground and grinding it under the tip of his shoe into the floor, //"Fuck him."//
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>> No. 5386
fuck i am so tired....why did i stay up so late...i hope this is still goooood
>> No. 5387
Paste, you're a beautiful person. If I wasn't shy about commitment I'd marry you! This is just sublime.
>> No. 5389
>>3

fj4fj53gqhgsdahgfH*OG$Hj4

<3
>> No. 5390
honhonhon <3
>> No. 5391
oh no, oh no, oh no. My heart died a little, feeling sorry for BLU Spy and Sniper! But I am glad they are both alive at least. :C

I can't tell you how anxious I am for the next update. That RED Spy is a devious one.
>> No. 5392
Oh you... you friggin'...

I love you.
>> No. 5393
OH MAN OH MAN this just gets better and better I swear

cannot freaking wait for the next bit.
>> No. 5394
Paste, have my children. Have them all!
>> No. 5396
I felt so sad for RED sniper I don't think I could fully enjoy the REDs sex rofl D':
BUT OHHHH SWEET RELIEF I KNEW IT WAS A DEAD RINGER. I am just so into this story lol. It's beautiful <3
>> No. 5401
Oh my god this just gets better. Oh Blue Spy!
>> No. 5404
Ohhh, there's hope for Sniper and BLU Spy yet! Let's just hope RED Spy doesn't screw it all up.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH PASTE, THIS IS THE BEST
>> No. 5405
I cannot tell you how much this makes me happy. I cried SO HARD when Sniper shot Spy in the last section.
I can't tell you how loud I squeal with joy when Blue Spy was actually alive. SO MUCH JOY.

You played with my heart, you did. AND I LOVE YOU FOR IT
>> No. 5406
He couldn't watch anymore.//"I love him."//Oh my, I feel really bad for BLU Spy :'(
But yeah, at least the bastard is alive. That was a beautiful update.

Thank you, Paste!
>> No. 5408
I AM A HAPPY SOUL.

Very happy soul indeed.

Please. Continue.
>> No. 5409
these comments...i feed off of them. I'm so glad i snuck online before work.
>> No. 5410
I love you, Paste. MOAR PLEASE! It's so good.
>> No. 5411
Eeee THIS IS GOING TO BE THE BEST DAY EVER!

I love waking up to wonderful things like this.
>> No. 5414
Well, shit. I am so fucking excited by ALL OF THIS THAT I'M LOOKING AT.
>> No. 5415
OH, YES. YES. YES. YES.
>> No. 5417
Oh God More!
You want us to beg for it? We will beg!
>> No. 5418
I'll get the popcorns!
>> No. 5419
This fic is the talk of the town between me and my friends. We live for it. Please go on.
>> No. 5421
WAIT WAIT WHY DID YOU END THERE. F5 F5!!!
>> No. 5428
Pft... RED Spy's such a perv. I love this, and am really happy for the update.
>> No. 5429
I almost cried with happiness.
Can't wait to see the next update.
>> No. 5435
ohgod stupid nitpick ahoy!

Wait, the title's supposed to be "My little snipe," yes? Then it should either be "Ma Petite Bécassine," (in which Spy would be calling Sniper a female) or "Mon Petit Canardage." Canardage is apparently a male snipe.

FFFF SORRY I'M BEING PICKY ABOUT IRRELEVANT THINGS. Also, this fic is awesome and I love it (and you).
>> No. 5438
>>27

]:< I DONT KNOW FRENCH I JUST PRETENDED.
the next update, you are not allowed to read it. IGNORE DEM WORDS.

(Sage for bein' da author and bein' a bitch)
>> No. 5442
(i hope everyone realizes i was kidding on post 28)
>> No. 5449
Do I smell voyeurism? I think I do...

This is just such an excellent fic. It gets me hooked, and keeps me craving for more, like a monthly comic book. Only it's not monthly. And there's porn.
>> No. 5450
>>29

I hope you realise we're waiting for more...
>> No. 5451
Holy plot twist batman!!

I enjoyed everything about this. Keep going!!
>> No. 5452
yay! he's alive! ^.^
>> No. 5453
Dude.

SPIES.

MUATHAFUCKIN' SPIES. I am so mad and turned on and scared and turned on again. Angry lonely love sucks.
And do spies.
>> No. 5462
My heart...I'm stuck between "YES, they are both alive" and "Baaaw, he LOVES him" and "FUCKING RED SPY!"...god, please more D:
>> No. 5464
I finally got caught up with this, and good Lord, is this fucked up.
>> No. 5465
>>36

ill just assume that you mean "awesome" fucked up and not "WHAT THE HELL" fucked up.

one more part before this goes on a bit of a hiatus of sorts...i think...i dunno...dammit...
>> No. 5468
>>37 HIATUS?! NO! BAD! HIATUS = BAD! We need more of the epicness that is Moi Petit Becassine!!!
>> No. 5469
I WISH YOU COULD SEE MY EXPRESSION RIGHT NOW PASTE

SO ELATED
SO ELATED
>> No. 5478
.... whatever you want in this world.
you can have it.

