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21975 No. 21975
Right, so, Captain wanted this drawn, so...tada.
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>> No. 21976
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21976
and while I'm here, if someone would like to redline that leg so I can fix it, that'd be great.Because I know something's wrong with it.
>> No. 21977
>>1304

No redlines for you love, but like I told you yesterday... lovin' it. I had to offer some praise. He's either gotten a letter from his mum or got laid. One of the two! Dat stride.
>> No. 21978
>>1304
I think the only problem is that that foot looks a bit smaller then the other one

other than that holy fuck why are you in here, your stuff is awesome
>> No. 21979
>>1304
It's his forward leg. I know that much- did you draw this on paper and scan it? It feels like you hit the edge of the paper V:
>> No. 21980
>>1305
Thanks, love~ Maybe it's even both!
>>1306
Knew it would be something simple. I'm in workshop because I am a coward, I guess. But Thank you! I'll move to fanart soon enough.

>>1316
Yeah, it was drawn on a scrap-sized bit of cardstock; pretty much the exact width of the drawing. If I ink it in photoshop though, at least now I know which leg's the problem. Thanks!
>> No. 21981
>>1303
Ugghghhgh god its so cute. <3
>> No. 21982
>>1304
I love it!

I'm dying to add that "Haters gonna hate" sentence under it, it looks exactly like that meme.
>> No. 21983
>>1303
DiaBEETUS. I has it now. That is so damn cute.
>>1304
I'm loving that so much. I always love Sniper arts and this one is awesome. Keep on drawing, lovely person!
>> No. 21984
>>1335
personally, all I can hear when I look at Sniper is "these boots were made for walkin'..."

Which is freakin awesome. I never thought a picture of a guy walking could be that awesome.
>> No. 21985
Maaaanic~<3
>> No. 21986
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21986
>>1328
>>1335
>>1338
>>1364 Thank you muchly, everyone!
>>1387 Nelaaaaaaaaaaa <3
Still learning to draw the other classes before I actually move myself to /fanart/, but in the meantime, here's another Sniper, which may or may not be full of lighting fail! BRB LEARNING TO CEL-COLOR. (help welcome)
>> No. 21987
>>1415

Look. I was in love with Sniper's boots before this. But now you're making it an absolute fetish. SHAME ON YOU. AND SHAME ON ME. *Boot scrapescrape...*
>> No. 21988
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21988
I'm not an expert in cel shading, so these are just some general tips. And in case you can't read my terrible handwriting, here is some tl;dr:

1) Once you've decided your main light source, keep in mind that there will be secondary light sources, especially in outdoors scenes. A bit of rim lighting (i.e., an lighter shaded outline) helps a ton in suggesting volume.
2) Your shading has very little detail, so it flattens the picture. For stiff materials like the Sniper's hat and vest, that's okay, but his shirt and pants should have much more shadow definition to suggest folds in the clothing. And since you're doing cel shading, it's better to exaggerate shadow shapes.
3. Learn color theory to help use colors to set a mood. Warmer colors (towards the red side) suggest energy, while cooler ones (towards the blue side) suggest calm. In general, use complementary colors for shadow colors--this would necessitate an additional layer using the Multiply blend mode. For example, with red, use varying shades of green (blue + yellow).
>> No. 21989
>>1422
Thank you for being helpful! I never actually had a color theory class or much related to color and lighting, so any help is awesome. I want to get away from having things look flat.
>> No. 21990
sim sim

SALABIM ( ._.)/
>> No. 22074
>>21975
So cute!
>> No. 22085
>>21975
That is so far beyond cute it's adorableness has broken my already cracked brain. Congrats.

(Also, good to see this in the /fanart/ section instead of the workshop now)
>> No. 22106
>>21975
KTTRRH!
>> No. 22118
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22118
Thanks for your kind comments, folks!
>>21990 And thanks for solving that practical problem, Engineer.

Two-part image-drop!
Sniper takes a ceasefire job at Hallmark. Things don't go well. Idea courtesy of Circlejerk; guys, what is this, I don't even know anymore.
I bet there's plenty of problems in both of these.
>> No. 22119
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22119
This one's Fapcap's fault.
>> No. 22120
>>22119

haha ew
>> No. 22121
>>22120

Hey, if you don't want him he's mine.
>> No. 22122
>>22121

Be my guest.

I find sniper particularly creepy.
>> No. 22126
>>22121
I'll fight your for him? I don't know what Sprang is on about. Sniper isn't as creepy as people make him out to be
>> No. 22134
>>22118
Haha, this is great. I love Scout's anxious finger on his face.
>> No. 22135
I now have a thing for Sniper and his boots.

>>22119
Not sure if want...
>> No. 22136
>>22118
Haha, I just love Sniper's exasperation at Scout's indecisiveness.
>>22119
Ooooh, I wouldn't mind if Sniper showed up like that! Also, Engie's card is adorable.
>> No. 22138
>>22119

FFFFF. DO want. Very much so.
>> No. 22141
>>22119
Wow, either Sniper REALLY needs the money or he secretly loves the job...I'll just assume both.
>> No. 22152
>>22119
We need to have more brain children 8D
>> No. 22158
>>22119

I couldn't get this image out of my head. So I made this.

---

It was supposed to be the perfect Valentines. A saccharine little card, a love song on his guitar, dinner, and an appearance by a certain winged cherub to top the night off. Engineer had already picked out the perfect card and fine tuned his guitar, and just yesterday, he’d placed a call to the nearby Hallmark store for a Cupid dress-up to show up at his wife’s favorite restaurant for when she showed up. By the time ceasefire was called and evening had approached, Engineer was pulling his card out and was on his way to the restaurant, whistling as he drove his pickup. When he came up to the restaurant and got out of the car, though, he was assailed by the most surreal sight he’d witnessed since his last business meeting in Amsterdam.

