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No. 4921
A love letter to Marty and all the other Demo lovers on the Chan.
Hit a dead end on Duo - my Scout/Medic fanfic, and decided it was because I needed another story to work on til inspiration comes-a knockin'. So I went onto what was next on the list. Enjoy.

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Soldier smirked under the rim of his helmet as he eyed his prize. Engineer was hogtied wrist to ankle, in nothing but a cowboy hat and a pair of spurred cowboy boots. He looked absolutely delectable kneeling on the ground like that, a horse bit wedged between his teeth, making coherent speech nearly impossible. His erection stood at full attention, with sweet precum bubbling at the tip.

Soldier circled around him like a vulture, eating the sight up. Engineer watched him, his breath fast paced and irregular, cheeks flushed, and eyes glittering with sinful passion.

Finally, Soldier stopped before the hardy Texan, and nudged the erection with the tip of his vintage Mantreads. His smirk only grew as he saw the way Engineer shuddered and tried to arch into his boot for more. “You love that, don’t you,” came the hoarse whisper.

Soldier was still fully clothed, sporting a plain white tee and his standard issue blue slacks. Even through the loose fabric, his erection was making itself painfully known. When the company-issued vacation came up, he and Engineer decided to visit Las Vegas for some private time together.

Best. Idea. Ever.

Soldier tilted his lover’s chin up with the Disciplinary Action. “Look at me, Private,” he growled.

Engineer did as he was told, nostrils flaring.

Soldier began digging the toe of his boot into the man’s groin again. He leered nastily as the Tex rewarded him with a bone-melting moan of pleasure. “You’re just a filthy slut begging to get fucked, aren’t you…?”

Engineer nodded, eyes clouded with euphoria.

“You want my cock, you dirty little whore?”

Another nod.

Soldier chuckled and shook his head. He stroked the sensitive tip of Engineer’s head with the riding crop. “I wanna hear it, Private,” he whispered. “I wanna hear you beg for it.”

Engineer gave a muffled moan, his muscles tensing within their confines. “Hrr wrrnnt yrrr ckshhh.”

Soldier rewarded him with a vicious lash across his chest. “WHAT?!” he barked. “I can’t HEAR you, maggot! You’re gonna have to speak up!”

Engineer gave a sharp cry and muttered a curse under his breath. “Ah wansht… yer cock.” He carefully enunciated every word past the bit.

“What do we say…?” Soldier prompted, stroking the mechanic’s shaft with the thick leather.

“P…Puh…leash…”

“Please, what?” Soldier’s voice was in a strained whisper now. He was trembling with desire and his grin was plastered all over his face.

“Pleash… sir. Ah wansht yer cock.”

Another vicious lash, this time on the Texan’s shoulder. He screamed out with agony. “Request DENIED!” Soldier cackled sadistically. “Who do you think you are, asking for my cock, TEX?! You’re barely fit to lick my glorious, battle worn BOOTS!” Another sly smirk. “But, since it’s all you’re good for…”

Soldier placed his boot squarely in the middle of Engineer’s chest and pushed him backwards, sending him careening haphazardly to the ground. Engineer grunted past the bit and tried to squirm into a more comfortable position on the floor as Soldier pulled up a seat.

He sat heavily and shoved the tip of his right boot, slightly dampened with Engineer’s sweat and precum, to the man’s face. “Let’s put that worthless mouth of yours to work, maggot,” he finished.

Engineer gazed up at him from the floor. He looked… Well, in a word, breath taking. He could see that Soldier had his hands kneading his erection through the fabric of his pants, and his other hand was decisively grasping his Disciplinary Action. The shadow cast from his overly large helmet and outlined his rugged features even more definitively and made his eyes nearly seem to glow with sadistic glee.

“What are you waiting for, Bessie May?!” the man snapped, trying to keep grin off his face. “You’d better get to licking my boots through that horse bit or die trying, soldier!”

Engineer was about to give his best effort when there came a loud knocking at the door. Both jumped out of their skin at the noise.

“LATER!” Soldier snapped.

“Jane? Boyo, it ISH you! Opensh up, willsh ye?”

A newfound sense of panic. SHIT.
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>> No. 5022
Awesome...pure awesome. Not only do I enjoy your Soldier, but your Engineer is fantastically possesive...and that is most attractive.

Please do go on.
>> No. 5029
I absolutely love your characterization! I'm so very much looking forward to the next installment.
>> No. 5031
"... But you owe me BIG, you here?!" GOD DAMN IT, SELF.

>>23 glad you approve. Was wondering if I made Engie a little too "mean" in this one.

>>24 Thanks! Could be up tomorrow, might not. Let's just wait and see.
>> No. 5036
More please?
>> No. 5037
>>25
Oh no no no, Engineer was being perfectly and reasonably irritated/suspicious...but not mean. He even ended up agreeing to go with whatever shenanigans Soldier requested...therefore he was definitely not too mean.

I am seriously in love with all three of them...you write them all so believable and amazingly hilarious. Please do continue as soon as you can.
>> No. 5046
Granadal plugs? Granadal? I am worried.
>> No. 5063
Oh, lawd, the images! This story is so good so far, though I'm not sure as much if I like your lucid Soldier. However, I like him in this story so if it works, it works. Can't wait for the next update!

polite sage

What is Granadal plugs? I looked it up and couldn't find a thing. My imagination is on quite the trip here, please to indulge me?
>> No. 5066
I love this story and the more thoughtful side of Solly, although the one image that will not leave me head is when engineer gropes Soldier before Tavish leaves, its like a teenage girl marking her territory. Besides that, for the love of god continue.
>> No. 5068
28 29
Unless I'm mistaken, I think the Granadal plugs are a callback to something KGBigelow drew. In fact, the entire thing Engie is talking about (the frills and the wig) sounds like it. If that is the case, then, OP, I love you even more.
>> No. 5116
OP here.

