I'd posted an unfinished version of this before, looking for crit. The spy's anatomy is a bit off, sadly, and the working version of the file is currently on a dead computer so I can't even go back to edit it. Baw.

the follow-up to the spy and medic picture. Does this really count as porn? I dunno.

I threw this one up for chop and then spent many soul-searching hours glaring at it to try and find technical mistakes before giving up and just colouring it.

I love how you draw the medic. He comes off as such a whore.

I love your Heavy/Medic arts and I wish to see more.

>>1088
Seconded, plus he's still buff as hell which is always awesome.

>>1088

I like to imagine that the Medic is a complete whore, regardless of the game's (limited) canon and fanon trends. It's the moé. The megané-oyaji-moé.

>>1089

I usually just do cartoon porn of characters who look attractive together to me, so drawing scenarios where I actually thought the characters involved could be in love was kind of different. They're such a cute couple!

>>1090

Probably a little too buff, at least in the most recent one. I try to make him look relatively hardy and hale, but I always draw characters with too much musculature in an attempt to make them visually interesting. Bah.

>>1091

We have similar stories, you and I.

Heavy and Medic in wuv makes me all fuzzy inside... and also moist.

>megané-oyaji-moé
That made me laugh. Not that it's necessarily untrue though.

>>1092

Yes. The love between man and giant man... so lovable!

>>1093

It is a very specific fancy. Also, your Warhammer(?) armor guy makes me giggle.

Hnnnggg I am also a fan of Heavy/Medic and quite enjoy how you draw both. Dat hair and those muscles. And Medic is moe as shit. You have really nice coloring too, especially on that Medic/Spy picture.

Also, moar.

I'd been trying to go for a looser style, but after fixing up the lineart on this, realized it looked just like it always does. So I decided to at least try something different with the colour/shading.

The thing that I mostly regret with this picture is that you can't see what sort of an expression Solly has, since he's wearing his helmet. And his head is turned away. And there's a dick in his mouth.

>>1115
Please tell me those are lash marks on Soldier's butt.

>>1119

They are, though I totally failed to include the riding crop in the last picture in this one. I hope they look okay- I'll admit that I've never actually tried drawing any sort of ass-whip artwork before.

>>1120
Oh, they look more than okay. They're the variant of the "HNNNG I AM CURLING MY TOES" more-than-okay.

Goodness, that Soldier. That Medic. That Everything. Unf.

>>1120
The marks look perfect, makes the image even more drool-inducing.

Even though it isn't porn, I figured this was too puke-y to put on the default fanart board.

I'm not sure if adding motion lines to pictures like this helps to suggest the action taking place or just muddles things further. Oh well.

>>1216
oh this is hilarious! and very. hot indeed.

>>1216
This is GREAT! I love the differences in the guys' anatomy- that's the TF2 look! (Also, mm Engie, dat pudge). The motion lines give it a more cartoony feel, which I think is fine for a piece like this with the graphic word-balloons and the comedic interplay of Engineer and Spy's expressions. If you were going for Srs Bzns Porn, they'd look funny, but they work here.

>>1216
Love this.

...but...would be better if the spy was blu.

>>1219

Different shapes are fun! So is Engi-pudge. Something very arousing about dat pudge.

>>1220

It's supposed to have been a continuation from a 'drunken team group picture' I'd drawn; the joke is that Solly is so soused at this point that he doesn't even realize that the Engineer isn't the one fucking him... and Engi isn't thrilled to have someone muscling in on his helmet party.

>>1221
I do agree with Engie here. Spy sappin' mah Helmetparty! And we can't allow that to happen, can we.

Figured I felt good about this one after touching it up a little. For the record, I hate drawing testicles because I can never seem to figure out what to do with them. Unfortunately, they kind of have to go there or things would look worse!

>>1269
need we say MORE?

>>1269
heavy is a large, wide man

>>1269

One detail I really like?

The gray in Medic's chest hairs.

I don't know why, but I love it.

>>1281

Rendering decent-looking body hair is something I've wrestled with for a long time. Currently, I've taken to putting it on a separate layer above the rest of the image and drawing it using a lighter and darker colour for shadow. Since Medic is an older guy, he gets to have more contrast in his body hair!

A poster with the name "HONHONHON" wanted to see a Spy/Heavy picture, and I said I'd do it just because their name cracked me up. I'd wanted to do a picture with people spying on Heavy while he's showering anyways.

I was going to add dialogue, but couldn't seem to make the Spy's half funny in my head, so I said "nuts" and decided to forget it.

