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No. 6726
Hoping this will meet the standard expected here! I tried my darnedest!

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“Shut the fuck up!” Scout let out an irritated snarl and beat his fist on the wall a few times. The noises from next door didn’t cease, nor did they even quieten. In fact, they may have even gotten a bit louder. He slammed his fist against the wall again, hollering out his frustration at the wall next to him. “I ain’t fuckin’ kiddin’, ya faggots! Cut that shit out or I’m’onna get my bat and knock yer fuckin’ blocks off!”
At this moment, Scout wished he had been born any class besides his own. The rooms that they were assigned once they made this base their home had been alphabetical: Demo was on the end of the hall, and next to Demo was Engie, and on Engie’s other side was Heavy, and so on. With this logic in mind, Scout was roomed between Pyro and Sniper. As much as one might think that frequent fires in the room next to him would be a problem, at least Scout hadn’t had a problem adjusting to that. It was Sniper’s room that was the problem.
Sure, Scout didn’t have much of a problem that being in this place with nothing but guys made the team a little prison-gay. In fact, having someone other than your hand to relieve yourself was pretty nice. He’d only been shagged by Engie since arriving here. Oh, and Pyro had given him a handjob once. He passed it off as him being a growing boy with still-raging hormones and everything. But Christ, some of the other guys here were fucking nymphos or something! And they didn’t have a goddamn excuse!
First Heavy and Medic were constantly going at it, and wasn’t that anything but terrifying? An enormous Russian man that dwarfed the moon and a homicidal German doctor. Scout wondered how Medic hadn’t been ripped in two by now. Seriously. Freaky shit.
Then there was Demo and Soldier. The apeshit insane American who constantly screamed at them for being ladies, spit flying from his mouth and face eerily in shadow by that helmet, was the lady himself. And that voice couldn’t just scream out the word ‘MAGGOTS’ during battle. He had been known to scream such phrases as ‘PUT YOUR BACK INTO IT, MAGGOT’ and ‘I WANT TO HEAR THIS BED HITTING THE WALL SO HARD WE’LL BE DEAD AND GONE BEFORE IT STOPS ECHOING’ during his romps with the Scot. Scout had heard a rumour that he even tried to hook up with Engie. This was before Scout had him taken, of course. He’d never let that crazy fucker take his fuckbuddy from him now. Fortunately for him, Soldier didn’t stick with Engie. You know what they say: once you’ve gone black, you’ll never go back.
Scout didn’t even know what was up with Pyro. Pretty much everyone in the base claimed that he’s come onto them in some way. Sniper had told him that Pyro once gave him head, but he didn’t get a chance to see the firebug’s face because the kinky fuck had blindfolded him. The dirty lanky Aussie had a bunch of burns that Pyro had given him too. A lot of them. Everywhere. It was because of this that Scout was glad, very glad that it had only been a handjob for him.
But the worst, the hands-down worst, was Spy and Sniper. While it was nasty that he could always hear Demo and Soldier and Heavy and Medic, they didn’t choose to fuck in the next fucking room over. That is why, tonight –morning, actually, Scout noted with a glance at his alarm clock-, just like most other nights they’re all Scout can hear. Grunting and moaning and clunking and speaking fucking Aussie and fucking frog. Scout wished they’d fight more often, because then they’d sleep in separate rooms and he’d be able to get some fucking sleep. His relief was always short-lived though. Whenever they fought, the argument was followed with make-up sex that was louder, more violent, and harder to try and sleep through. More of their gay-ass dirty talk too.
It was Spy’s fault, really. Sniper’s voice was always low and husky and it was usually hard to make out what he was saying –not that Scout was listening-, and the dingo-fucker was easy to ignore. But Spy. That fucking French faggot. Screaming out all that frog shit of his, sounding almost like a chick ‘cause of whatever Sniper’s doing to him. Scout doesn’t know a word of French, but he figures that ‘mon dieu’ and ‘je t’aime’ sound like Sniper’s doing something that’s gotta be real fucking good, with how Spy always says it.
“Fuck you guys!” Scout shouts, giving the wall a few more pounds before slumping down into his pillow in defeat. He sits up and yanks his pillow out from under Engie’s head. The Texan managed to sleep through all the noise those two faggots were making and Scout’s yelling. Lucky bastard. When his pillow was taken away, Engie just grumbled a bit, rolled over, and went still again. Scout took the pillow that he’d stolen from his sleeping Engineer and buried his face in the mattress, smooshing the pillow down on top of his own head. He hoped that the fluffiness of the pillow might block out some of the noise made by his inconsiderate neighbours. No such luck. “Fuck! I can’t fucking capture no fucking intel if I’m fucking tired, dumbasses!”
This again warranted no response or lull in the noises from next door. Scout was fed up. He pulled the pillow off of his face and tossed it at Engie. Engie unconsciously coddled it, pulling it close against his chest like he might a teddy bear. Scout snorted. Fucker’s cuddlin’ it.
He wiggled to the foot of the bed and crawled to his feet, hitching up his –actually, Engie’s- boxers which had been sliding down his hips and tugged his socks up at bit so they weren’t all floppy and awkward when he walked. He went to Engie’s overalls and stooped over, rummaging around in his lover’s pile of clothes for a moment. He gave a small noise of satisfaction as he found what he had been looking for. He pulled Engie’s wrench from the pile, and swung it lightly. He smirked. Perfect.
As he went to the door and yanked it open, he wondered briefly if he could knock that French fucker out by throwing a wrench at his stupid sneaky skull. Maybe he could even kill the froggy faggot and send him to respawn. Now seemed as good a time as ever to find out.
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>> No. 6728
Dude, /ama/ just opened up. If you're not sure if you're living up to standards, I'd suggest going there to prescreen.
>> No. 6729
More, I say!
>> No. 6730
>>6728
I figured there was no hurt in trying posting here. If it gets moved, then I'll know that I should have listened to Sonne I AM A FAGGOT HUMP MY RUMP
>> No. 6733
The fact that he is wearing Engie's boxers made me SO happy.
>> No. 6734
>>6726