Just please make the next piece just as beautiful as this piece before it's hiatus.
<3
>> No. 5479
I-I thought Spy was dead... you... you evil bitch... I cried so hard for nothing... god, I am so emotionally wasted right now. I'm going to go cry in the bathtub and wait for the next piece.
>> No. 5482
>>14

My reaction exactly. I was so afraid you were going to try and be all poignant and tragic, and then I kept reading and my life was made meaningful again <3
>> No. 5484
D:

Goddamn Spahs!
>> No. 5571
red spy wants to make a porno out of sniper and blue spy !
can't wait for the next part
>> No. 5576
>>44

Is this anon right? I hope he is. In any case, paste, stop being such a cocktease and get to the forced intercourse! Love you, dear.
>> No. 5598
FORCED INTER-COURSE! FORCED INTER-COURSE! FORCED INTER-COURSE!

... not as good a chant as it sounded in my head.
>> No. 5599
>>46
naw, naw, it's catchy. I like it.
>> No. 5633
>>46
>>47
Yeah, it's got a ring to it.

sage for no help, other than please god more.
>> No. 5652
I think my favorite part is all the different plotlines but how you consistantly keep the characters together. I do have one irk. After a month and a half and easily betraying Sniper Spy loves him? I mean, it's sweet, but highly unlikely. I understand he risked his life to save Sniper, but it still seems odd that he'd admit love and actually save him after only a month and a half. Of course, I haven't fallen in love so I can't say from experience. I just always thought it would take longer than that.

tl;dr story is awesome I demand more
>> No. 5663
>>49
Under duress, things can happen pretty quickly, is all I'll say.
>> No. 5670
i think this needs an update, like tomorrow :], according to how many comments we've accumulated
>> No. 5680
-seconds like no tomorrow-

-sage for commenting twice since it's last update-
>> No. 5681
-sage for commenting twice since it's last update-or.... not? D= wtf?
>> No. 5684
>>49

>"It was worth a shot, to win over the man's emotions. Like the situation could get any worse as it stood, and it was really the only good reason he could come up with at the moment. "
I was trying to imply he said it just to save the both of htme...JUST SHUT UP AND FAP/BAW/DAW.

(ive taken your criticism into consideration and i am reconstructing the next part to be less mushy)
>> No. 5687
>>55
NO YOU KEEP THAT MUSH DAGNABIT!
D:
>> No. 5688
>>54
>>55
Save the Mush! It's an endangered quality!
>> No. 5690
Joining in for Team Mush. it's believable, in those sort of situations especially, and more importantly it made me d'aawww! actually it'd still make me d'aaww if he tried to be all "PFF, NO. I WAS JUST SAYING THAT. STUPID."

oh spah u so tsundere lolol
>> No. 5693
>>49
I understand your point, but remember that Spy was visiting Sniper long before that, being disguised. That could make it more than 1.5 months, at least for Spy.

>>54
Please keep the mush! :C I believe it looks just right in there.
>> No. 5696
>>58
that's so true, all excuses of "trying to gather intel" aside there was totally a crush at work there. though who could blame him because holy god cutest Sniper ever. this might sound lame but this Sniper seems like the sort who'd be easy to love. which of course just makes Spy that much more of a dick for betraying him, jeez Spy.
>> No. 5704
>>54

It's not mush that was bothering me, keep that in it's fine. The love thing is just a random irk of mine, but I see where you're coming from with that.

But by all means, do continue, I enjoy your writing.
>> No. 5706
>>54
What?? No! Leave the mush in. :(
>> No. 5708
My vote is for mush as well.
Go team mush!
>> No. 5709
Please keep the fluff, pwease!
>> No. 5715
OH MY GAWD MOAR! leave in the fluff too, i dont mind it but omg continue sooooon
>> No. 5718
Would it be possible for someone to link to the fanart for this?
>> No. 5719
I've been lurking here for months now and I just want to say this is my favorite fanfic of all <3
>> No. 5720
Guys, just let the author write it their way..
it's going to be good not matter what
>> No. 5722
>>49

Pardon me, could you tell me what rulebook you're working from? I've always wondered how long it takes a human to fall in love.

