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No. 3533
Hi there. My name is Sonnemelzen, and this is my first post (hope I'm doing alright) I've been lurking for a couple months, and since I already like writing and figured I ought to contribute something to a place that gives me much fappage, I wrote this. That, and I have a thing for submissive sniper. Tis my first erotic story, so if you could be nice, but truthful, I'd rlly appreciate it.

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The sniper wheezed and grunted as he struggled. The Aussie was in a dimly lit room, his hands and legs tied up with thick black cables, a ball gag stuffed into his mouth. The back of his head, where he'd been hit and knocked out, throbbed painfully. When he’d woken up, he’d found himself in this empty room, with nothing but an old, discarded BLU sign in the corner indicating where he’d been brought. Oh Christ, he’d thought when he saw it. He’d been captured.
He continued to struggle against his bonds, hoping that if he could break free he would be able to hide and ambush whoever came in. From there, he didn’t know what he’d do, but that wasn’t on his mind. He’d seen this before, teammates disappearing and reappearing dead in a ditch somewhere, there bodies ravaged and sodomized and a ball gag still in their mouths. It happened to their last scout, and before him, an engineer, but Sniper had always thought himself too clever to fall prey to such things. But when he woke up, and felt something round and rubber stuck his mouth, he broke into a cold sweat and nearly lost his head. He’d tried screaming for help, but with his gag, he’d only managed to produce to grunt and wheeze helplessly for several minutes. Since then, for what was probably an hour but felt like days, he’d been tiring his limbs by struggling relentlessly, tugging hard with his wrists and flailing his bound legs to and fro. All he’d managed to do was tire himself. As he lay their on his stomach, panting and his heart beating like a drum, he heard the door open with a long, whining creak. Light filtered in, showing a slim shadow that stepped in swiftly before slamming the door shut. Although it was dark, he instantly recognized that gaunt, tall silhouette.
“’Ello, sniper,” Spy said, rolling the last syllable on his tongue. “So zorry to have brought he here wizzout informing you beforehand, but I zhought zat might make you razzer…resistant.
“Spth,” Sniper growled behind his gag. Spy gave a small, malicious smile and walked over to him. He bent down, and with a gentle, gloved hand, stroked the stubble on his captive’s chin. Sniper, defiant and outraged, growled at this emasculation.
“You are c’est magnifique,” the spy cooed, rubbing his gloved thumb up and down the cleft in the sniper chin, then lightly stroking his cheek and running a finger through his short hair. “I ‘ave ‘ad many of your fellow teammates before, but zhey vhere all boys. You, mon ami, are true man.” The Sniper said nothing and tried to turn away, but the spy’s firm right hand held him in place. A feeling of revulsion was churning in his stomach as he was unwillingly stroked. Having been away from women for months, he’d developed a vague sexual interest in his other teammates, but nothing like this. This wasn’t romantic, he thought. This was fucking terrifying.
His fear became paramount as Spy lithely pulled out his butterfly knife and swung the blade forth adroitly, using a hand to hold Sniper still as he brought it towards his chest. Sniper gave an involuntary cry of surprise and tried to get away, but the skillfully-tied rope kept him in place. Spy took the blade and brought it gently to the hem of his shirt, running it slowly down and making a thin rip in the cloth. He’d already been stripped of his vest and boots, so there’d be no worrying about those. When the fabric was torn, he stored the knife back and ripped the shirt off the sniper, exposing his lean, glistening chest to the humid air of the room. Spy paused for a moment, admiring his prey with satisfaction. Yes, Sniper was a beautiful man, and certainly cantankerous enough to make things interesting. When Spy’s teammates learned that Spy had fresh meat from the other team, they would want to have to use him as well, but hopefully that wouldn’t be for some time, when he had had some fun with the poor man. Then, he undid Sniper’s belt, and, despite the Australian’s muffled protest, pulled down his pants, cutting the ends so that he could rip them off and keep the rope in place. After this, the spy stood up and opened a window, so he could more clearly admire the man. His legs were hirsute with black hairs\, and above his toned abdominals was a soft tuft of hair, obscured by a shark tooth necklace the man apparently wore under his shirt. To the spy’s utter amusement, he wore tight white underwear, a conspicuous bulge hanging where his legs met. “Magnifique,” Spy cooed, bending down once more and unhooking the sniper’s ball gag. As he lifted it away, Sniper coughed and wretched on the rubber that’d come off, and was about to yell bloody murder when the spy roughly jerked him forward by his jaw and overtook his mouth with a deep kiss. The Sniper tried to resist, but Spy be nimble and Spy be quick, his tongue swift and invasive in the man’s mouth. When he retreated back, he put a firm hand over the Aussie’s mouth, smiling as the man tried to yell behind it. With his unoccupied hand, he took his knife once more and began ripping his underwear, closely carefully avoiding his languid cock and balls…
“And now,” Spy said, “I vill have you.”
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>> No. 3534
also, preemptive apology for the grammatical errors. As far as I can see, there aren't the many, but I should've double check first, so, my bad :[
>> No. 3535
of fuck, I just made one in that last post. I need to get to bed...
>> No. 3553
MOAR SNIPER RAEP
I demands it :>
>> No. 3554
...go on.
>> No. 3555
You could really use a beta- you have some word repetition going on and some awkward phrasing every once in a while (not to mention occasionally forgetting words).

Also, more spacing and someone to check your French would be good. "You are c'est magnifique" translates to "you are it is magnificent", for example.

I would like to see more of this though. Do continue.
>> No. 3560
If you go into Helpful Stuff, there's a post of people who would be happy to beta. Eh it's on the second page, I'll link: http://www.tf2chan.net/help/res/675.html

