This has been my first fanfic in years. So please go easy on me. Please point any problems out that I can change. In the Red Base locker room, everyone was getting out of their torn up clothes and into something fresh. Standing across from the room was Soldier. He was talking Scout about his Tactical moves he plans to use in the next round. Engineer couldn't help but admire Soldier. His chiselled chin, muscular body, and his tough talk turned on Engineer. Engineer was getting light headed from thinking about Soldier and his sexy body. "Ya'll can have lunch without me. I ain't feelin' good" he said as he left the locker room to go to his room. Once Engineer go to his room, he leaned on his dispenser picturing Soldier laying naked on his turret. Sexual thoughts of Solider had never left Engineer's mind Everyone shrugged it off and walked to the lunch room. Pyro was making burgers for everyone. "burger's are ready boys" Everyone got up and grab a few burgers taking them back to their table. Demoman tried talking to Soldier but he wasn't paying attention. Demoman shrugged and walked over to Pyro to talk about her delicious burgers. Soldier rested his hand on his cheek, he was thinking of Engineer. Nothing else came into his mind, because he was fully concentrated on Engineer. What Soldier liked about Engineer was his charming smile, his texas accent, and his way with dispensing machines on the field. Pyro interrupted Soldier's train of thought "Hey what's wrong Soldier? You don't seem to be yourself lately. " "Well Pyro I can't stop thinking about Engineer. And why he left the locker room." he spoke lightly "Well obviously he was thinking about you. I saw the way he stared at you. It was like love at first site or something. Or maybe he was dispensing an erection?" she joked with him. "Anyways Engineer does have feelings for you" "How do you even know?" He questioned Pyro and her smart-ass brain. "I have a way with knowing things." she chuckled "Just ask Spy, he's know a shit ton of secrets" "I see I see. Well it's making contemplate if I should see him or not" he scratched his chin staring at the plate Pyro left in front of him. "Well if I were you, I would be kind and check on him. You do care for him. Here take this plate and go have lunch with him" she smiled placing a couple of burgers on Soldier's plate. Then she gave him a reassuring wink. Soldier had a big smile "You know just what to do at times like this Pyro. Thank you" he took the plate and headed towards Engineer's room. "I'm just a girl that knows what to do hehe. Now go get him tiger." Pyro waved and started walking over to Scout. Soldier was near Engineer's room. He prepped himself up, then walked right into the Engineer's room. He looked around to find Engineer sitting at his desk jacking off. Soldier set the burgers on Engineer's night stand. "Ummmmm…..What are you doing Engi?" he asked. Engineer looked up and blushed "Well I uh….he he he….I was just jacking off to a poster of you" he pointed to the wall. Soldier blushed deeply "Well then. That's good to know." inside Soldier's pants his cock was starting to get hard. Engineer got up and pulled Soldier close. He took off Soldier's helmet and kissed his cheek. "I've been wanting to do things with you ever since we started working together" he said as removed his overalls. Soldier looked at him blushing deep red "really now?… Tell me what you have been wanting to do with me?" he questioned Engineer as he was getting turned on even more. "This" Engineer kissed him passionately wrapping his arms around Soldier. Soldier wrapped his arms around Engineer as well. Both were in a moment of bliss, nothing could bother them. They stood there holding and kissing each other. Engineer slid his left hand down to Soldier's pants. He starting rubbing lightly on the bulge still kissing him. Soldier as well did the same thing. Though Engineer's cock was already out. Engineer picked up Soldier and carried him to his desk. He started removing every piece of clothing that Soldier wore. As he slowly slid of his boxers, Soldier's cock stood up like a flag pole. He smiled and placed his mouth over Soldier's cock. He started to suck slowly, letting his tongue rub the tip of Soldier's cock. After a few minutes of slow sucking, he started to suck harder. Soldier groaned from the pleasure that was given to him. He lifted Engineer's head up and said "Anything else that you are going to do to me?" Engineer nodded. He got up and lifted Soldier's hips. He spat in his hand and rubbed it on Soldier's ass, then his own cock. Engineer placed his cock at the entrance, and started pushing deep into him. Soldier moaned feeling a bit of pain in his ass. But the pain slowly subsided as Engineer started thrusting slowly. Soldier was really enjoying this. Then he began gaining speed every 5 minutes. He only wanted to last long with Soldier. He started grunting trying to loosen Soldier up. Soldier got on to his hands and knees allowing Engineer to fuck him doggy style. He looked at him and grinned with glee. Engineer held his waists and began to thrust deeper into Soldier's ass. He moaned with pleasure. Engineer had went on for 30 minutes, then he came inside Soldier's ass. Soldier stood up and turned around to kiss him. It was Soldier's turn to do the fucking. He took him to the bed and threw him on top of the bed. "hehehe you did maggot, but I might do better than you" he grinned as shoved his cock into Engineer's ass. Engineer screamed in pain and pleasure "aaaahhhhhh…..holy f…..f….fuck. N…n…n…n…no lube" he couldn't really speak because of the pleasure he was getting. Soldier thrusted harder than before, ramming his cock deep inside. His balls slapped against Engineer's ass "You fucking love this don't you maggot?" he slapped Engineers ass, leaving a welt mark. Engineer nodded moaning and groaning. He couldn't believe that Soldier was this powerful during sex. He thought he would be a softy when he is fucking. "Fuck this feels fucking good" Soldier grinned pinning down Engineer to the bed. He grunted with pleasure as he thrusted harder and harder. He reached underneath Engineer and grabbed his cock and began to stroke it. Back in the lunch room, scout heard some screaming and moaning. He followed the sound to where it is coming from. Scout was amazed seeing it was coming from Engineer's room. Scout quietly walked and watched every thing. He was slowly getting turned on, he knew that he had feelings for Engineer. But it seemed like Engineer preferred Soldier more than anyone. Soldier gripped the sheets and began to moan as he came inside Engineer's ass. He panted "So…….what…. do you think Engi?" Engineer was flat on his bed with a big grin on his face "It was amazing Soldier." he looked up at him and gave him a kiss. Soldier crawled next to him and wrapped his arms around Engineer's body. Both started cuddling with each other falling asleep in each other's arms. Scout sat there panting as he chummed every where. Then he got up and left the two alone to sleep. Engineer felt that he picked the right person to fall in love with, same with Soldier. Each day as a new battle started, Soldier and Engineer would protect each other with their whole respawning life.
Needs a beta like living creatures need oxygen, and yet I find it strangely endearing.
Thank you for posting :3
You best be trolling.
I'm not sure whether I should really get into an in depth critique because there is just so much to fix to be completely honest without being outright harsh. Considering my personal investment in this pairing, I'd really love to help make this something I would enjoy reading, but to be honest, I'm not sure you're really serious about writing good smutfic. If you really mean it when you say you want to know what can be changed and actually take that advice to heart and change it, then post this in Workshop and I will give you so much goddamn critique your head will spin.
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DEJAVU Creativity over 9000
Do what the Anonymous said and post this in Workshop. It needs a lot of work.