Normally I don't post here under my normal name, but I'm going to do so just so I can say WHAT THE EVERLOVING FUCK. I'm not aroused by guro but it's at least interesting to read; this is just stomach-churning. It's pornographic in the worst sense of the word. You're so far from the original material (TF2) that it looks like you've taken a sub-par attempt at original writing and posted it here for shits and giggles. If this was an attempt at trolling, try harder. If this was an attempt at TF2 fic, just give up and lurk more.