I also want to say: I dig this, keep going.
>> No. 3563
>>6

Thanks for the advice, I realize now that I should have looked this over and edited a bit before posting it. The second part, hopefully, will be better polished and with more believable french (I always get French linguistic mannerisms confused with German). And there shall be moar. /Afanfic/ is sadly lacking in sniper rapeage >:]
>> No. 3570
Sniper whimpered helplessly and wiggled as Spy reached his hand down and took in his fingers his bare, uncut penis. Then, he began to stroke it very lightly, his dexterous digits coaxing it from its foreskin and into a hard on. Spy removed his other hand from Sniper’s mouth and quickly put the ball gag back into before he could protest, fastening it in with only one hand. With both his hands free, Spy came closer to the naked Sniper and began petting his chest and taut stomach, feeling his dark nipples and whispering to him how beautiful he was. Unable to resist and utterly emasculated, Sniper growled and looked away, trying to push himself into some mental sanctuary. But it was to no avail, he couldn’t ignore that deliriously pleasurable feeling that Spy so adeptly gave to him, even if it was forced. He tried to remain quiet, but it was just too good, and he gave a slight, involuntary moan as he was molested. The Spy smiled at this, satisfied that not even Sniper, a paragon of masculinity on both teams, could resist his touch. As he masturbated his victim with one hand, he took off his glove on the other and continued to feel the Australian up and down, enjoying the sudden shudder the Sniper had when their cold flesh met. He ran his hand over his muscled shoulders, down his arm, rippling with lean muscle and still bound behind his back, and to the crease of his ass, where he stuck his index finger for some amusement. Sniper bucked and gave a yell behind thegag at this sudden, invasive act, but Spy only chuckled lightly in response. “Mon ami,” he said, moving his hand to the Sniper's face and looking him in the eyes, “Zere ees nuzzing you can do. And besides, I ‘ave not hurt you. Why are you so rezzistante? I assume you are getting pleasure out of zis, judging by your moans and…impressive erection.” And it was true, despite Sniper’s feelings of shame and humiliation and his conflagrant, inexorable hatred of Spy right now, the moans behind his gag had become longer and more frequent, he felt an orgasm building up, and it felt wonderful. He’d been given hand jobs before, but never with this skill, never with such… affection.
After another minute of this caressing, Sniper couldn’t hold it back anymore. Spy seemed to sense this impending ejaculation, and sped up with his hand while he bent forward and gave the tip of his cock a light, almost playful lick. This proved to be too much, and Sniper gave a joint moan of ecstasy and humiliation as he came onto himself and Spy’s face. The orgasm lasted a long time, wave after wave of gradually decreasing pleasure and semen coming forth until both eventually subsided, and he was left feeling empty as a casket. When it was over, Spy stood up, and, his mask laced with cum, went to the door and turned out the light. Now that it was over, the true gravity of the situation seemed to hit Sniper, as well as his own shame and hatred of this rape. A tear came down from behind his sunglasses, and he shook as he began to sob. Oh god, he thought. He’d been raped by Spy. The Spy took his mask off, his face safely obscured by the dark, and gave the sniper an unseen smile.
“Zat is just ze beginning,” he said unctuously. “Zhere vill be much more, and from ze ozzahs, not just moi. Best get used to it, mate.” With this, Spy began to walk out. Just as he was about to leave, he turned his head so that part of his right profile was visible, and said, “Oh…do not forget. You are mine.” Sniper continued to cry after he left, naked and his hands and legs numb from being so tightly bound. Oh god, he thought. Spy’s teammates would rape him too? Spy was bad enough, buy he couldn’t bear the thought of being molested by a cocky Scout, or having to suck the BLU Demoman’s cock, or being plowed by the Heavy or Soldier. Christ, he thought, he was in hell. And it was just beginning.

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Well, there's the possible ending. Should I continue? Or does that work well as a way to finish it?
>> No. 3571
I vote continue :D

.....Please?
>> No. 3572
continueeeee....the world needs more (fictional) rape. I hate when people write rape that's like "oh noes, i don't like this- or, no i do. yay, go on, teehee!" rape has TEARS, and they don't LIKE it. So to finally see a genuine non-con rape story is a releif.

But once again, give it a re-read before you post it. There were a lot of errors- not too noticable, but still there.

...(pssst...also, it's really not 'rape' rape if he just touched him. that's more 'molestation'...)
>> No. 3575
I agree with 11, it wasn't really 'rape'

Still really good though, i'd like to see more. I'm always up for sniper/spy.
>> No. 3577
>>11
>>12

Eh, I don't know, if I was being fondled against my will, I'd consider the difference between molestation and rape kinda pedantic...
Glad to hear you like, and even though I feel kinda guilty about it, I agree with 11, we need moar rape. Pseudo-rape is annoying as hell in these sorts of things. Since you like, I'll continue with it, but based on the inchoate structure of the story so far, it'd probably go on for quite a long time...
>> No. 3578
Sniper being molested by the entire team is a yes for me.
Yes. Yes. YESSSSSS.
>> No. 3590
but you know we like when it lasts a long time :]
>> No. 3613
i like the.affection.it's weirdly nice to for once, have someone who plays nice but you know for sure it's not real.[or is it.oh ho.]
>> No. 3614
CONTINUE, WRITEFAG.
>> No. 3651
>>17
COMMENCE CONTINUING
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Spy came running back into the BLU base, the door closing and locking it behind him just as he did. He was stationed at Well currently, and had been busy all day in various acts of sabotage, subterfuge and espionage, in what turned out to be a futile attempt to drive RED out of the area. It hadn’t been an easy day. He’d been flayed by a Pyro, taken a wrench to the skull from an ornery Engineer, and had received various smaller wounds from stray bullets and explosions that had been going off all day long. It was 1800 hours, and both teams had called a ceasefire for a night, although that wasn’t likely to stop either of them from bombarding the other all night. He saw the rest of the team shuffling into the base, all of them exhausted from the day’s travails and eager for a hearty meal, some alcohol, and some well-deserved sleep, although that wasn’t likely to come with the noises of bombardment raging through the night. Spy sat down on a crate and lit a cigarette, taking a long, satiating drag of it. He smiled with anticipation. On most nights like this, he’d nibble on some of their rations before going to bed early so that he could wake up and sneak into BLU base before anyone else had arisen, business as usual. But tonight, he had something to look forward to.
Giddy as a child before Christmas, Spy’s teammates noticed he was unusually jumpy during dinner and quick to leave. Much quicker than usual, at least. This only meant one thing, which Medic iterated with a smile. “He has a new captive, ja?” And Medic, at least, wouldn’t let Spy have this one all to himself…
Sniper had attempted to all day to squirm out of his bindings, and when that proved impossible, to sleep. Spy had taken him to a back room and tied him up by his hands with a long rope that held him to the ceiling above. He feet just barely touched the ground, and he swayed back and forth like a bunch of wind chimes. The ball gag had replaced by something a bit more practical: a sock, stuffed in a wad in his mouth and held there by thick duct tape. With the first gag, he’d been able to moan and cough and even make some muffled noise; with this, noise was impossible. He’d spent the day in isolation, and experienced a whole gamut of emotions throughout it; from fear, to hunger and thirst, to hopelessness and boredom. His wrists burnt from being bound and from struggling, and his arms ached at being held up so long. His naked body was irritated by itches he couldn’t scratch, and his stomach was still covered in dried cum. But mostly, he felt miserable. This misery piqued acutely when the door opened and the Spy came in. “Ello, Sniper,” Spy said. He walked over and stroked the Aussie’s cheek. “I’m so sorry I was gone all day. Did you mees me? Oh wait,” he said, taking the tip of the tape and slowly beginning to peel it off. “Since I am feeling kind today, I vill let you answer.” Sniper froze up at this. Was Spy really going to let him talk? His first instinct was to scream for help. But then he realized that he was in BLU’s base, confined to a tiny room where no one who could help him would hear him. And besides, that would probably only get him Spy’s ire. And as much as he hated the French faggot, he didn’t want to get him angry, particularly when he was so helpless to his fury. So, when the tape was removed and the damp sock fished out of his mouth, Sniper forced himself to remain stonily silent. Spy waited for a few moments for him to say something, but got no reply. “So…nuzzing? ‘Ow stoic of you,” Spy gave a malicious smile as he came behind Sniper and roughly grabbed the left cheek of his ass. “I was so nice to you last night, mon ami, gave you such pleasure without asking for anyzing in return. And yet, you disrespect me with your silence. ‘Ow rude.” Sniper didn’t say anything, but his heart gave a sudden pulse when he heard the unzippering of a fly behind him. “I’ll give you an ‘Obson’s choice, zen,” Spy said, now running his finger down the button’s of Sniper’s spine. “Whezzer you like it or not, I will have you now. But if you talk, if you say somezzing, anyzing, I will use lube. Maybe even a condom. What will it be?” Sniper opened his mouth to speak, not keen on having his anus torn to shreds, but a vestige of his pride stopped him from saying anything. Was he really going to give up like this? Was he really going to prostrate himself to Spy, and give him the satisfaction of knowing he was broken, some kind of fucktoy he could make dance at his volition? No. Even if it meant a helluvalotta pain.
Spy waited patiently for half a minute, but the only sounds he heard were his teammates downstairs, and the whine of the rafter above, creaking from holding Sniper’s weight. He frowned at this, and gave a sigh. “Defiance vill not get you anywhere here, Sniper,” he said. “Zhe sooner you learn zhis, zhe more bearable it might be. Who knows? Maybe you’ll learn to like men,” The spy pulled his pants down, stripped off his vest and shirt, undid his tie and became totally naked, save for his omnipresent mask. “You will have to pay for zhis insolence, I’m afraid,” he said with a cluck of the tongue, as if he genuinely cared for Sniper’s well being. With this, he stripped off his gloves and began stroking his own cock. Sniper gulped, suddenly wanting to do nothing more than to start screaming and crying, begging for clemency and receiving it from the merciful Spy. But he wouldn’t let himself. Stiff upper lip, he repeated in his mind. Stiff upper lip.
Once the Spy had a hard on, he opened the cleft of Sniper’s ass and began to slowly push in. Sniper yelped as he felt himself being penetrated, and the pain grew exponentially as Spy push his entire cock into his tight hole. It was like he was being split in two, and there was no reprieve from it. He bit his tongue and his stomach lurched as Spy gave a sigh of pleasure. “So tight,” he murmured, as he began to come back out. He wrapped his arms around Sniper’s waist, binding the two of them together as he began thrusting in and out, slowly building acceleration despite the lack of lubrication. At first, it was like his ass was being put through a cheese grinder, but a sudden wave of pleasure countered the pain as Spy reached his prostate. In and out Spy’s cock came, creating a set of beats like a repetitive rhythm, a discernable pattern Sniper forced himself to concentrate on. He gave a cry as he felt blood, but Spy continued pounding away, his pelvis colliding with him again and again like the joints of a machine. Another minute, and the thrusts accelerated, and Spy began giving little pants, almost at orgasm. Sniper closed his eyes and tried not to think about his loathsome violation of his body, but it was ubiquitous, the pain in his asshole, the burning of the ropes, his body being yanked back and forth by Spy’s lusty undulations, until it was almost unbearable, until he was about to break down and scream…
“So,” came a sudden, thickly accented voice from the doorway. Sniper opened his eyes just as he felt Spy ejaculate in him, his semen pumping fruitlessly in wave after wave. There, in the doorway, were the BLU Medic, Demoman, and Heavy, all looking at the two of them with varying degrees of inebriation and horniness. “You haff kidnapped zee RED’s Sniper?” Medic asked with some amusement. “How bold.”
“And yeer having yer way with ‘im already? The demoman said with an inflexion of outrage. “Without even telling the rest o’ us whatcha bin hoggin to yerself?”
“I was going to tell you,” Spy said irritably, putting his clothes back on as they came into the room. Sniper gave a miserable groan.
“Vell, it look like leettle man has had turn,” heavy said as he approached. “But now, it time you share.”
>> No. 3654
Oooooh man, I like where this is going. Heavy, Medic AND Demo... it's a dream come true.
>> No. 3698
bump for bump's sake
>> No. 3718
There must be more. There must be, I say!
>> No. 3743
UPDATE TIEM! My goodness, this and a whole other story in one day. It's the writefag equivalent of giving two handjobs at once!