Stop watches or calenders, you can't /measure/ feelings.

Paste, write it how you want it. These are your characters and AS FAR AS I KNOW scientists haven't proven time has anything to do with love.
>> No. 5723
I think we should fight about it more. The PORNO people on one side, the FLUFF on the other, maybe we assign colors and the fic could be placed in a briefcase in some basemen-

...wait.
>> No. 5724
>>69
Pfff, you made me laugh.
Aaaah, this fic. I love this fic. HOW I love this fic! I say you write it however you want, Paste. I know that me and at LEAST a few others will be happy no matter what direction you take this story.
>> No. 5725
I WANT PORNO AND FLUFF. IT CAN BE DONE.
>> No. 5728
>>69
You fuckin' rule.
>> No. 5729
>>69
I love you.
>> No. 5731
>>69
Oh fuck, milk in my nose...

anyway, I think I would be a fabulous doctor, I'm German afterall
>> No. 5738
FFFF. i could print this fic out, crush it into a fine powder, and smoke it. :I

MMMMYEP.
>> No. 5740
i thought there was an update. Please sage, thank you.
>> No. 5744
Update tomorrow i swears.
>> No. 5751
HAIL PASTE AND ALL HER LABORS for producing fin ficcery.
>> No. 5753
>>71

Agree! Now, can we get more? Please?
>> No. 5757
>>77
GOOD.
>> No. 5765
Oh Lawdy. 77 /is/ a glorious number. First CV and now Paste-fic. I needed this after my grandma died on Sunday. Thanks TF2chan.
>> No. 5766
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAARRRR PASTE!!
>> No. 5777
I'm F5-ing like no tomorrow!
>> No. 5779
Is it tomorrow yet?
>> No. 5794
antici
>> No. 5795
i dont know if i can hold out till a minute before midnight... ahh
>> No. 5799
GIMME A COUPLA HRS. it's 6:24 pm est here so like around 8 ill post.
>> No. 5804
SYNCHRONIZE PORN WATCHES
>> No. 5805
PORN WATCHES ARE SYNCHRONIZED
>> No. 5811
Hurr, I'm only commenting again to see what time my post says so that I know what time to expect an update, my time.

God damn, I'm addicted to this. sage for no update.
>> No. 5812
IM SORRY! IT'S COMING. SAGE FOR ME BEIN A FUCK LATE FAGGOT.
>> No. 5813
it's okay. we still love you anyways :]
>> No. 5815
Agreed, we can wait patiently... *sharpening pitchfork*
>> No. 5816
Paaaaste! I have to go to bed! Give me a good night story!

Sage for me being an asshole
>> No. 5817
Sorry again guize. GAWD I SUCK. I HOPE THIS WAS WORTH IT.

--

//"...What?"//

Sniper didn't need to know French to know from the BLU Spy's tone of voice that something was just not going right. The incredulous look on the assassin's face as he stared down the RED Spy, glaring, the first time the sharpshooter ever remembered the man looking this rattled.

//"The both of you,"//, the RED assassin began slowly as if the other man were an idiot, //" undress, get on the bed in whatever fashion you desire, and fuck each other."//

The RED Spy had no actual desire to see the two men go at it. This was a personal matter.

Two long weeks ago, as the RED Spy lay on his back in one of the long tunnels of the battlements, after having holes punched through his limbs, barely able to move let alone stand and walk, he swore that if he ever had a chance to catch and kill the parties responsible for his condition, he would.

And to say it was a coincidence that as he lay cloaked, nearly bleeding to death, that the RED Spy would see his BLU counterpart *delicately* carrying and *gently* placing the unconscious RED Sniper to the ground, was an understatement.

The RED assassin was sure he would be caught by the other undamaged BLU Spy, but was surprised to see his opposite more concerned with...other matters.

The BLU Spy's hand glided across the Sniper's bloodied head almost lovingly. And it was especially odd to watch the man lean his forehead against the Aussie's and murmur something in French that NO professional should ever utter in any language...

//"Forgive me..."//

Immediately after his utterance, his BLU bat-totting teammate made his way into the tunnel, passing completely over the body of the RED Spy as he sprinted yelling out orders to the BLU Spy who played it cool as he roughly picked the Sniper up and threw the rag doll body over his shoulder.

Further investigation was merited, the RED assassin decided as he dragged his body to, luckily, where the RED Medic was able to see him before his team abandoned the field.

It became wonderfully obvious that things between his Sniper and their Spy were much more intricate, filled with emotional attachment that one could liken to a dog and its owner.

RED Spy knew what love was, with a proper woman, at the correct time, but never let that relationship interfere with his job.