“When oim feelin’ blue, all oi have to do is take a look at you, then I’m not so blue…” a tall, lanky man wearing nothing but an akubra, a pair of wings and a loincloth was singing at the front of the eatery, only a few steps from the curb. Engineer was so surprised that he didn’t recognize the man at first, but when he recovered himself, he realized it was their /Sniper/, in a cupid outfit. His huntsman was in his hand, and all the arrows had been fitted over with plush hearts.

“Sniper?” as he said it, Engineer suddenly recalled Sniper’s recent ceasefire job, and it dawned on him. Sniper stopped singing and opened his eyes, realizing it was Engineer he had been serenading.

“T-truckie?” Sniper asked, suddenly covering himself up. “/You’re/ the person with the red pickup I’m supposed to see?!”

“Uh…I guess so,” Engineer said, staring at Sniper with a befuddled expression. “And you’re…?”

“I-it’s a partoime job, yeh,” Sniper said, adjusting his loincloth. The two men stared dumbly at each other for a moments, and Engineer raised his finger to ask a question, only to stop and put it down after a moment. “Th-this is for ya woife, roight?”

“O’course!” Engineer said, a bit defensively. He looked past the half-naked Australian to see if she was anywhere nearby. “She should be here any second-”

“Harold?!” Engineer swiveled around to see his wife standing behind him, wearing a shocked countenance. She looked from him to Sniper, and then back. Engineer suddenly realized how strange it must look, for him to be talking to a man wearing nothing but a loincloth in the middle of the street. “Is this what it looks like?!”

“Wha’? No! Darlin, this is just a coworker-” Engineer began hastily, taking a glance back at Sniper, who just stood their helplessly.

“A coworker?! You’re taking a /coworker/ to /our/ dinner?!” Her voice raised an octave in fury.

“No! No, darlin it’s not like that-” Just then, Sniper, thinking it’s the most opportune time, bursts into song.

“When oim feelin’ blue, all oi have to do is take a look at you, then I’m not so blue,” He meant to sing it to Engineer’s wife, but he looked at Engineer as he sung. This did not go unnoticed.

“I’m out of here!” Engineer’s wife said, turning around and going back to her car. “If taking some slutty coworker out to dinner is your way of celebrating Valentine’s, then you can sleep on the couch!” before Engineer could stop her, she had gotten into her car and driven off, leaving the poor Texan in the dust. Engineer looked as her car drove off and sighed, crumpling his letter slightly in his palm. Sniper walked over next to him.

“Way to overreact on her part,” the Australian said, adjusting his wings. “Hey, truckie, oi think oi got a coupon to the place…wanna get some grub before goin’ home?”

Engineer sighed and rubbed his forehead. As erudite as he was, even /he/ didn’t have the words to express how he was feeling. So, he decide to not even try. “Sure, Sniper.” he said as he walked back to the restaurant. He stored the card in his pocket, not even sure if he’d need it anymore. Some Valentines indeed.
>> No. 22159
>>22158
Sonne you are my hero.
>> No. 22163
>>22118
>>22119
HAHA, oh god! This is glorious!
>> No. 22174
>>22158
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Oh man I lol'd so hard.
>> No. 22665
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22665
Still learning to draw everyone, but in the meantime, have a Scout-face! And another go at learning to color properly.
>> No. 22679
>>22665
I like this, a lot. Especially his eyes and mouth.
>> No. 22686
>>22665

Loving the smirk. :)
>> No. 22700
>>22665
You should definitively explore this more, I think his face in this style is spot on. I'd love to see more.
>> No. 22707
>>21975
I d'awwed aloud. My dog looked at me kinda funny.
>> No. 23138
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23138
Also, have a scout.
>> No. 23139
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23139
>>23137 was quickly deleted as I realized I had to fix something obvious.
expect something more than a scribble from me sooner or later
>> No. 23146
>>23139

Whenever Medic says something is about to do is "for science," you know it can't be good.
>> No. 23153
>>23146
It's not good because it's fantastic.
>> No. 23409
Just an overall trend I've noticed: You seem to consistently draw hands with fingers that are slightly too long in comparison to the palm (or a palm too small for the fingers?).

>>22118
That aforementioned trend combined with the base of Sniper's thumb juts out his left hand make his hand look, well, not properly connected to his wrist and the rest of his arm.

>>21986
Sniper's shoulder and arm, just judging by how high up he's shrugged it, suggests that he's using that arm to support quite a bit of his weight, although the rest of his pose - or at least his legs - seems fairly balanced. If his left shoulder were brought down a bit and that arm lengthened it would look more natural.

You also have lapses in foreshortening and such, but pfff everyone has those.

And to polish off my not-critique I shall say that the pyro+kitty picture is absolutely adorable.
>> No. 23410
>>23409
Hurrah, some crit.
Hands are something I struggle with. If I'm drawing really big, they come out ok, but I've got to be less lazy about keeping the palm-to-fingers proportions correct. Thank you for pointing it out; I'll try to be more aware of that in the future.
Foreshortening is one of my biggest weaknesses, so please don't hesitate to point out my slip-ups with that. Redlines, text, whatever.
>> No. 23416
>>21975

How did you know? My two favorite loves: kitties and pyro. Gahh~~


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