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BLU’s Demoman, Medic, and Heavy began approaching Sniper, lecherous looks in their eyes. He looked worriedly to Spy, who just frowned and gave him a shrug. He seemed disappointed, as if he wanted to keep the Aussie all to himself. But now, that would not be possible. Sniper couldn’t stifle a groan of despair. If being raped by Spy was unbearable, what would it be like to be taken by all three men here?! He’d die. He’d just bloody die.

When he looked back, he saw Medic taking off his overcoat, Demoman his vest, and Heavy closing the door with a resounding lock. “You are dismissed, Herr Spy,” Medic said caustically as he pulled his gloves off. Spy, who’d been staring at Sniper almost pitying, looked up at this.

“Vou?” He asked. “Are dismissing moi?”

“Ja, genius,” Medic said again. “So leave, if you would.” Spy could’ve protested, but with Medic being flanked by the burly Demo and Heavy, he was in no position to negotiate, lest they decided to rape him as well. He nodded stoically and walked out of the room, holding his clothes all in a bundle. Sniper felt his heart sink as he saw the Frenchman walk out the door and give him one last, somber look. Even if he hated him, Spy had been his one protector in his place, even if he had kidnapped him to begin with. With him gone, Sniper was completely helpless.

After the door closed, a completely naked Medic came up to Sniper and gave him a sudden, resounding slap. “Ow!” Sniper said as his face was whipped to the side. “The bloody hell was that for?” It was the first thing he’d said in two days now, and it came out raspy and weak. Medic only chuckled.

“Zat is to remind you,” Medic said as the Heavy walked behind him, “Of your new position. To demonstrate zat you are nicht a human being anymore. Zat you belong to us.”

“You’re a fuckin’ Nazi,” Sniper growled, only to receive another slap.

“If I am a Nazi, zhen you are der jude,” he said, the malice in his countenance rising. “Und as der jude, you are in no position to talk. You are, however, in a position to obey.” Suddenly, Sniper felt the ropes above him shaking. He looked up to see Heavy was using a knife to cut them from the rafters above. When the sawing was complete and they snapped, Sniper collapsed heavily to the ground, his legs unsteady and his arms quivering from being released. Before he could catch his breath, he was being lifted effortlessly by Heavy, who held him in the air and wrapped his arms around his armpits. As Medic nodded to Heavy, Sniper realized that they’d cut him down so that they’d be able to use him all at once. Hands still bound, he was roughly thrown back down to the ground by Heavy, collapsing chest first into the ground before being lifted partially up. By now, all three men were naked, and all of them were ready for some fun. Sniper was dizzy and disoriented by his fall, and his headache only became worse as his mouth was roughly jerked down onto Demoman’s thick, erect penis.

“Bite, and I’ll fockin kill you,” the Scot said as he began thrusting in and out of Sniper’s mouth, causing him to gag repeatedly. His cock was large enough to fill nearly his whole mouth, and as much as he would have loved biting down on it, he was simply too disheveled and afraid to consider such defiance. As he was forced to suck Demoman off, he felt his rear being grabbed and felt another cock enter his still throbbing asshole. He gave a sudden cry at this, but with the cock in his mouth, he couldn’t even yell clearly.