Fucking the Sniper was just a joke, and was quite enjoyable, especially when he became aware of the power he lorded over the man. That alone got him off, knowing he could completely control the human that so many on the RED team now respected ever since his 'heroic' return.

With certainty that the two idiots were in a relationship that was not only disgusting and abhorrent, but completely against every regulation set in place was delicious; He wondered how the offence "anally fucking the enemy" would be punishable.

RED Spy watched the two, Sniper still completely unaware of what was going on or going to happen as the BLU Spy placed a gentle gloved hand under his chin, a forced smile held to ease the tension from the situation.

The sharpshooter's eyes flicked over to the man who stared them down.

"Wot does he want..."

The Spy leaned in slowly and kissed the confused man, who immediately pushed back, eyes flicking from the face before him to the voyeur and back.

"Not fuckin' NOW-"

"You wanted to know what 'e wants..."

Sniper looked over to his RED comrade, a look of disgust and anger plastered on his face.

The cobra sneered, "Take all ze time you need, but you should know zat if I get bored I won't 'esitate to 'urt one of you, and I would much rather watch both of you awkwardly fuck each other..."

Before the shooter could spit back an angry retort and physically get up and go after the man, the BLU Spy let a small soft hushing sound escape from his lips.

"Geev him what 'e wants," it was a less than convincing argument, but the assassin was starting to feel very sexually frustrated. The taste of the man's lips still lingered on the tip of his tongue, and the sudden hot feel he was experiencing left his face burning and body tingling.

Sniper's eyes had drifted over to the RED Spy who mused.

"Do not look at him," Spy took the man by the chin and turned his attention, "concentrate on me..." he leaned in again, lips grazing the Sniper's, "on zees..." mouth opening slightly, tongue poking out, he took the Aussie's bottom lip between his.

Everything that related to the taste and texture of the Sniper made the Spy feel safe and warm. He wanted to take everything at a painfully slow pace so he could prolong their sex and satiate the aching hunger he had. Masturbating over the memories of the Sniper taking him could only be so enjoyable but the small hope of being able to have sex with him again kept his body hot with want, and made every orgasm seem that much more real.

Spy whimpered as the Sniper became more comfortable returning the kiss feverishly pressing his open mouth against his, sucking on the tongue that pushed its way into his mouth, the taste of cigarette smoke still coating the wet wiggling muscle. The Australian's hands gripped the Spy's jacket pulling him closer. Their bodies crushed together as one wrapped his arms around the other not sure of what to do first, the other sloppily ripping at clothing and only making the tangled mess more impossible.

RED Spy looked on, becoming bored and angry with the pair's comfort.

Sniper cupped his lover's erection as the Spy tried to sort out the mess with their clothing, fumbling with buttons as teeth and tongue went at his throat unrelentingly, sending hot sparks up and down his body, through his fingers and arms making him feel weak all over.

//"Enjoy him while you can, my friend. When will ever be able to have this pleasure again?"//

The BLU Spy ignored the baiting but noticed the Sniper becoming uneasy again. Vying for the man's attention, he pulled off his dress jacket and tie, lying back on the bed. Spy gently bit the tip of each finger, pulling his gloves off slowly, eyes locked on the Aussie.

Glove from one hand discarded, he splayed his legs and began to work his hand over his still clothed body while giving the other hand the same meticulous treatment, smirking playfully.

Sniper licked lips with the tip of his tongue, entranced by the movements. His shirt only took seconds to pull off, the few buttons left popping from their slots. His fingers went to the Spy's shirt as the man eyed his body.

Sadness formed as a lump in Spy's throat as he was finally able to see the damage of the abuse the man had taken while held captive. Long scars and marks that overlapped large dark bruised and scrapes ran the length of his Sniper's body. He still appeared a tad thin, and the stitches that were meant to hold the deepest wounds closed were ripped open or sloppily sewn back together. It hurt the most to see the hand shaped around it on the Sniper's throat.

The assassin didn't realize it but his hand had traveled up to the man's throat, encircling until the marks matched up with his own fingers. His heart sank until he felt a gentle grasp on his extended hand. The Sniper laced his fingers in between the other man's and smiled as he pinned the hand back, apply slight weight to the man's body as he leaned down.

Spy could feel lips at his ear as the man murmured, "They don't hurt anymore now." Sniper's hands fumbled with the BLU assassin's pants as he unzipped and tugged them down. Feeling the clothing fall completely from his body as his bare chest touched the Sniper's lightly as he breathed in and out, Spy began to involuntarily murmur in French, words and phrases that weren't foreign to the Sniper, just completely incomprehensible. He'd heard them all before and ignored them, but the RED Spy found them more interesting in context.

