His torso is tilted half way through. Look at the angle the manboobs are facing and the belly button is facing - It just looks uncomfortable to me. I don't know about Sniper but when I want to masturbate, I'd choose a posture that's comfortable and doesn't wear on my spine. Also look at the angle of the arms again. Also, what's that on his hand? A glove? Blood?

Besides that, I approve of this. His "dat ass" face amuses me and the legs are definitely Sniperstyled. Keep it up and post more!

Oh heh well I'll try to draw more. I have a vday picture of solly I could share. And thanks for the help, but I'm not sure I'll fix it. I already spent a lot of time on it, you know? Need to move on to something new, at least for now.
Uhm the red stuff is his undies annnd... I was trying to make the image seem uncomfortable... not sure if that was the right thing to do though.

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Share Solly! He's relevant to my interests.
Also, I must add that I like the background though it might distract from Sniper. It looks really creative, you should share some clean art with that look!

Aww, thanks! I'm usually pretty lazy about backgrounds, but I'm thinking I might fix this Solly up with something more interesting. It was just a quick thing I did on vday for my girlie. I'll post him after I fix him up a bit.

Very unique style. I'm particularly a fan of the way you color your backgrounds. I agree with Perry on the anatomy of Sniper's chest angle. It just looks kind of odd twisted the way it is. Also, the red underwear hugs a bit too tight to Sniper's hand so it's hard to tell exactly why his hand is red.

I tried to fix these problems but I feel silly posting the same thing twice.