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Ok, a few complaints about your style in general.
Once again I apologize for shitty MSPaint.
I've once again used your lovely fem-hoovy.
The one on the right is a breakdown of your style as it is now, the one on the left is my corrections.
First, you need to move down your ears. The top of the ear should be up no further than the top of the eye. Remember, ears sits at an angle.
Secondly, your eyebrows seems to be trying to fly off the face. Eyebrows sits very close to the eye itself. Most people only have about a fingernail or so between the eye itself the the brow.
Pulling down your brow will making it easier to pull of expressions and make your characters look more natural.
Thirdly, the base of your noses are almost as big as the eye of the character. This would work in a more cartoony style, but you don't seem to be going for that.
A thinner nose base would be more in touch with what you're going for.
And last, your mouth and lips need to go down just a tiny bit. Look in the mirror and you'll notice a small cleft above your lips, there needs to be room for that on your faces.
All in all, you seem to be well on your way. All of this stuff is generally newbies mistakes, and as you keep drawing you'll find most of it gets better naturally.
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