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No. 2493
>>8 Personally, I like to do it dry. But then again, I like it rough...
As for this fic, I have to agree completely with >>2. It's not that it's bad, no. It has promise. But, there are too many errors to read this smoothly, and the switch from prose to script really does confuse me. Get this beta'd from someone who writes here fairly often, and try again.
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