I'll admit that I'm a stickler for historical accuracy and that when writing fanfic, doing massive amounts of research for such things is probably a bit excessive, but the lack of detail in this story's "past episode" portions sort of irks me. Even a few details, things to help solidify the time and place in which the action is happening would help to make the scenes come across as less vague. Additionally, though I am a fan of a 'softer' Medic, he comes across as just a little too passive, (almost feminine) in the way that he deals with stressful situations. Seeing him voice some honest-to-goodness irritation with how his teammates are treating him would seem a little more authentic; in a stressful situation, nobody can remain a saint forever, and being constantly brushed off by his teammates or outright harassed by them would shred the nerves of even the most phlegmatic Medic. I do like this story, but felt I should offer some honest-to-goodness critical feedback to go along with the smiley faces.