That looks more like Scout trying to dress like Sniper than Snipes himself, IMO. Needs more Manjaw of Manriness, and his build is too skinny (especially for the size of his head).

I like how the razorback really looks like semi-old wood. The colors are nice too.

looks like he's taking a shit

It looks like the room has a big dent on the right corner of the box/crate sniper is sitting on

The rays of sunlight and the dust floating in the air in front of the window are really nice. But the shadows don't match the direction of light and the perspecive is way off: the box doesn't look square and you can't really tell what shape the room is supposed to be.

I'd like to clarify something: angyem said that after I was done with coloring, she saw many more mistakes in her lineart/perspective. I was trying to fix the latter in the process of coloring (I've had issues with placing the light, as it was noticed in one of the comments), otherwise we'd have to redraw whole picture from scratch. I'm not making excuses, I took every comment into consideration (even >>2914, though again, it's directed at the lineart/concept without real crit).

I hope that I'll manage to draw something by myself soon, even if I don't really have time to work on fanarts atm, baw.