//"I've missed your lips on my skin, your tongue in my mouth...//

Sniper's mouth went to his ear working at the soft skin of Spy's shoulder as he shifted and wiggled from the rest of his clothing, pressing his erection against the other man's.

//"I want to feel you inside me. I've missed you being inside me..."// the BLU assassin groaned, eyes half lidded and voice filled with lust, still murmuring in another language lost to the man who was currently gripping both their cocks together and firmly stroking.

The RED Spy could feel his face flush.

"I have no idea...what the fuck you're sayin'..." Sniper said between gasps for air, "but don't stop...unh."

Sniper had to slow down. The Spy let out an angry growl as the fingers around his cock disappeared. The Aussie leaned over, reaching under the pillow behind the man's head, pulling a small bottle of lotion from underneath.

Spy smirked, "Got a beet lonely, mon cher?"

The Aussie merely rubbed the cold slick substance in his hand and shoved two slick fingers inside the man below. The assassin choked on his words and let out a deep guttural groan.

"That should shut you up nicely..." Sniper leaned down kissing the Spy's covered ear.

The situation was slipping from the RED Spy's grasp quickly. He found it hard to pull his gaze from the two as the Sniper slowly eased himself into the body below him that arched up. The BLU Spy ran his bare fingertips up and down his body as his leg was lifted over the sharpshooter's shoulder. Both their mouths hung open, as did the RED Spy's.

He watched the Sniper roll his hips, snapping forward as the Frenchman beckoned him harder and faster. The RED voyeur stared, angry with himself for the feelings of pleasure as he watched the scene before him.

The BLU Spy's head lolled to the side, eyes finding focus on his opposite's face. His smirk made the RED grind his jaw, but the next action pushed the man over the edge as the BLU assassin flicked him the finger, a wide victorious sneer growing as the Australian grunted and pounded into him harder, sounding close to orgasm.

The BLU assassin's eyes rolled back into his head. He became completely unaware of his surroundings... and the RED Spy who rose slowly from his chair and walked silently behind the Sniper. He was close, so close. The friction between their bodies caused the warm sensation to rise further.

The beautiful pressure from the body above the BLU Spy disappeared. Behind the Sniper knelt the man who held complete control of the pair. The RED Spy's palms pressed to the nude man's stomach and chest, pulling him against himself, as the Sniper awkwardly adjusted to the situation.

"Get the fuck off of 'im." The BLU Spy growled.

The RED assassin forced the Sniper's hips forward.

//"Are you still enjoying yourself..."// he kneed the sharpshooter in the back further driving him into the man below, who arched up and groaned, //"Do you still want to reach your orgasm?"//

The Sniper leaned back, trying to remove himself but only received another sharp jab into the small of his back urging him forward.

//"Do you want to cum?..."// The RED Spy hummed to his foil.

Sniper couldn't help himself. He wanted to continue, but this felt wrong. It felt as though he was raping the man below him, as the RED Spy coerced the movements of his body, forcing his hips into a rhythm. The knee in his back was becoming painful, and the pleasure Sniper found with each thrust made him regret ever pulling out.

The BLU Spy attempted to retort but could only moan.

//"You don't care who fucks you as long as someone is riding your ass..."//

Sniper watched as as the BLU assassin squeezed his eyes shut, trying to move away from him. The Australian wanted to turn and smash his fist into the RED Spy's face, and would have if the feeling of a cold, sharp metal blade hadn't graze against the skin of his back.

The marksman glanced backward, RED Spy sneering at him, prodding him with his blade while sinking his teeth into the rough bruised skin Sniper's throat. The sharpshooter's body lengthened as he avoided the knife, leaning his head back as the firm jaw locked around the tendon in his neck held him in place.

The BLU Spy finally opened his eyes, staring at the Sniper who was arched back in a lovely way against the RED Spy...who did not appear to be RED at all anymore. The BLU Spy was staring himself down, or more specifically the RED Spy cloaked in his color. The dominate 'BLU' dragged his tongue up the Aussie's neck, in a long, slow line, sneering. His intense gaze was unwavering.

In that moment the assassin's body shuddered, orgasm rolling through his body, unrelenting despite his anger. He dug his nails into the Sniper's jerking hips as he watched the Aussie's chest expand and contract, taking deep gulps of air as he slowly came down from his high, short little thrusts riding out the ecstasy of his completion.

The RED Spy uncloaked returning to his bright crimson color, a devious grin on his face, "So much for your love for 'im, /mon cher/." With a smug look of satisfaction, RED rose from the creaking bed, gently pressing his hand against a slight crease in his suit, smoothing it out.

