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No. 2378
>>2372 It looks pretty bloody good. My only suggestion (i don't know if you want concrit anyway. Feel free to tell me to bugger off) But composition wise my eye is being drawn off the page. I would reason it's because white sniper is facing outward. Subconsciously his facing that direction leads the eye in the direction he's facing. And because he's so close to the edge this works against the composition. In the same way that if i didn't want you to look at something, i would turn away from it. It would be more harmonious to have him facing inward thus directing the eye back into the centre of the page. Or even moving him more to the left and having a separate directional object leading you back into the 'action' so to speak. Something like that. Ideally you want the eye to follow a set of subtle directions within the drawing (Like the direction of his staff or the belt ribbons, or like i said the way the figures are facing) so they continue going round in the picture. If that makes sense. At the moment my eyes go to black sniper, his cup, white sniper, his cup and the straight of the page. There's a lot of direction leading to the bottom left corner, that's where my eyes go unfortunately, because the rest is pretty amazing..
Aaaaanyway it's still damn good. i love all the little sniper motifs and the stars are a nice symbolic touch ;) Cant wait to see more :D
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