I know you want constructive criticism and such, but I cant find hardly anything wrong with your art.

>>1125
Something about Spy's head looks really wrong. I think it's his eyes - They look kinda derpy.

>>1125
>Sniper x Spy
>Spy is topping
>My fucking face when

>>924
HNNNGGGGGHHHH heavy is so freakin cute here

>>1125
Bottom Sniper is pretty fuckyeah, but the coloring is a little too shiny, particularly on Spy's face and suit. Perhaps you could tone down the contrast or reduce the whiteness of the colors. The anatomy looks fine though.

>>1125

I really enjoy your art and all the various couples and scenes you produce! I still have a secret liking for this pair hehe.

I wanted to give you some crits on it though, and I made some red purple lines for guidance. Basically Sniper looks pretty good except I think his legs need to be longer. Sniper's body is basically like 98% legs. Spy needs a lot of work though, as his waist as you drew it would literally be like 7 inches. His shoulders need more curvature and his arms need to be longer and posed a little differently. I suggest that you try to draw the underlying anatomy first before drawing the clothes on top. I would also like to see more of his legs behind Sniper.

Spy also has a very long and sharp face, with extremely prominent cheekbones and a pointy chin combined with his huge hooked nose. Also his suit needs pinstripes!

That being said I think the pose you chose is fantastic and daring, and your did an incredible job on Sniper's boots and his expression! The colors look really nice and I love the use of deep blue as opposed to black for the shadow, and maybe some of that could be tied into the skin tones.

>>1149
Yeah, I dicked around with them until I was well and truly sick of it, then put my stylus down and decided to wait a couple days before looking at it again. Maybe I can figure it out now...
>>1189
Unlike the pics that were eaten by a dead hard-drive, I still have this one kicking around in .PSD form, so I can actually mess with it some more! It's kind of a good feeling.
>>1213
Aaaaahh, expert advice! (Purple lines are good enough for me). Thank you very much, this really gives me something to work with in smoothing out the bits of this one that were nagging at me. Also, I can't believe I forgot the pinstripes...

Did some mucking around with this one and (hopefully) polished it up a little.

DICKS EVERYWHERE

NEEDS MORE DICKS

Oh look, I completely re-drew the "C'mon, faggot!" comic our shitty seagate HD devoured.

DICKS INC

DICKS EVERYWHERE

>>1223
>>1224
I love you.

I don't write much fanfic, and sometimes I wonder if I'm the only one who thinks my jokes are funny... good thing I just draw these for shits and giggles. "OF COURSE IT AIN'T, YOU ASSHOLE!" was my favorite line.

Oh god yess...thank you...soo much
i love the way you draw by the way, the faces crack me up

>>977
>>1231

Notice how he uses the same pose for Scout and Sniper in both pictures... Interesting. I do like this Scout-Sniper thing you are doing... Continue.

>>1238
About a month ago, I had sketched out that entire comic, and liked the one frame enough I made a coloured picture of it. Then the hard-drive that comic was on went and shit itself, and I lost the whole fuckin' thing. (Except >>976 ). When I finally pulled myself together and re-did it from scratch, that was the only piece of the original I had. BAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWFUCKIN'SHITTYCOMPUTER.

>>1223
I was just thinking how this is exactly what must be happening when I am not paying attention to my medic. And then I get 'my turn'

>>1239

Due to the fact that I am a HUGE Sniper lover, I hope you are planning to re-draw the rest of the comic. Dear lord, let it be...

>>1296

Well, nobody had nothin' to say over in the workshop, so... whee. Next four pages.

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE

>bottom Sniper
YES!
>top Scout
YES!
>at the same time
bisonyes.wav

I love you

>>1302

Oh god... those thighs... Holy shit... magnificent.

>>1302
I want a bigger, more detailed version of Demo and Sniper fucking in hawaii shirts. It's just too hilarious to pass up.

Please continue, dear sir!

Goddamnit! I love you too much.

I can't get enough of you, Pseudo. I mean that. You draw Sniper perfectly. Even if he has no ass.

>>1302
Oh my Gawd, laughing so fucking hard right now. CONTINUE DAMMIT CONTINUE

I like how creative and impulsive your comics are!

>>1299
I have a bonner
>>1302
I am now laughing my bone off.

>>1233

>>1335
Ichi the Killer mouth Sniper?

>>1335
I was thinking more this guy

>>1335

The card-crusher thing cracked me up when someone mentioned it, because I hadn't even been thinking of that when I drew that frame. Now I can't stop seeing the card-crusher guy when I look at it.

>>1309
Oh. Me too. So much. There can never be enough Sniper/Demo.

I was gonna say something, but my brain had a meltdown at >>1302

Oh, bottom!Sniper, how I love you and your delicious sex faces. You draw them quite awesomely, Pseudonym.

DICKS EVERYWHERE

DICKS EVERYWHERE

the end

>>1380
I really Enjoyed this.

Gorgeous comic. Your characterisations were spot on, and hilarious for that matter. I love your over-eager Scout and grumpy Sniper.

I loved your comic. It was absolutely gorgeous, incredible, and... Sexy! You sir, are fantastic.

Requesting, possibly a Spy/Sniper comic of some kind? If possible.

>>1380

Oh God. Spy's face. I love it.

>>1380 He couldn't even beat Spy's smug smile off his face... I love you for this, Pseudo.

I love this comic and I love how you do both funny and sexy so incredibly well AND at the same time!

Sketchy half-coloured ass porn, ahoy! I'll say it right here- I get off on cartoon porn of all the manry men in TF2, and I must devote more time to drawing the less widely-depicted flavours of TF2 smut, but in the meantime... Sniper getting boned by basically anyone is what turns my crank the most.

>>1509

Allow me to bear your children. Nnnff.

>>1509
Wow, those hands are huuuuuuuuuuge. Too big I think because they look kind of swollen. Also Spy and Sniper should be thicker, they look really skinny around the midsection and waist.