HIS FACE AHAHA OH GOD HIS FACE!

I'ts allright, but Solly does need some work. I'd give more then that but I've got to get off my lunch break now.

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do you look at what you draw honey?

>>7875

If others see some problems with it advise away, I would be happy to try and improve it.

>>7880

Well I like it, but the face needs some work for sure. And although your anatomy isn't /completely/ atrocious it could use a little more definition. Try these threads for some good ref.

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I can't redline at all so I tried to fix it instead. The eyes are a bit too far apart making him look really weird. Usually the distance between the eyes is about an eyes length. The mouth looks a bit odd too but I can't really tell why. Maybe add some teeth.

The way you painted the picture is very good, though.

I had another look at it myself. Silly me forgot to flip the canvas as I was working so along with everything else it got skewed. I’m trying to fix that now.

I’ll find a reference for it, I got bit bold and tried to do it myself but… oh well.

Ok, so I basically scraped the torso and started fresh armed with a reference. I’ve not done much to the face yet aside from moving the eyes closer together but I’m going to see if I can get a better likeness.

Anyone see any glaring errors before I continue?

>>7886

The face looks a lot better.

But to me, his neck seems a bit too short now. Also, broaden up his shoulders and and give him more muscle, his arms seem a bit too skinny.

>>7887

I tried to redline it (but it's green). It's not perfect but I hope you see what I mean.

I think his right arm isn't bending right either.

His torso still seems a bit short to me and his arms should probably be thicker.

HERE'S WHAT YOU DO, MY BEAUTIFUL FRIEND.

Take the body from the first and copy and past the new face on. Voila! Problem solved.

Really though it looks fantastic :)

>>7920
I'd like to agree, but the shoulder is really dislocated at the moment.

OH one more thing! Also, men who have big necks also tend to have these ...things between their clavicle and their necks. It's the small bulge you see as solly lifts his arm up. Having that there can bring that dislocated arm into his shoulder.

>>7875
I knew I recognized that face.

>>7965

I'll be seeing that in my nightmares, THANKS.

>>7965
>>7971

POW! HA HA.

>>7881
He's just so absolutely... perfect
~fawnz~~~

>>7965
EH EH

Well I made the changes.
Is there anything else before I finish it off?
And thanks for all the help so far, you’re all awesome.

>>8088
His pec attached to the lifted arm would be a bit higher. The arm pulls that up.