“Leetle man feel good!” Heavy said as he put a pair of thick hands on Sniper’s back and began pushing in and out. Tears welled up in Sniper’s eyes as he was invaded by Heavy’s cock, which was at least twice the size of the spy’s. It felt as if his anus was being stretched like starchy cloth, like it would simply tear from being pushed beyond its natural limits of girth. And standing above him was Medic, staring down at the poor man with an erection and a grin of unadulterated sadism. No doubt, he was waiting his turn, since Sniper only had so many orifices. He was being pushed back and forth between the two men like a rocking horse, Demo’s hands forcing him further down onto his cock and heavy pulling him forward onto his own shaft. And as if this wasn’t bad enough, he heard the the two of them high five above him, like this brutal rape was some kind of accomplishment. That was enough to make him break down sobbing. He wanted nothing more than to kill all of them, but with his hands bound and being impaled at both ends, he could barely even struggle. Finally, after what felt like an eternity of this torture, they came, Heavy first and then Demo, his semen making Sniper sputter and cough. As they exited him, he dimly, naively to himself that it was over. But it wasn’t.

Heavy, apparently not yet satiated, had forced his dick into Sniper’s mouth, and Medic had come over and started ramming him from behind. It began all over again, the sobbing, the moans of pleasure from in front and behind, the orgasms from both ends, and of course, the pain. Demo was standing over him this time, occasionally making mocking profanities and stroking himself with two digits. By the time Medic and Heavy had finished, Sniper was completely enervated and simply collapsed to the floor, unable to hold himself up any longer. His throat was raw and he couldn’t cry, only sob brokenly on the ground. But there was still no respite. Seeing he couldn’t fight anymore, Heavy lifted him up and cut the rope binding his hands together off. Sniper weakly struggled after this, squirming and trying his elbow his way out from Heavy’s grasp, receiving another stinging slap in the process. The still potent Heavy lifted him up and placed him down literally on his cock, sitting and impaling the poor Australian like a kebab. Medic forced Sniper’s head down onto his own cock, and when he felt Demoman’s penis being put in his hand, he let it lay there languidly until he was slapped again, indicating he had to stroke it. And so he did, barely conscious at this point, only wanting to pass out and die, and get away from all this…

“Don’t you see?” Medic said triumphantly as Sniper gagged on him. “You belong to us.” And with these imperious words, Sniper began crying again, weeping as he heard the men around him laughing, and then everything around becoming blurry and imprecise, like a train moving away into a landscape, and he finally passed out.
>> No. 3758
D: poor sniper being used and abused for pleasure ftw/l
but i would love to see what happens after this :]
>> No. 3762
Poor baby :C
>> No. 3769
I feel bad for sniper
but also want MOAR
so do continue.
>> No. 3794
conflagrantinexorablepedanticYou have no idea how happy you make me. Vocabulary is so sexy.
And then, I read the next part. ...It's like dictionary porn.

Ah. Speaking of porn. The sex was good. Please continue.
>> No. 3805
My kinks, you have written them.

PLEASE CONTINUE. This is unbelievably hot.
>> No. 3810
I feel so sorry for Sniper, but...god, I still want more.
>> No. 3812
I love real rape with crying...I really, really do...

However, I understand wanting to go through it fast to make a point, but there could have been a little more detail in the sex. It's still hot, but if you were to describe the actions more(and you have a nice vocabulary on you, so I'm more than certain you can do this with little or no effort) it would be more exciting to read. Also, perhaps a subtle way to put in thoughts, probably mostly from sniper but maybe from others, so that the readers can have a bit of empathy, weather it be good or bad. Having feeling in there during the rape makes it more...well, enjoyable for the reader(even if that does sound wrong :D)
Again, still hot, but a little bit of detail goes a long way.
>> No. 3818
O Hi there. Glad most of you are enjoying this, but I'm not sure where I could go from here. I mean, the world is full of possibilities? And I do like to hear what other writefags and readfags have to say. So, any suggestions?
>> No. 3819
>I mean, the world is full of possibilities?
oops. the ? is supposed to be a !
CURSE MY OBLIVIOUSNESS
>> No. 3820
Scout, and the other Sniper. And Pyro comes to watch, but secretly he is figuring out how to save Sniper, because he's awesome and nice like that.
>> No. 3823
would greatly appreciate some more rape courtesy of cocky Scout
>> No. 3826
How I wish you'd continue this masterpiece!!
I pity poor snoipah though :C
And I still hope the BLU Spy would save him...eventually >B3
>> No. 3831
34Masterpiece? Aww, I'm flattered.
And worry not, more snoipah rape shall be cooked up, just as soon as I stop playing TF2 and get my ass in gear...
>> No. 3839
Yay!!

I love you. Srsly :3
>> No. 3887
Thanks for the suggestions, everyone. This update seems particularly...brutal, but fear not, Snoipah will be rescued...hopefully...maybe... >:]
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Spy dodged several grenades and a rocket before making it back into BLU base, the enemy intelligence on his back. When he was safely in the base, he collapsed onto a few barrels of oil and let himself lay there for a few minutes, his heart still racing from the adrelanine of escape. As pyro passed him, he handed the intelligence off, not caring if he took all the credit of capturing the intel for himself. RED was particularly bellicose this past week, agitated by the fact that their Sniper was nowhere to be found. Without him, there was a severe hole in their defenses, which BLU had exploited for several days now with splendid results. Already, RED’s intelligence secrets were being decrypted and exploited, and it looked as if they’d be pushed entirely out of the area in a few days. And this, of course, would be fantastic, as it would mean no more fighting, or attempted rescue missions. Since Sniper hadn’t respawned, the RED team had figured that he was BLU’s captive, and they had been relentless in their attempts to rescue him. But each attempt was warded off, and with any luck, no more would follow in the future.

This was the sentiment of most of the BLU team. When the rest of the team had found out Spy had captured him, they were delighted; was there anyone out there who didn’t find the virile Australian gorgeous? Medic, who kept a large stash of bondage accessories for these situations, had fitted him with a leather collar and light steel handcuffs, as well a set of different-colored ball gags and a ring gag. The collar was fitted with a leash, so that he could be dragged about easily, although the burlier members of the team, like Heavy and Soldier, simply through the helpless man over their shoulders when they wanted to take him away for rape. During the day, he was usually shackled up somewhere accessible and guarded, his ass open and vulnerable so that he could be easily fucked; at night, he was thrown into a storage closet, where he was anyone’s game. Every day, Medic made him take a frigid shower and twice a day, he was fed mushy slop. The team treated him as they would a television or a fleshlight; as something for recreation, an object to be used and tossed aside when it became boring. But Sniper would never become boring. He was just too beautiful, and rapeable, for anyone to tire of him.

