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No. 10467
>>10456
Er, not to be ruin the mood, but in the previous page, BLU said "At first, I didn't see him for several days. At first, I feared he had killed himself." Yet, the very next page appears to take place moments later. Either that, or Scout took his sweet time finding Pyro. (Which makes what Scout says in this page pretty hilarious in a sick way.)
It's proper storytelling to use the past tense of "several days" when the storyline actually takes place several days later, not immediately after some incident has happend on that same day.
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