I loved it! This one had a lot more buildup and plot than the first section, and I'm always a sucker for a thoughtful yet tough Engineer! Who played who, if I might ask? That being said, I think your beta made some errors (or didn't notice your own). Aside from a few typos which is no big thing, there is a duplicated paragraph toward the end of the first part of chapter 2. The "Just a few inches away" paragraph is pasted in there twice between a paragraph of Dell's pov. Just pointing that out, but overall AWESOME job. I love me some Helmet Party shagging.