I think I'm gonna have to draw some fan art of this. I love how the Engibees slipped in there. I admit I love Sniper owning weird pets too, so I thought it was a neat little treat. I think you're right about that there seems to be something missing from the build up to the sex. I think there's some requirement for suspension of disbelief for porn's sake, but I definitely enjoy this overall. Really looking forward to more!