That was, except for Spy, and possibly Pyro, who hadn‘t shown the slightest interest in the RED Sniper‘s presence. The frenchman had never intended for things to go this far, and now, he pitied the poor man, reduced to a sex slave by his captors. His original plan was to use the Aussie for a short while, fuck around with him and fondle gim little, before sending him running with his tail between his legs; but now that everyone had access to him, there’d be no escape. He’d be fucked blind, until he was suicidal, until he was broken and just up and died. Spy had seen it before, when his captives had become known to the rest of the team. He always regretted it, when it went too far, but it was probably for the best, since they would respawn and be free once again. But they’d be scarred for life, and usually break down and flee at the mere sight of Spy. Often, they’d have to be replaced. And though this sort of thing usually amused Spy, there was something about Sniper that made him deeply concerned for the man. Was it genuine affection? Spy couldn’t say for sure, but he did know there was an uneasy gurgling deep in the pit of his stomach. This unpleasantness would surge forth when he entered the respawn room.

“Sacrebleu! What are you doing?!” Scout was in the room, sodomizing poor Sniper, who was bound to a bench by his cuffs and giving pained grunts behind a bright red ball gag.

“What’s it look like, ya toad? I’m screwin’ the Sniper!” he said, looking up at Spy. “Oops…I mean, ‘der sklave.’ that’s what Medic calls him.”

“Yes, vell, Medic eez a psycho,” Spy said, looking away as he fished through the medicine cabinet for some gauze and a pack of cigarettes. “Must you…fornicate here?”

“It’s the most accessible spot,” Scout said, beginning to thrust in and out again. “People can just do him as they bandage up from battle or respawn, ya know?” Even after being anally raped so many times, Sniper was immaculately tight. Scout pulled in and out rapidly, working with the same speed he ran. To Sniper, it felt like a jackhammer. The repetitive motions were making him nauseas, but he managed to compartmentalize most of his discomfort. He kept his mind focused on a blank white space, far removed from the place where he was bound. His mind drifted to his days on the outback, where he’d tracked down dingo and brumbies on foot for game. Now, he envied those creatures. At least they’d been killed swiftly and suddenly, without any pain or humiliation…

“So, he ‘as been reduced to a vending machine,” Spy said disdainfully. Poor thing. At least with him, he’d been fondled and raped in relative private. Here, he had no such vestiges of dignity.

“Whaddaya want, a lover?” Scout asked. “He is a vending machine. He’s a sex toy.” After this, scout came, his face flushing red as he thrust with finality. Sniper gave a soft cry and rest his head on the bench, breathing heavily through his nose. He hadn’t worn clothes for eight days now. And if someone fondled him or sucked him off, he would be covered in his own seed all day, until the next shower. He’d say it was hell, but that was so trite it didn’t convey the misery of it all. It was…agony.

When Scout had finished, he gave Sniper a slap on the ass and stepped off, pulling his shorts back up with one hand and grabbing a towel with the other. “Well, see ya Spy,” he said nonchalantly, as if he’d just been putting on some deodorant. “I gotta go tell our Sniper I’m finished. I told him he could have the next turn when I was done.” the RED Sniper gave a gulp and a shudder, and Spy could understand why. Out of all the BLU teammates, Medic included, Sniper had been the most brutal. The two Snipers had always been rivals, each one taking out the other’s teammates and taking shots at each other, and now that Sniper had been captured, BLU Sniper saw this as a sort of ultimate triumph for himself, and never ceased making his dominance known. He hardly even used Sniper for pleasure; instead, he used him to make himself feel powerful, and did brutal things like fisting and whipping. When he’d first done this, Spy had tried to intervene, but found himself powerless to protect RED Sniper. And as the captive Sniper looked up at him imploringly, giving a moan of distress behind his gag, Spy found it unbearable and had to step away. He used the cloak and dagger and disappeared into nothingness before the Australian, the BLU Sniper coming in just as he did. He looked around the room, and, seeing no one, walked over to RED Sniper with a baleful grin.

“Why ‘ello there, mate,” he said softly, leaning down and grabbing RED Sniper’s chin to force his head upward. “Ya miss me? Welp, let’s not keep ya waitin’ any longer, shall we?” RED Sniper struggled in his cuffs and grunted in protest, but could nothing as BLU Sniper retrieved from his vest a small key and unlocked him. He first undid his hands, pulling them up and locking them back in place when they were freed from the bench, and then his ankles, until he held with a leash an unsteady, standing RED Sniper. “Le’s go somewhere real proivate, where we can have some alone time,” BLU Sniper said with a grin, giving a sudden tug that made RED Sniper lose his balance and fall onto the ground.

“Hrrrrrlp! Grrrphhp!” RED Sniper cried from behind the gag as he was dragged out of the respawn room. Spy, still invisible, followed silently, wondering with apprehension what BLU Sniper had in mind…
>> No. 3914
D: he called for help behind the gag even if it is probably futile :X
but yet you make me want more yet still ;d
>> No. 3944
To reiterate what others are saying, MOAR.
>> No. 4000
Oh my! This is becoming more deprived than most of the stuff that I see here, but i am eager with anticipation. Don't stop!
>> No. 4416
BEHOLD, AN UPDATE

It's not much, but since I don't want this fic to fade into oblivion, I've decided to post it now. Also, I might have committed the unspeakable sin of making a pyro a girl, but don't hate me too much for it...

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When Pyro had made it back to the base and to the privacy of her room, she gave a sigh of relief and removed her gasmask and flame retardant suit, letting her move and breathe unharried. When she wasn’t in the comfort of her own quarters, she had to perpetually and perennially wear that suit and gasmask and adopt a hunched posterior to hide her more feminine mannerisms from the rest of her all-male team. When she’d first applied for the job, being little more than a firefighter gone rogue, the prospect of being on all male team struck her as something exciting, a challenge that she would apply herself to with all her skills and determination. But at the Announcer’s advisement, she’d concealed her gender so that she might not attract undue attention. On a day like this, when the air outside was muggy and smelling of fetid carcasses and the air inside cold and conditioned, she might have taken a cool shower while the rest of team was busy in combat. But she had was busy planning something.

She’d grown rather pale, from being trapped in that thick, dark suit all day, and much thinner. Eating without removing that gasmask was a real bitch. The days were long and arduous, not least from the proximity to her occupation entailed and the constant battling, but also from dealing with her boorish, testosterone laden, and perverse teammates. Having been isolated from the second sex for so long, they seemed to have transcended into a whole level of homosexuality, one developed entirely on masculine impulses. Rape, sadism, and all around deviance seemed as commonplace here as they were in Marquis De Sade novels. And while it would probably be fascinating to a sociologist, it repulsed and somewhat terrified Pyro. Proof of this depravity was upstairs, where RED’s sniper was no doubt chained up and being raped. The rest of the team used the man like a dispenser, something to be used and disregarded. Pyro didn’t think of the enemy marksman like that, though. Although she personally thought her own team’s Sniper was a jackass, always going on about his days in the outback or whoever he’d killed that day, what she’d encountered of the RED counterpart made her think of him as charming and kind. And he was, as far as she knew, the only person on the battlefield who what her true gender was.