Besides formatting issues, MOAR!
>> No. 6735
More Please
>> No. 6736
DEMO/SOLDIER
ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ IT.

GOOD VORK!
>> No. 6741
>>6734
What sort of issues would you like to see resolved? This originally had a bigger gap between each paragraph, but it sort of dissolved when it was posted. Thank you though. :D
>>6733
While my favourite is Sniper/Spy, because I'm conventional, I do thoroughly enjoy Engie/Scout. I hope to write more.
>>6736
They're always the ones who get left out of things, and they deserve love too!
>> No. 6742
>You know what they say: once you’ve gone black, you’ll never go back
This makes up for the redundancy in the first paragraph <3

>>6733
Seconding.

Overall I liked this = ) Short, simple, sweet and left me happy.
>> No. 6744
"once you've gone black.."

I think i love you a little bit.
>> No. 6790
Aside from formatting issues and a little redundancy in parts, this is great--keep going!

>>6733
I grinned like a mofo at that.
>> No. 6801
>>6742
>>6790
You two will be pleased to hear that I am working on some Engie/Scout stuff as soon as I finish writing a Sniper/Medic that I promised my boyfriend I'd write.

>>6742
>>6744
Hehe part of my reason for writing this was an excuse to use that line. I'm considering writing a Demo/Solly fic called 'Once You've Gone Black.' :D
>> No. 6810
>>6801
DO IT. NOW.
>> No. 6893
>>6801
Pleased is an understatement.
>> No. 6989
>>6810
>>6893
Haha well. I'm thinking of setting aside the one I'm writing for my boyfriend for later. I'll pacify him with a painting or some oral sex or something. He can wait. So as soon as I can distract myself from StepMania, I think I might have a short little Engie/Scout ficlet coming. I've got an idea, but of course I am always open to requests. c:
>> No. 6993
>>6989
I'm jealous of your boyfriend.
>> No. 7013
>>6993
for the painting or the oral sex?
>> No. 7039
>>7013
Not the same anon, but obviously the painting.
>> No. 7156
Ohh, would you look at that! I set aside StepMania for an afternoon and work on the Engie/Scout I’ve been yapping about during some down time between classes. What do I end up writing? Medic/Sniper! Sorry to everyone who was looking forward to that fic but I swear my hand started scribbling away on its own. To anyone who likes bottom!Sniper, enjoy. This is dedicated to my boyfriend.

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“Zhere is a vay ve do zhese zhings, mein Sniper. Und zhat vay is any vay but yours.” Sniper’s hands on Medic’s jacket were promptly swatted away, and he smoothed out the crisp white material where Sniper’s hands had upset it. These hands shot out again and groped at Medic’s hips, pulling the man closer.

