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No. 1111
So much wrong with it? What are you smoking? The only complaint this round is the accent, and with characters like Medic, Heavy, and Spy, it's always hit or miss with the readers. Actually... well, every single character in the game save perhaps the announcer or Soldier has an accent or quirk of speech (see Pyro) that are difficult to reproduce adequately in text. I didn't really think it detracted from the readability of the fic. It wasn't over the top. In fact it sounded just like him in my head -- especially the last line. *shrug*
Of course, setting Medic's dialogue in plain English won't hurt anybody's feelings any, either.
Either way, you got most of the issues from the last draft fixed, and I think you should be proud of what you've accomplished. It certainly satisfied me.
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