I like it for the most part, but I feel like everything about this story is too... rushed? I don't know how else to explain it. I feel like Scout's submission under Medic came too fast - he's a mercenary that's been shot up and blown to pieces more times than he can count - I doubt a few blows from Medic could get him to act right so fast. Sure, I think the solitary and the withdrawal of food would help, but I'd still expect Scout to fight back more than he did. The ScoutxScout made me happy, but same general problem. Maybe this is because I have difficulty telling the passing of time in this fic, but it seems like it'd take a few weeks at the very least for Scout to go from headstrong and fighting for independence to fully trusting of Medic and willing to do whatever he commands. I'll agree on Feather for the Snipes\Scoot part, buuut it made me happy, too, and you've already explained, so no real complaints here.