With barely so much as a twitch in warning, Medic’s right hand came up to deliver a swift backhand to Sniper’s cheek. The Aussie released his grip and stumbled back one step due to the impact.

Quickly enough, the marksman had recovered and was back on the doctor again. Medic was pushed back so far that the backs of his thighs were pressed against the edge of his desk.

“C’mere, ya mongrel,” Sniper snarled, hands coming up to rip open Medic’s jacket, buttons going flying in all directions. His eager hands found the German’s red tie, yanking on it and pulling his head closer.

Sniper practically devoured Medic’s mouth, biting and pulling on his lower lip. It wasn’t until Sniper’s tongue plunged in to mercilessly plunder the man’s mouth that Medic reciprocated. He chomped down on the bushman’s tongue, until he tasted blood, and the man yelped and leapt back.

He stood at a bit of a distance from Medic, who took a step away from his desk. He straightened his tie and jacket with the utmost military efficiency. He brought his ungloved right hand up to push his glasses back up his nose and regarded Sniper with a chilled, almost bored stare.

Despite have just been smacked in the face and having his tongue bitten down on, Sniper was nothing but eerie grins. Medic watched as Sniper’s injured tongue slithered out, swiping over his dry lips and wetting them with saliva. Blood stained them crimson.

“C’mon, mate. Don’t be like that.” He crept closer to Medic again, but the German stood his ground. He stared into Sniper’s eyes, though he was impaired by Sniper’s sunglasses.

“I know you bin wantin’ this just as bad as me, luv.” He pressed himself against Medic once more, placing both his hands on the desk behind the doctor, effectively trapping him there. He leaned in close to the man, close enough to nip at his ear. “Bin itchin’ fer it all week, roight doctah?”

His hands went to the doctor’s coat again, pulling it open. Nimble fingers made quick work of the Medic’s belt. He then unfastened the man’s pants, then yanked them down his hips. They bunched up around his knees, and Sniper needed to change that. He squatted down on the floor and went to work on undoing and pulling off Medic’s heavy leather boots.

Before Sniper could see it coming, Medic’s hands shot out and fisted themselves as best they could in Sniper’s short brown hair. Sniper’s eyebrows rose in surprise, and he tilted his head up curiously.

“Wot?”

He was promptly answered by Medic’s knee bashing into his face. He tumbled backwards, falling onto his ass on the cold white something-like-linoleum floor of the medical bay. His glasses flew off and fell to the floor with a clatter. Flecks of piss-yellow glass littered the floor where the shades had shattered.

Sniper’s hands covered his face as he nursed his bleeding, probably broken nose. Blood spilled down his face and between his fingers. It ran down his chin and neck to get soaked into his red shirt. Wayward droplets marred the perfect white shine of the polished floor where they splattered, but Sniper didn’t have time to notice it or to care.

Medic grabbed Sniper roughly by the shoulders and lifted him up, tossing him at his desk. The lanky Aussie crashed onto the surface of the desk, letting out a shout. All of a sudden, Medic was standing over him, unbuckling his belt and yanking open his trousers.

Sniper gave a very low growl, and made a move to sit up. He finally managed to brace his hands on the paper-strewn desk and pushed his torso up. Before he even had a chance to get his bearings, Medic delivered another punch to Sniper’s cheek. Sniper’s head snapped back, his Adam’s apple trembling violently with his frenzied breathing.

When he tilted his head back up, Medic took in the damage that he had done without so much as a cringe. His bony knuckles had ripped open the skin of Sniper’s cheek, and what wasn’t bleeding and torn was gradually turning purple. His left eye was swelling to the point where he was having trouble opening it.

“Medic,” he hissed, making another effort to sit up. His voice came out slurred. Probably a combination of blood washing back into his throat from his nose and the nose itself. “Wot t’fuckin’ ‘ell, mate?”

Medic’s hands closed themselves around the Sniper’s throat. They squeezed, and the Aussie flailed around a bit. He clawed at the hands that restricted his breathing, but his struggles weakened as his energy drained rapidly. He was barely breathing.

“Gut. Cease zhe struggling, mein Sniper. It is mein hope zhat you are comfortable. Ve are juzt getting started.”