On one of their attacks on RED base, Pyro had been distracted by a Scout and was shot in the leg by Sniper, causing her to fall and lose her mask. As Sniper had come over with his kukri to finish her, he stopped, seeing her long fair and feminine features, and did not kill her. Instead, he acted like a true gentlemen and helped her up, sending her on her way with a smile and a wave. Although she was at first utterly humiliated at being shown mercy in this way, she came to appreciate the act, and admire the man who did it. Sometimes, when she caught glimpse of the man on the battlefield, he would give her a wink or a slight nod before returning to his work. This, too, was at first infuriating, for it made her feel inferior, as if she was unworthy of the same lack of mercy her male counterparts deserved, but she came to see these as acts of compassion, kind gesture from the closest thing she had to a friend. At the very least, she had a debt to him. And when she found out Spy had captured him and brought him to her base, she knew she had to repay that debt.
But how was she to do this? It’d been nearly a week, and she’d not gotten a chance to approach Sniper alone. During the day, he’d was usually guarded by engineer or in the respawn room, and Medic kept him locked up at night so that no one, Pyro included, could access him without the key. And Medic kept that key close. Very…close.

Pyro stretched and lay down her bed, sunlight filtering from the window falling upon her neck and breasts as she stretched. It felt good to see people being flayed alive before her flamethrower, but it felt better to just be out of that suit and free. She splayed herself onto her bed and basked in the warm shards of light like a cat, feeling that, were it not for her concern for Sniper, she might take a nap. But a sudden clatter behind her door and someone saying something aroused her from her comfortable spot and made her get up. Putting on her gasmask, she opened the door slightly and peeked out to see what was going on. Passing through the open crack was BLU sniper, dragging with him on a leash a hapless, terrified RED Sniper. He struggled for breath behind his gag and had collected quite a few bruises as he was carelessly dragged on the floor by the BLU sniper. “You’re mine, ya piece of shit,” BLU sniper said with relish as he walked down the stairs, towards the intelligence room. “When I’m done with you, your teammates won’t even recognize you…and as for you, I just hope you like pain.” RED Sniper gave a cry of anguish and try to roll about, tugging at the handcuffs on his wrists and ankles to no avail. Pyro felt a chill run down her spine as she saw RED Sniper being dragged down the metal staircase, banging on each stepped as he was pulled down. Whatever BLU Sniper was going to do, it didn’t sound good, and she knew she couldn’t let it happen. Besides, this might be her one good shot at rescuing RED Sniper, assuming she could distract his BLU counterpart somehow. So, eschewing caution, she quietly followed, not knowing a certain, invisible Frenchman was doing the same thing a few steps ahead of her…
>> No. 4421
oo i feel making pyro a female was a good way to have the story progress more x3
but like you said hopefully people aren't D:< about female pyro, I myself feel pyro is a guy but i like this x3
>> No. 4423
I don't tend to go for the whole Fem-Pyro theory....but here I'm willing to make an exception :D
>> No. 4424
>>42
oox3D:<Cut that shit out.
>> No. 4427
don't listen to 44, keep it up. Fempyro = only pyro.
>> No. 4428
>>45
I'm pretty sure that they were talking about the emoticon use, not the fic.
>> No. 4429
>>45
You know 44 was saying that the emoticon shit — not the fic — should be stopped, right? Nowhere was it demanded that the writing should stop, just the childish face-making x3, D:< stuff.

sage for being a douche about it
>> No. 4430
I usually don't like the whole female Pyro theory, but I'll just ignore it here and enjoy the rest.

And I hope Sniper gets rescued AFTER being tortured by his BLU counterpart, hurrhurr.
>> No. 4433
Personally, I don't think it matters whether Pyro is male or female, even though in the game there's evidence Pyro is female (for instance, in 2Fort, Pyro's locker has a flowery purse and a can of hairspray in it).

I'm liking how this is developing, and I can't help but love RED Sniper more and more. Who ever said chivalry is dead, anyway?
>> No. 4435
people afraid of het up in here. Youre the douche.
>> No. 4436
>>50
who's the douche?
>> No. 4439
het = good
>> No. 4440
49I'm positive it's a deodorant. It says "Odour be gone" on the label.

BACK TO THE FIC.
Do go on. Fem-Pyro doesn't annoy me in this´. It fits with the story at least.
>> No. 4444
Sonnemelzen, du Liebe, I can't /wait/ to see what happens next!
>> No. 4445
[RANT]Am I the only one who thinks that it really doesn't matter at all what Pyro's in-game gender is? I mean, really- male or female; Pyro roasts people alive and air-guitars with an axe. Pyro is bad-ass no matter what gender.
As for FanFiction- keyword Fiction, You have artistic license. You could make any of them female, because, let's be honest here- in these stories people write, they aren't writing about the same person they play in the game. These are everyone's own character, with their own personalities, only with a base from the game. And also, in all reality- women exist. I know that the people here in /afanfic/ expect all kinds of homosexuality, but that doesn't mean that a chick can't still be present in a story.
[/RANT]Blacked-out for courtesy.

anyways, I still love this story. And- I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! I knew Pyro was going to be the awesome good-guy here!
>> No. 4448
>>55
Yep. It was your pot, actually, that gave me the idea of making the pyro good. His (Or her, in this fic) gender neutrality makes him a well fit for a protagonist in something like this. Glad you like!

>>54
Danke. :]
>> No. 4465
omg loves ^.^
>> No. 4466
Well, after reading a horrible Mary-Sue Fem-Pyro fic just a while ago, this one seems like a breath of fresh air. Not sure about the long hair though, I'd imagine that'd be really impractical with the gasmask.
>> No. 4520
>>58
Out of morbid curiosity, could you point me in the direction of that fic? Mary-Sue stories always make me laugh, and I've yet to read one about a Pyro portrayed in that way
>> No. 4532
>>59

I second that request. Bad Sue-fics make me feel better about my own literary merit.
>> No. 4545
>>59
>>60

http://www.tf2chan.net/fanfic/res/3156.html

I lost it at "large and beatiful green eyes."
>> No. 4563
Thanks
>> No. 4747
I like real rape. And pain. I wish it was more common here. Anyhoo, here's an update, and a preemptive apology for any retarded mistakes I might have overlooked (Like the other parts of this fic, I didn't beta with anyone, just edited myself)
Enjoy.

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When they came to a set of stairs that RED Sniper was dragged painfully down, Spy heard light footsteps behind him and turned to see Pyro shortly behind him, ducking behind crates and around corners to avoid being seen. The Snipers didn’t notice him, but Spy, trained in subterfuge and espionage as he was, could easily see the novice missteps the Pyro was making in his pursuit. He was quite a klutz in that cumbersome suit, but he made Spy wary nonetheless. What was he doing? But as he heard RED Sniper give a pained grunt and looked to see him being dragged around a corner, he couldn’t devote much thought to it. He was busy now.