The rickety metal door smacked its frame as it swung shut.

Sniper rolled to the side of the Spy lying beside him in bed taking in deep breaths. The Frenchman reached down beside the bed, pulling his pants to himself and fishing a cigarette from the little shiny case inside one of the pockets.

"Zat man deserves to be shot in ze fucking face..." He murmured, cigarette bobbing in his mouth as he spoke, lighting the end. He took a long drag and passed it to the Sniper who slowly raised his hand and took the smoke, gratefully.

"Wot did he mean when he said that..."

Spy of course knew what the man was referring to; the last comment made by the snake before he promptly left. The phrase rolled around in his mind as he tried to think of the best lie to tell the Sniper.

"I don't know."

It was weak, exceedingly weak, but in Spy's defense he was post-coital and hanging on to the tiny thread of pride he had left. If the Sniper had pushed the subject, he would have caved, would have told him he really did value the man as a friend...more than a friend...

But there was no talking, just peaceful silence.

"I thought I killed you." Sniper cleared his throat, tripping over the last few words. He coughed as he took the last drag from the Spy's cigarette flicking the ashes off.

Spy rolled over and smoothly sat on the Sniper's hips, taking the rough calloused hand in his, "Would you like me to show you where you would 'ave shot me?"

"Tryin' to make me feel worse about it?"

Spy shook his head, a small smile playing at his facial features, "Non, not at all," he said, studying the man's hand, "I want to show you 'ow good you are."

It was as if he found sport in making light of morbidity, the Sniper thought as he gave a lopsided smile. His hand was pressed to the center of the Spy's chest firmly.

"Right 'ere."

He could feel the light thumping of the man's heart from where his palm was pressed. A pleasant, steady beating beneath the warm flesh.

Sniper stared at his as his fingertips slipped down the sweaty skin. A smile pulled at the corners of his lips. He liked the way the Spy's muscles twitched as he dragged his fingers in lines up and down. His lover let out a long breath, soothed by the gentle touches that scattered in patterns over his body.

The long sinews in the Spy's neck were irresistibly tense, the Sniper thought as his nails grazed skin and fingers pushed under the slight edge of his mask, the flesh of the jaw underneath scratchy with stubble.

He began to pull his hands away until he heard the small murmur of, "Don't stop..."

The words sounded uncertain and confused the Sniper who kept his hands still as the Spy leaned his head down using the firm hands of the sharpshooter to drag his mask away.

Sniper's hands cupped the uncovered face that was made of smooth planes that ended in sharp angles. Skin was marred by small scars and marks of age, the flesh underneath his eyes was dark and made the blue eyes the Sniper had often overlooked seem piercing. His long nose slopped gracefully to a point. He rubbed his thumbs against the man's cheeks, staring.

"I am human under zees mask..." the Spy said in a low voice.

The remark was strange but hit a chord. Sniper had never really thought of the Spy as another person; he was an ethereal entity that seemed shapeless and nameless. But the sharpshooter was staring into the face of another human, a human with the same vulnerabilities as he, the same emotions...

Had the Frenchman told the RED Spy he had feelings for him?

Sniper's eyes stayed locked on the light blue irises the disappeared behind eyelids with each slow, tired blink from the Spy.

The sharpshooter couldn't bite his tongue before he mumbled out, "You're handsome." His face flushed instantly, embarrassed, wishing he could take back the complement that he would never live down.

Spy smirked, the mask rolling back down over his face. Sniper tried to quickly memorize, knowing full well he may never see the man under that mask again. With a sluggishness that denoted exhaustion, Spy removed himself from atop the Sniper.

"I 'ave to leave now..."

Sniper caught the man's wrist pulling at him, "It's too late to leave..."

"I can't stay, mon cher..."

Sniper smiled, his grip around the man's wrist unremitting, "Shhhh..."

Spy couldn't help but smile back, lying down beside the man, feeling warm arms wrap around his cooling body.

The Aussie murmured as he began to slip into sleep, smile still on his lips, "You'll be gone before anyone notices, I promise..."

Spy trusted the words of reassurance. The warm, sleeping body pressed against his was all he needed, though. The little voice in the back of his head told him that this was what he wanted.

He did not want to be alone.
>> No. 5818
to anon >>94 your bedtime story mahahhaha

enjoy!!
>> No. 5820
AT LAST

brb, reading
>> No. 5822
Okay, finished, and damn, paste, you're good, you're really good. I don't know if you had a beta do this or not, but I did catch some small errors and equivocal phrasings, things you could have caught. But they were minor, and did not distract from your overall work.
>> No. 5823
How... does it keep getting better?
>> No. 5824
Aside from Red Spy being a total ASSHOLE, oh man. I am so happy for Sniper and Blu Spy. I was totally cooing at the end. Paste, thank you for writing. <3
>> No. 5825
So... how DID spy survive? Dead ringer, or was the bullet blocked by something? If it was a belonging of snipers' that blocked the bullet, that would be sweet.

