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No. 1068
Just going to say this because nobody else seems to want to. I can't draw so I can't offer really detailed ways to fix problems, but your torsos and necks are too short. Your characters are also too rectangular in shape, with no definition that their unique body shapes normally have (broad shoulders, triangular shape for Soldier, lanky build for Sniper and so on).
Your Sniper and Tentaspy in the 4th picture look far too feminine due to their eyes, body shapes, small hands and lips coloured in a way that draws attention to them (the Tentaspy's lips are pink, which looks odd on a non-human and presumably male creature). Sniper's left arm is also far too skinny and the forearm is too short. The 5th picture is probably the worst for looking too feminine - I honestly thought it was a female Tentaspy until I looked at the full size image. His torso seems too wide and flat and his tentacles are a bit off, like they're too short, and some of them don't seem attached to his body at all.
Your attention to detail - when it comes to drawing dicks/body hair/cigarettes/light from the window - is remarkable. And the first picture is excellent. But you really need to practice male body (rather than facial) anatomy, and study the different body shapes of the various characters. Hope this helps.
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