BLU Sniper dragged his helpless adversary towards the intelligence room. Just as he came to the corridor before it, he veered to the right and into an obscure supply closet, dragging his captive with him. Just before he closed the door, Spy managed to slip in unnoticed, concealing himself in a corner besides a cluster of mops and other cleaning products. Pyro, trailing behind them, was not so lucky. The swore she uttered as she heard the door lock came out as an indiscernible, muffled sound, like a cat’s growl. She pressed the side of her head to the door, trying as best as she could to keep silent as she listened in. She could barely hear anything past her mask and the door, so, after some deliberation and a look around to see no one else was present, she took it off, holding it in her hands as she leaned against the door. “Ya ready for this, mate?” she heard a voice say, the words iterated in a way so sinister they sent chills through her. On the other side of the door, where BLU Sniper had turned on a single, dusty light bulb, Spy could see that, past the façade of cleaning products, this was no mere supply closet. BLU Sniper had rigged the place up like a dungeon, with a long black upturned table rigged with cuffs, a counter topped with lubricants and whips, and a shelf with dozens of different sex toys in different shapes, sizes, and functions, some of which made Spy’s stomach churn. How on earth did BLU Sniper have all this stuff? He was worse than Medic.

“Now now, settle down,” BLU said patronizingly as he lifted a still struggling RED Sniper to his feet. RED stood unsteadily on his bound feet, naked and humiliated, and stared daggers at his amused captor.

“Fck yrr,” he grumbled past his gag, a bit of resistance still left in him. BLU Sniper grinned maliciously at these words and gave him a hard shove to the ground. Spy winced as he heard RED Sniper fall painfully to ground, unable to support himself, and felt a great detesting for BLU Sniper as he laughed wholeheartedly. Pyro, too, felt hers insides burn with rage as she heard this abuse.

“Oh, don’t be like that now,” BLU Sniper said with a chuckle, lifting red Sniper from the ground with a chuckle. When he was back on his feet, he gave another seething glare, which led to him being pushed onto the cold, cement floor again. The BLU marksman had quite a bit of fun with this, lifting the helpless RED up only to throw him back into the ground. He did it again and again, and by the fifth time, he was cackling with sadistic triumph. A ribbon of blood trickled out of RED Sniper’s mouth and past his gag, and his bare chin and chest were swollen and bruised from colliding freely with the cement. A tear or two ruminated in his eyes, but he remained stoic and silent.

“You gonna be good now, mate?” BLU Sniper asked, pulling RED Sniper’s face right up to his own. Not wanting to be pushed down again, he nodded. “Good,” BLU replied before slamming him down onto the upturned black table. “Cause this ain’t over yet.” He undid RED’s handcuffs and swiftly slipped his hands and ankles into shackles at the corners, so that he was spread-eagle and helpless on the table. The bound Aussie struggled and groaned in his bindings, pulling and tugging hard on his wrists and ankles, his eyes bright with fear and focused on his captor. BLU Sniper moseyed over to the shelf, nearly bumping into Spy as he did, and retrieved from it a dark riding crop that he spun about in his hands as he came to face RED.

“I’ve been shootin’ at you for two years, mate,” He said, swishing the crop back and forth before the bound and wary RED Sniper. “And I’ve gotten you a couple of good times, but that’s not good enough for a killer of your stature, is it?” He took off his own vest and pants, staring at his captive with a curious mixture of hatred and lust. “No, it inn’t” he said, answering his own question. “I’ll give ya props, you’re good. But I’m numba one ‘round here. And it’s about time you learnt that…”

Then, in a movement swift as light, he brought the crop down on RED Sniper’s stomach and hit his abdominals with a succinct, resounding thwack. RED gave a muffled cry of pain and surprise and writhed in his cuffs beneath the blow, a red welt forming on his stomach. BLU Sniper smiled smugly and crossed his arms. “Lovely,” he said, bringing a hand to RED’s stomach and stroking it. “Ya really are lovely, mate. We’re lovely, I should say. Why d’ya think Spy chose to kidnap you? In any case,” He said, bringing the crop to his palm, “I’m glad he did.” Spy winced as the crop cracked down on RED Sniper again, making him cry and squirm about like a fish. He whacked RED again and again, and Pyro, although couldn’t tell what exactly was going on behind that door, knew something terrible was happening. She paced back and forth anxiously in front of the door, deliberating her next course of action. Should she just burst in and rescue Sniper like he was some damsel in distress? She was fairly sure she could break down the door, and the idea appealed to her, but she knew that if she attacked her teammate, she’d be in big trouble. The whacks behind the door became faster and louder, as did Sniper’s grunts of pain, but even in this distress, she remained still. What could she do?

“Mrrph! Mrrph!” RED Sniper writhed and groaned as blow after stinging blow came down on him. His chest, legs, arms, and cock were whipped profusely, until his body was marred in red welts that seared like fire. He clenched his fists together and shut his eyes as tightly as possible, but he couldn’t stop the tears that came to his eyes, or the sobs that escaped his lungs. BLU cackled with glee as he brought the crop down again and again, until his victim was red and sobbing and sagging in his shackles. Spy’s heart ached with pity as he watch RED Sniper being broken and beaten before him. Could he be possibly humiliated further? Apparently, BLU Sniper believed so. After several minutes of whipping, he ceased and turned the holding table around, revealing a round opening exposing RED’s vulnerable anus. Pyro, noticing a stop in the whipping sounds, ceased her pacing and put her ear to the door, her heart pulsing fast with worry and her axe ready in her hands. Spy, still watching in the corner, assumed BLU Sniper meant to sodomize his rival, was shocked when he saw him take out a long, vicious looking knife.

“Now,” BLU Sniper said, running two fingers across the blade. “I’ll give ya a permanent reminder…that you are mine.”
>> No. 4748
OH GOD OH GOD OH GOD


I agree about the lack of realistic reactions to rape.
>> No. 4749
You are the rape god(ess?)
I eagerly await more of your...brilliance...
>> No. 4752
oh how i have waited for this part, it's amazing! more i say-
>> No. 4871
wow that's great ^.^
>> No. 4889
I'm hurting in places that don't exist, but I crave more...What is this madness?
>> No. 4892
All right. Now I'm really scared.
Please tell me poor snoipah will survive. Please !?

Oh gods. You are toying with my feelings, and I seem too enjoy it.
>> No. 5096
M'kay. I'm almost done this thing, probably one more addition. There are probably some continuity and grammatical errors, but I've come to accept those as necessary flaws. Just consider this fic my first real work here, work that will be improved in the future.

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BLU Sniper spun the knife in his hand as nimbly as a spy before taking the grip in his fist and bringing down to RED Sniper. He brought the blade to RED’s left butt cheek and lightly traced a circle around it, taunting him, savoring his anxiety. RED Sniper groaned in despair and pulled at his bindings feebly, simultaneously dreading and accepting his fate. As he clenched his fists and braced himself for the pain, BLU, noticing this resilience, smiled and brought a hand to his sore and neglected cock. RED jumped as he felt his member being squeezed, and gave a muffled cry of surprise as BLU began stroking it.