Also. I love you. I love your writting. This spike in sniper/spy fics is tempting me to delurk and post some art. Also. Did I mention, ILU?
>> No. 5829
Oh, paste, that was such a good story. I can't put into words how much I loved this bit (and the whole thing).
>> No. 5834
>>101

>"The man in control murmured to his counterpart in French, //"He is good, I'll admit that,"// he nodded to the Sniper, who seemed uneasy with the language barrier, //He must be, for you to wander into such an obvious trap. Did you think I didn't realize you were alive? Do you think I can't spot a dead ringer when I see it?"// "
tl;dr
dead ringer
>> No. 5835
>>101

ALSO PLZ DELURK AND MAKE ART. UNF.
>> No. 5837
YES! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! My god, I love it. WORTH THE WAIT! Aaaaaaaaah, I hope someone kills RED Spy. Heheheh. Aaaah. GOOD times. Love it~
>> No. 5839
>>98
i know there were some things....i just wanted to get this out quicker...i think i pressured my beta heheeheeeeeee

otherwise i think this part is one of my favorites.
>> No. 5840
Gosh, that was downright beautiful
>> No. 5842
Oh... my...

I teared up as soon as I caught the parallel at the end of this chapter. That was glorious! This is BEAUTIFUL.

Ladies and gentlemen, we have seen a spectacle tonight! No question! No argument!
>> No. 5843
Oh god!

I do have one itsy bitsy problem:

Coitus is vaginal penetration. "Post-Coital" was not the proper term.

BUT OH GOD!
>> No. 5846
>>109

BWAHAHAH i had people read this and no one pointed that out HAHAHAHAHA. this is what i get for writing while very tired.

<3 thankyou
>> No. 5848
5:45 AM in Germany, and I'm reading this Fanfiction.

Paste, I love you. You really can't imagine how happy you made me, the chapter was just perfect.
>> No. 5853
<3
>> No. 5854
>>111
Daw shucks...wow five in the am...crap man!
>> No. 5855
>>110

It's a surprisingly common mistake and it makes me giggle when I see it.

Just keep doing what you're doing.
>> No. 5856
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE YOU

The only thing was that I don't understand RED Spy's motives. Like, pretty much everything he did confused me. Why did he get angry when they did what he told them to do? ANON'S BRAIN HURTS
>> No. 5857
I love you.
So much.
for this.
>> No. 5858
I thought that the de-masking of the BLU spy was sexier than the sex.
>> No. 5859
>>117
Ha! I thought the same thing.
>> No. 5860
Oh, Paste, you are great! I /love/ the way you write and I don't want you to finish.

Also asdfhg BLU Spy is awesome.
>> No. 5867
Probably my favorite moment was when BLU gave RED spy the finger

Just curious, paste, are you planning to write any more, because honestly it could end there and be totally perfect.

NOT LIKE MORE WOULDN'T BE HIGHLY APPRECIATED!
>> No. 5868
hhnnnnnnnnng. ilu. ; ;
>> No. 5870
There are lines from this I would like framed on my wall so I can look at them every morning when I wake up and sigh.
>> No. 5874
I always get excited when I see updates from you D: and I'm never disappointed. Your writing is brilliant <33
I love the ending lol ;; its beautiful
>> No. 5876
I love thiiiis! Absolutely beautiful!

Some lines really pushed my buttons here.

Will there be more? Agh, your updates always make me wish for more but we all know this story can't continue forever. Bawww.
>> No. 5878
Damn am I late to the party! This is wonderful. I want to slow dance with the latest chapter.
>> No. 5879
HHHNNNNGGGGG. why did I decide to check this two mintes before I have to do go school? WHY!? DD;

Today is going to be a long day..
>> No. 5883
> 96
That was me :P

I AM PLEASED. Slept like a babe after this. Never stop writing Paste. One of my favorite fics ever. And I've read A FEW.
>> No. 5884
that wasn't RED spy's knee on Sniper's lower back.......
>> No. 5888
It was probably a mistake to read this before going to work. Now I'm all hot and bothered and my face is stuck like this: 8D
>> No. 5898
Glad you all liked it for the most part.
i dunno if this is the end but it sure is for a little while....at least for this fic.
>> No. 5899
HAHAHAHAHA ok, I LOL'd pretty damn hard when BLU flicked RED the finger... it just seemed so appropriate. THNAK YOU PASTE, ILU
>> No. 5901
I love you.
This. All of this. Yes. Epically, infinitely yes.
>> No. 5903
This makes me most pleased.
It was unexpected for RED to act that way, but I liked it.
And, might I add, very sexy de-masking scene. Loved it, loved it.
>> No. 5918
Read first half before school and second half after =D Was amazing. <3
>> No. 5928
sitting here in my History class reading this.....
ilu.
>> No. 5929
Gosh, this just keeps getting better and better.
>> No. 5940
The ending... Ohh god I love how it matched up to their last sexytime. Very well done 8D