^your lineart is inspiring. heavy looks gooood

>>1330
OMGYAY

We need more Heavy/Spy around here.

>>1330
You have made me a very happy person yang.

>>1340

Happy to oblige. I'm always trying to get better at my "drawing big muscular guys taking it up the ass" skill.

You should fill more requests. You're amazing.

I figured after doing a picture and a comic involving these two, I should make some good, healthy porn of them, as an apology. Some day, I'll get sick of depicting the Medic as a sultry, dewey-eyed power bottom. Some day.

>>1350

I fill requests when they strike my fancy, so just keep posting things you wanna see on the general thread, and if our kinks align, I may just draw them.

>>1351

I am very ok with this. There needs to be more of this pairing.

>>1351

Those manboobs are too high up, and Medic's right shoulder is too small.

>>1357

Nngk. And having gone back and touched it up, I find out that I didn't bother putting a password on the original post so that I can delete the file and reupload it. I'm loathe to clutter the place with doubles of my junk, but here it is again all the same.

Does it make more sense to post things first in /workshop and then here, or just post everything there? I'm still kind of misty on what people consider proper protocol for posting what where around here, and I hate doing jackass things and embarassing myself.

>>1358
awwww no need to bawww yang we LOVE YOU!
seriously though. I need to post my stuff here and stop being scared of concrit...

have my art babies plz

>>1359

Eh... c'est la vie. I like getting constructive criticism, I just hate making a mess when I post on a public board.

>>1358
The highly detailed point of penetration is very difficult to look at

Still not sure how I feel about this one, largely because it would have to be really big for their faces to have more detail.

For it to be totally accurate, the Sniper should actually be riding on top of Scout, since Scout can only screw up.

>>1399
I like this quite a bit, but Scout's eyes are really bugging me, like they're too close together or something. Love the pose and Sniper's expression.

>>1399

That's a Funny Joke for one of my fav couples.

>>1399
>Sniper riding cocks
FUND IT

>>1399
>>1406

Sniper and cocks is the best combination in the history of Mann.
Fukken saved, by the way.

How much time do you spend on your drawings? And how do you go forth from sketching to the finished piece? Curious ..

They're so lovey dovey~

Still not sure how I feel about the shadow effect on this, but it didn't look busy enough without it.

>>1413

The time I spend on my art is hard for me to gauge; the time I spend on lineart varies depending on how much trouble a pose is giving me, and I always spend much longer than I'd like trying to add additional shading and effects after I've coloured a picture. Generally, I start out by drawing a small thumbnail, blowing it up, and then resketching it several times to try and get the anatomy and proportions downpat.

>>1415
That's a really sweet picture, I love it. I am by no means an art major, so my only criticism really isn't, but that little triangle of skin on medic's head is driving me nuts, as it rather stands out. That and maybe heavy's thumb is a tad too sort.

>>1399

FFFFFFFFFFFF That dialogue. Why must you do this to me?

>>1416

Originally, there was no shading on the space between his flyaway and his scalp line, and it drove me insane too so I darkened it a bit.

>>1417

Sex talk is.... sexy? I try to go for "at least funny" when I add speech to pictures.



After chronicling my work on the lineart for this image in /workshop I pushed ahead and didn't bother taking any caps to show how I colour pictures. I'm terrible at trying to describe or instruct, admittedly.

I was originally going to try and make this another gag scenario with the BLU Medic trying to get his Soldier and the RED Demoman to reconcile their differences, but realized after I started it that the only person wearing team colours is the Medic. Oh well... it still looks like Solly isn't an entirely willing participant, or maybe he's just annoyed because he's about to get the Medic's load in his eyes. Something tells me he enjoys being made to do things like wear a collar just as much as Medic enjoys being a shameless size queen.

>>1424
C-C-CRIT-TIC-AL ERR-RR-ROR
...
I liek.

>>1424
I like how the one being raped is the soldier.

>>1426

Aww, you know he likes it when they make him wear the dog collar.

More attempts at a more lazy and sloppy style. This was inspired by a fic by Marty that involved the Demoman and Heavy, though not based on a scene from said fic. Frottastic.

>>1457
I generally approve of the more sloppy style, but I can't help but feel really really creeped out by the faces here. I have no idea why, but they just look wrong and scary to me ...

>>1461

Eegh... if you can put your thumb on what seems off, please don't hesitate. Could it be the heavy shading/outlining?