--

STAY TUNED FOR PART II.
>> No. 7158
>>7156
There were a few parts where sentence structure irked me, but otherwise this looks like fun = )
>> No. 7159
STAYING TUNED!
>> No. 7174
>>7156

*gasp* I WILL NOT TOUCH THAT DIAL!
>> No. 7177
>>7156
OH JEEZ OH ME OH MY

I like rape a lot more then I should. Please continue.
>> No. 7769
Hey guys. It’s been awhile. Sorry for the lateness. Here’s part two. Thanks go to PAPAYADRANK for being my wonderful beta! This is the last of this fic btw.

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“D’don’ fool aroun’, mate.” Sniper choked. He turned his head to the left and gave a shoulder-shaking cough, spitting mouthfuls of blood onto that oh-so-clean white floor. He collapsed there, his struggles weakening every second. The tendons in his neck were popping, straining under Medic’s powerful hand.

Once Sniper had settled down, Medic released his hold on the Australian’s throat. The man’s breathing automatically quickened, heaved breaths loud in the sterile environment of the medical ward. He guzzled down precious oxygen frantically, gasping out mixed curses and thank yous.
Before Sniper could ask ‘wot th’fuck wassat about?’ Medic grabbed him by his narrow hips and flipped him over face-down. Sniper let out a hoarse shout of protest and tried to push himself up and off the desk. Medic promptly took him by the back of the head, fingers gripping at his coarse dark hair. Sniper’s skull smacked off the table with a sickening crack, and he choked on a sob. Tears diluted the blood that now stained the papers and folders on Medic’s desk.

“You are making a mess.” Medic stated, gazing down at the Australian and the desk with a look of distaste. “I vill not be zhe one cleaning zhis up, Herr Sniper.”

Sniper offered no reply, instead lying on the desk motionlessly. Medic’s hands came down to Sniper’s hips. He gripped the marksman’s trousers and yanked them down. Being not very fond of doing laundry or taking showers, Sniper had gotten into the habit of wearing no underwear. It’s what he had done while working his last job back in Australia, and he saw no reason to change his habits. Suddenly, though, he regretted it. Underwear could have been one more crucial layer to hinder the Medic’s progress.

Sniper began to speak again, unintelligible through his sobs and bloody nose. As he made the slurred noises, he pushed himself up onto his hands and knees. Medic gripped him hard by a booted ankle and pulled Sniper’s leg back. The man went crashing down onto the desk once again now that his knee was no longer supporting him. He growled out a slew of muffled curses and he froze when he felt Medic’s hands on his bare hips, pulling up.

A light elastic slapping noise was heard as Medic tugged down his standard issue red boxer briefs. This noise shocked Sniper back into action. He began to thrash frantically, limbs flailing and hands scrabbling desperately for purchase on the edge of the table. Finally, his fingers found the edge of the desk, using it as leverage to try and push himself up. His shouts and curses are slurred and incomprehensible. They are also loud. They sound suspiciously like an attention-drawer in Medic’s opinion. Anyone who heard that screaming would get curious and come looking. Medic couldn’t have anyone barging in and interrupting this.

A crack to the side of the head with Medic’s fist silenced the Australian, and another smack of his face against the desk leaves him choking on his own blood as he tries to cry. His body jerks forward and he lets out a little yelp as Medic’s hand comes down hard on his ass, leaving an angry red mark. His hips are then gripped, bruisingly so, by the doctor’s strong hands. A scream tears forth as the German pulls him back hard by the hips, impaling the Sniper on his erection. Medic’s cock is thick and full and Sniper screams and writhes as if every little twitch of it inside him was tearing him apart.

He kicks his legs frantically, trying with all his might to do something, anything in retaliation. All that his struggles earned him was his torso and face shoved hard against the desk as Medic pumps his hips to push in deeply.

Sniper feels as if he’s about to be ripped in half. The howls of agony are riddled with curses and sobs and pleas for someone to help him. It is a wonder that none of their team members are hearing him. His voice breaks frequently, and hope seems lost as his protests turn hoarse as a result of his tortured vocal chords.

Medic knows that he cannot continue this for much longer. Sniper’s screams will ultimately attract someone’s attention. He does not want to have to face the wrath of his mutinous team. He does not want to face the heartbroken Heavy, who would not understand why doctor would do such thing, for doctor is good. Spy would’ve been absolutely murderous upon seeing his lover beaten and broken and violated in such a way. The rest of the team would act concerned, but really they’re be thankful that it hadn’t been them.