And I agree that the de-masking was fucking awesome.
>> No. 5950
Oh my god, this NEEDS to be continued. With Red Spy being jealous and posing as Blu! <3
>> No. 5952
I dunno, I'm satisfied. I see no point in dragging something out that has ended well.
>> No. 5954
139
I totally agree.
Glorious ending, left me feeling incredibly satisfied.

Oh christ, I think I'm gonna have to illustrate this. It was just TOO GOOD.
>> No. 5956
I think I will end it here. Was gonna keep going a little bit more...but i think it is good end...plus you dont know if RED Spy is going plot against them and kill both of them! AHAH! not like i was PLANNING that or anything.....


....
<3 Paste
>> No. 5957
This was wonderful story but we have to accept that everything good has to come to an end always
>> No. 5967
fff. like anon above me said, it's wonderful and we have to accept that it's over, BUT I DON'T WANT IT TO BE.
flkss. but i love it either way.
>> No. 5976
HARUMPH.

I feel like you could still tie up some of the loose ends. DO they live happily ever after...?
>> No. 5979
i would hope.
>> No. 5981
I can totally accept that it's over and I think it was a beautiful ending.

...

Now I just have to be strong enough not to beg for more :)
>> No. 5983
if you guys can wait a while I continue this...i really do want to anyway.
>> No. 5984
>>140


PLZ DRAW!!! AHHHH!! I would love it if someone would draw a part of this. Emzy drew something already and UNF GAWD it was good....
>> No. 5986
>>148
...excuse me while i go cry in the corner

hahaha <3
>> No. 5987
>>149

WAIT FFFFF NOOO YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN. I KNOW U FOR REALZ!!! IT DOESNT COUNT BUT IT DOES BUT YOU KNOW!!! AHHHHHH! FFFFFFFFF NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>> No. 5988
>>148
>>150
Stop posting like a spastic retard this instant or I will turn this car around.
>> No. 6008
>>151

good! i didnt even wanna drive to disney anyway!
>> No. 6036
>>151
If by "Stop posting like a spastic retard this instant or I will turn this car around" you mean "Continue this delicious fic, you awesome person, or I will personally be very sad", then I wholeheartedly second the motion. If that is not the case, why so bitchy, owl tiem?


Paste - Basically every part of this is amazing....I lol'd, I baww'd, I raged, I came buckets - occasionally all at once - and whether or not you decide to end it here, well, it's your story and it's epic. But keep going anyway.

TL;DR write more go go go <3
>> No. 6038
>>153
Did you read the actual posts I quoted and responded to? Because I was quoting and responding directly to them.
>> No. 6049
>>154
I did indeed, and frankly didn't care, nor did I feel the urge to pipe up with a completely irrelevant stick-up-the-arse comment. Just, like, really man, there's no need to be a downer.

(USER WAS BANNED FOR THIS POST)
>> No. 6051
>>155
(Samefag, reminding self to just not bother and try to stop feeding trolls in future, even if they are very cute when they beg for scraps like that.)
>> No. 6052
>>155
Hey shithead, when a mod tells someone to calm the fuck down, you don't tell that mod to get the stick out their ass.

(pretend my modcode is making the ##MOD## show up because text boards are crazy)
>> No. 6089
You shouldn't force something to continue if it's got a good ending place no matter how many people "ZOMGMOARPLZ" it. Good endings are hard to find and this ending provides a nice sense of closure from the whole fic. = )

Just my cent.
>> No. 6090
Absofuckinglutely loved the de-masking scene. Poignant!
>> No. 6147
woah...i came back to all that up there and just woah.
>> No. 6513
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuu-

I loved this. It ended beautifully, and as much as I love this I think it is a perfect finish.

As many, many bawlers have said above me, flipping off RED spy made me LOLIRL. And the de-masking, and the parallels - T_T

Nevar stop brave Paste. We need you. I need you. You get the fluff perfect and the plot beautiful.

<333

(Minor bump just to keep this shit up on the first page. It deserves a stickying there.)


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