“Didn’ expect that, did ya?” BLU Sniper said with unnerving relish in his voice. Despite having worn, calloused fingers, his touch was as soft and adroit as Spy’s, and RED felt blood rushing in his penis and involuntary spasms of pleasure as he was molested. “Well, mate, I can’t lie. I might hate ya, but that doesn’t mean I can’t deny what a beaut you are.” he took the semi-aroused cock in his palm and pumped it vigorously, eliciting a muffled cry of anguish and pleasure from his victim. “And I know this, bein’ violated by ya’ archenemy before being disposed of, will be a total defeat.” Spy, unseen in the corner, felt his blood turn to ice at BLU’s words. Disposed of. RED Sniper, as well, began breathing heavily and started shaking, from fear or ecstasy or an amalgamation of both, Spy couldn’t tell. BLU Sniper sighed with contentment as he ran his hand through RED’s dark pubic hairs and up his smooth stomach. He pressed himself against the table RED Sniper was bound to and brought his head to the captive’s shoulders, scrutinizing RED Sniper’ss expressions as they oscillated between various degrees of carnal mirth and terror. Spy was reminded of a week before, when he had violated the RED marksman in quite a similar manner, against his will, for his own purposes, selfishly…it had been wrong, he suddenly thought to himself.

BLU Sniper attempted to position himself behind the table, but every position was complicated by the obtuse table, and after a minute, he gave up and shook his head. “This ain’t gonna work,” he said, bringing his hand to his chin in contemplation. RED Sniper . relaxed slightly in his bindings, glad to be free from being fondled, but continued breathing heavily. This peace was short lasted, as BLU Sniper turned the table around and unhooked RED from it before binding his hands and feet together once more, something RED Sniper attempted to protest by thrashing about and crying out past the ball gag lodged in his mouth. Pyro, still lingering behind the door of the closet, heard this cry and felt her anxiety rise twofold. She pressed her ear to the door, and, hearing the sounds of a scuffle, resolved to break it down, even if it did make her look suspicious. But when she looked down to her hands, she realized her mere axe would not be enough to bust down the metal door, and was forced to depart to find something that could.

After a brief struggle, BLU Sniper overpowered RED and secured his bindings before taking him by the chest and legs and lying him down on his own lap. Like some perverse imitation of two lovers, BLU Sniper gently stroked the face and hair of his RED counterpart, who could only look up with fearful and imploring eyes that evoked much sympathy from Spy. With one hand, BLU lithely stroked RED’s penis, and with the other, picked up his knife and brought it to RED’s neck. “I like you like this,” BLU Sniper whispered into RED’s ear as he lightly dragged the knife over his chest and up to the tip of his cock. He balanced it there for a moment, bringing the tip of the knife to the tip of RED’s penis like a balancing act, and then brought it down and brushed it over his testicles. “So helpless,” BLU whispered again. RED Sniper closed his eyes and tried to look away, but was forcefully made to look into his captor’s eyes. “But you want to be free,” BLU smiled lightly, venomously, and gave RED Sniper a lustful kiss on the cheek. The kiss turned into a lick, and soon BLU was effusively licking all of RED’s face,sending chills of revulsion through Spy. When he was done, BLU brought his face back up and took a long look at the man in his lap. RED Sniper, totally naked, wrists and ankles bound painfully together, a humiliating ball gag in his mouth, with wide and teary eyes, a body marred by abuse, and an unwillingly erect penis. And BLU Sniper, bringing his hands to RED’s cock and providing the finishing pumps that make him cry out and come, saw his handiwork was good. RED Sniper sobbed as he came, his body writhing with pain and exasperation and his member pulsing with undulations of pleasure, before collapsing into his captor’s arms, unable to resist any more. When his orgasm ceased, BLU Sniper smiled, and kissed his victim on the forehead before the taking his knife in his hand and raising it, where it glinted in the dull light of the light bulb. “G’day,” BLU Sniper said with a grin, and just as he fastened his grip on the knife Spy, unable to stand idle, prepared to lunge forth. But before he could, the door gave a mighty lurched and burst open, flooding the room with light that obscured a woman‘s outline.
>> No. 5112
That, my dear sir, was the sexiest piece of writing I've come across in ages.
>> No. 5134
Oh thank god! I literally was holding me breath.
>> No. 5153
ahh cliff hanger, you torture me so
>> No. 5162
MOOOOOOOOOOOAR!
>> No. 5446
wow poor sniper but oh pyro to the rescue!
>> No. 6130
can be update time yet plz plz? so dying to know what happens here
>> No. 6202
WHERE IS THE NEXT PART D:
>> No. 6203
>>77

hurr, I was hoping this thing was dead

Sorry, no next part, go home
>> No. 6204
Moar? This is the work of a brilliant and talented writer and I demand MOAR.
>> No. 6205
>>78
wha...really? that's a shame, I was hoping to how this played out. ah well
>> No. 6209
>>79
>>80

huh? hmm...maybe I'll make an epilogue, just to close things up and all...
>> No. 6211
>>81
Please do. While traumatized!Scout is great to read, traumatized!Sniper remains undeveloped territory.
>> No. 6225
Impending TL;DR:

Echoing the comments that the rape is seriously lacking in detail, and not just in the porny bits. What is going through the minds of those involved? Either stick to one point of view so that we can identify with the Sniper's helplessness, or let us get into everybody's heads more so that we know the varying degrees of sociopathy (and perhaps even some self-justification) on his rapists' parts as well.

Personally, I find the Heavy / Medic / Demoman scene to be the weakest. Forced ass-to-mouth couldn't have been pleasant for the Sniper. I very much doubt the Heavy would have bothered to use a condom (the Medic might, because I can see him being all "must use protection even for rape").

What's going through the Sniper's mind during all of this? I mean, we got to see some of it, but details, details! I kind of like the zig-zagging back and forth between despair and determination. The only part that kind of puzzled me was his reaction to being threatened with death--at this point, wouldn't the Sniper have welcomed it? There's always respawn, after all.

How is the Pyro (or the Spy, for that matter) going to pull off a dramatic rescue? I could sort of buy that the Pyro might take pity on the Sniper, but not that she'd potentially betray her team and give away her gender for him just because he was polite to her. And as guilty as the Spy feels, he knows his team better than to incur their wrath on him; he needs a damn good plan and not get caught.
>> No. 6237
83
Yes yes yes, it sucks, I'm aware. This was my first thing, and I was hoping it was dead and forgotten when SOMEONE dragged it from the grave. The lack of beta, the meager details, and the menagerie of dumb mistakes speak for this, as well as the lack of logic you've mentioned. I doubt I'll continue this, but thanks for the advice, in any case.
>> No. 6251
Man, I was hoping the Sniper would show ... some appreciation to the Pyro for saving her...
>> No. 6252
er saving HIM
>> No. 6284
Sage, please. It's at that point, I believe.

I think this is quite alright, by the way, and it's too bad it likely won't be continued.
>> No. 6288
I love this...so, so much. I have since the beggining, and I do hope you continue. However, one thing has bothered me since the begining:
He’d seen this before, teammates disappearing and reappearing dead in a ditch somewhere, there bodies ravaged and sodomized and a ball gag still in their mouths.Spy had seen it before, when his captives had become known to the rest of the team. He always regretted it, when it went too far, but it was probably for the best, since they would respawn and be free once again. But they’d be scarred for life, and usually break down and flee at the mere sight of Spy.
it's just...bothered me...
But other than that i've loved this so much...I really want to to go on FOREVER :'(
>> No. 6430
could we at least get resolution to this story...? :C


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