>>1457
Demoman needs more love, me gusta dis.

>>1457
That's what I call "happy drunk".

More practice at a sketchier style, and more Medic. I'm not sure if his face should have been longer, with him bending his head forward like that.

Originally, he was using the medigun and not a purple thing, but I thought it was a bit creepy.

>>1475
my half-gay mind is pleased
Continue.

>>1475
Post the medigun one!

>>1475
Love it, but left leg irks me for some reason :S

>>1477

Ennh.... it's a little too creepy-fetish for me to want to put up in a classy place like this.

>>1479

Even after doing some underlining to try and dermine where his leg should be, it looked a bit off.

>>1489

Don't quote me on this, but I think it's just that the lower halves of the legs (both of them) are too short. Took me a minute to notice it for the right leg because of how it hangs off the screen, but yeah - both of 'em.

Thighs n' knees look fine, though.

Love all of your art, but one thing that bothers me about about it is the legs. They seem kind of thick and trunklike, particularly at the ankles. Especially since Medic's model has such slender legs and dainty ankles.

>>1500

I purposefully give the characters in this art something closer to real human proportions than what how they look in-game, but I also tend towards making my figures a little too heavyset, something I've tried to work on over time.

>>1490

Once the computer my tablet is hooked up to is not being used to meticulously touch up 3000 vacation photos, I'll have to fix that. I even remembered to put a pass on the post so I can delete the file, yay.

>>1501
I guess, but in some images it looks a little like they have elephantiasis.

>>1477
http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/651352
for those who want to know

Did some redlines of some of the wonks I noticed. It seems like the forearms and forelegs start too early so that they end up being too short. Also limbs taper where the wrists and ankles are, rather than them being the same width as the hands/feet and arms/legs.

Reposted the Panty Remover picture with descript, since it was so close to the bottom anyways. I've done some touch-up on his arm, as suggested by the helpful Anon above. Redundancy ahoy!

This is the sissiest Medic I have drawn, to date. Not sure how I feel, (as always) about the motion effects or speech bubble, and if anyone can spot any horrendous technical errors, I will be happy, as always, to run screaming back to my computer to correct them. I feel pretty good about his face, at least.

Joke #1: Cheap wine is referred to as 'panty remover'.
Joke #2: Australia's wines have a long-standing and probably unfair reputation of being awful.
Joke #3: Sniper needed to ply the Medic with wine to get him to put the panties on. So clever.

Reposted yet again, with further editing to the legs.

>>1507

...saw what u did there.

Seriously, I don't mind, though it bugs me when someone posts my art to Paheal and then I touch up the original to try and make it look better. Such is life.

Even more reposting, yay. At least I still have the working versions of my more recent pictures, so I can go back and try to fix them up.

>>1506

Uh... I'll keep that in mind, I guess.

>>1508

Thanks, by the way. As always, I appreciate constructive feedback. I'm far from professional, and my joints problem is one that goes back a long way. I'd like to think I'm slowly getting better, though!

all your pictures always manage to make my day
yang, you ARE credit to team

Finished up version of the picture I'd had in /workshop. I wish I was getting sick of drawing the Medic Porn Face. I also wish I could decide whether or not heavy line weight is better.

>>1570
Men's garters make me happy.

No offense, man, but with such thick wrists and ankles, Medic looks like a damn gorilla.

>>1572
Question. Have you ever played TF2 before?

No, really. This is an honest question.

>>1573
I guess my comment came off as overly rude. Thanks for the snark.

This artist has already received criticism on their way of drawing joints in >>1508 and I was echoing them.

Medic's gloved hands may not taper very much, but his ankles do. Medic's right calf and foot in >>1570 are just far too thick.

reposting- I did a little jimmying with the Medic's leg, foot and sock garter, and feel more satisfied with the mess, now.

>>1574

Honestly, it came across as an childish attempt at trolling to me, though I figured I'd take another look at the picture and see if it needed touchup, as I'm rarely satisfied with my first go at something. As I also mentioned above, I've had trouble gauging the right proportions for hands, feet and joints for a while, and it's something I'm working on improving. Your own critiquing skills could use a little improvement as well- just a helpful observation.

>>1576
With regards to improving on the jointwork, maybe you could draw general character studies or sketches on /workshop/? I find that to be pretty helpful. Drawing body parts that need work over and over again using references and having someone looking over them really helps me to iron out the kinks and get into the habit of doing them properly. Also general sketches are a good way to help me iron the kinks out and figure how I want to go about my completed picture.