Yes, time for this little encounter was steadily running out of its metaphorical hourglass. The movement of Medic’s hips paused and everything was silent for a moment. Even Sniper’s cries died down with how overworked his throat was. The only noise that followed was a gurgling, dwindling whine.

The swift slice that Medic had delivered to the man’s throat caused him to give another body-twitch. Tendons and chords in his neck severed, and everything that he had spilled forth from him and flooded the desk. It overflowed onto the white tile floor.

Though his desk was a mess and he was dick-deep in a still-warm corpse, Medic let out a half-moan half-hiss. Until this point, his face had been blank. Like an emotionless statue, he remained stoic and indifferent. Slowly, as he began to thrust his hips again, his face ripped open in a grin. Ear-to-ear his widened and he continued to moan and gasp through that gritted grin.

His hips keep pumping and his noises steadily increase in volume. By time he lets himself go in Sniper’s rapidly-cooling body, he is clawing desperately at the dead Aussie’s hips and howling out his pleasure. When he pulls out, cum and blood leak down Sniper’s thighs, soaking into the material of his pants.

Medic wipes himself off on Sniper’s shirt, staining the red material lighter with pink cum-blood residue. Once he is clean, he tucks himself back into boxer-briefs and fixes his pants. Sniper’s body is the then picked up by respawn. It fades from existence, leaving only the blood around the desk, the bushman’s hat, and his shattered sunglasses as a reminder to the silence of the room of what had just happened.


Moments later, the door to the ward opened swiftly, slamming against the adjacent wall. Looking positively spooked and holding his kukri at his side in a tense hand, Sniper prowled into the room. His posture and movements were guarded, as if he expected the Medic to jump out from one of the shadowless corners of the room and rape and kill him again.

The lack of the German in the room only unnerves him more. He is unfazed by the blood pooled on and around the desk, and he only gives a small growl of disappointment when he finds his glasses shattered on the floor.

He freezes when he registers a scent lingering on the air. The room should smell like blood and sex and medicine, but it is overpowered by this other scent. One that means worse things than that his lover had just raped and killed him.

“Fuckin’ Spois... He mumbled, his nose crinkling at the cigarette smoke. He went to the corner of the room behind Medic’s trashed desk and bent to retrieve his hat from where it had fallen. He only had one of these at a time, after all, and it didn’t reappear if he wasn’t wearing it when he respawned. He straightened up and placed the hat back on his head. Taking a glance at the sorry pile of piss-yellow glass on the floor, he made a mental note to place an order for a new pair of sunglasses next time he had the chance. Couldn’t snipe very well with the merciless desert sun glaring him in the face all hours of the day.

First, though, he had a Spy to hunt down and slice open. He smirked, gripping his kukuri a bit tighter, knuckles going white. Fucking frog’s guts’ll look real pretty cut out of 'im and spread all over the place like party streamers.

--
THIS IS THE END.
Huzzah. I actually finished something! Excellence! A rare occurrence indeed, fellow faggets. Finishing a story is always an achievement for me.
Any critique is always nice and well I hope you enjoyed this.
>> No. 7772
Rape. Murder. Necrophilia.
ilu<3
>> No. 7775
wait, so... it was an enemy spah?

Other than me being dense, this was awesome. Though if it was an enemy Spy did he still have a relationship with Heavy? It seems that way unless that would have just blown his cover... eh, oh well.
>> No. 7795
>>7775
Awright so here comes me sounding like an idiot. I feel like I've looked everywhere to find out how to do the black spoiler box thingies, but I have yet to find how. Could you possibly tell me? I'd like to answer your question without spoiling the end for any possible readers.
>> No. 7796
>>7795
Just like if you were going to italicize a word, except instead of the "i" for italics, you put "spoiler".

[ spoiler]remove the space[ /spoiler]

and you get this
>> No. 7821
>>7775
Well I'm not entirely sure if this answers your question, buuuut it was an enemy Spy. And well the Heavy situation is like it is assumed or common knowledge or something that Heavy and Medic have a relationship, so the BLU Spy would have known about it. The part that mentions Heavy and Medic is him musing to himself about what might happen. Hope that clears things up.
And thank you very much for the tech help.
>> No. 7827
>>7821
m'kay, that answered it. Thanks~


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