>>31

Correctimundo. Love that artist. Did another fic based solely on one of her works, buut that was forevs ago.

>>30

Fact: that part was directly inspired by this video.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7eA1WkzAeRQ&NR


Also, Nova52, you sage by putting the word "sage" in the email box. Putting it in the text box won't do anything. Just a helpful hint, is all.

Go forth and be awesome. (Hopefully an update tomorrow. No promises.)
>> No. 5171
holy sheet! Solly Engi Demo are my "otp", this fic give me lots of inspiration to draw! Please go on...
>> No. 5334
This is so hilarious and in-character. Please update soon!
>> No. 5335
Okay.
>> No. 5343
>>30

http://tf2chan.net/afanart/src/130825558997.jpg

Here's the link. I think granadal plugs would be discribed the7th or so picture down
>> No. 5344
>>36 OH! So it's like a grenade. I see.

Things are so clear now, thank you.
>> No. 8281
Letting you know, Mr./Mrs. Author Anon person, that this is still one awesome piece of fanfiction with fantastic characterization, a much needed rare threesome pairing and excellent writing of Demoman, the hardest-to-write character in the game.

Also inquiring, without any means to rush you, if you're still possibly working on this...?
>> No. 9306
It's been over a month, looks like this is gone.
>> No. 9307
>>39

Please go to a doctor asap and ask him what is wrong with your brain.
>> No. 9312
I am greatly saddened by the long period between which this was (probably) involuntarily bumped and the actual last post. This is such an amazing fic; the characters are maintained, but are also breathed new life, I can really see the going on holiday to Vegas; the dynamic between Engi and Soldier is flawless, and can sympathise with everyone, and I was bawling my head of at every sentence. Whoever wrote this, even if you don't continue it, feel proud of your achievement!
>> No. 9314
>>40

There really is no need for that sort of rudeness.
>> No. 9318
OP here. Yes, there will be more, my good people. Right now I'm busy with my SS, but hopefully after that and some time with my family... and work... I can get back to writing lots of delicious pr0nzes
>> No. 9331
I read this awhile ago, when it was first being posted. Now I see what part of one of my Engie vignettes was inspired by. Forgot all about that line before I wrote it. Still, awesome fic and awesome pairing that would do well with an awesome continuation. C:
>> No. 9421
How could I even MISS this? First time I am stumbling upon it and needless to say, I am thrilled. The characteriziation is great and the dialogue adult comedy gold. I'm not down with the hotness factor (yet?) but the humour alone is amazing and deserves to be read. Awesome, simply awesome.
OP, take all the time in the world, just don't stop. I need this in my life.
>> No. 9572
Posting to let OP know we want more :v
>> No. 9575
>>46 Apparently that type of bumping, as well intentioned as it may be, isn't allowed anymore. Another anon and myself did the same thing on Over The Counter Medicine and got chewed out for it.

Hope you don't get banned.
>> No. 9584
Oh shame, forgot to sage.

Well, just have to hope for now. Board hasn't moved in a while.
>> No. 10347
>>47 Yeah, I apologize again on my behalf for bumping that fic. without knowing the consequences.

I would LOVE to see where this story is going, though.

As much as I hate to do this, saging to keep anon. happy.
>> No. 10779
ahahaha damn that is just a plug in the ass
>> No. 10823
>>50
Fuck you, I thought the author updated. This comment isn't even a helpful bump, LEARN TO SAGE. It's as simple as typing "sage" in the email box. Also, bad grammar is bad. Go back to grammar classes, new poster.
>> No. 11587
This is the most fun I've had with a fic since, oh, I don't know... EVER. I don't think I've ever laughed out loud more at any written text, either.

I'd really like to see where this is going.

With all that out of the way, there were a couple of times at the beginning when Tavish was yelling "Aye!" and I thought it should be "Oi!" because "aye" is an affirmative, not an interjection.
>> No. 11714
http://tf2chan.net/afanfic/res/11711.html
>> No. 11742
I love this so much, the only thing I'd love more than what you've written is for you to write more! It's just... GOOD. VERY GOOD.
>> No. 11750
So I was pointed here to judge the accent of Demo (The things I do for love) so lets do this.

Firstly, the slurring is pretty good, normally it is a tad over done but seeing as this is sexy/comedy tf2, it seems just right as is the dropping of the g at the end of most words, you have that right.

You seem to mix Scots pronunciation with Irish/Scouse/Welsh a few times. What is usually whit. Loik is also Irishish, with Scots saying Like but with more emphasis on Li than ke, or even dropping ke altogether. Dropping letters from most words that are long in fact, or mangling the shit outta the word (Hundred - Hun'ered)

Just some quick adding, dropping and such would balance it I think.

Few words to replace.
Scots slang for women - Bird is more common than broad, or if talking about a women they don't like, whore with emphasis on who and rolling the r (Who-rrr)
Thing becomes 'hing.
To - Tae.
With - Wae.
Wait a second - Haud awn a second.
You're - Yer.
Not, no, never - Nae.
One - Wan.

There you go, I ain't going to plow through it all just now though, but those are just some of the smaller changes.
>> No. 11997
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>> No. 12001
Sage when you post dammit
>> No. 12003
I'm so happy that this fic is coming back. I don't know why I love territorial engineer, but I do. A lot.

>>57
Gurrl. That's the OP teasing us. You cray, anon. You cray.
>> No. 12012
Yes, it was me who bumped my own thread. I planned to have the next episode up by tonight, but I'm having a bit of a crisis. You should expect it by the end of the week at least, though.
>> No. 12034
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>> No. 12038
All the previous installments (and some new stuff!) rolled into one short (but acceptable) package.

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Thank God Tavish was… well, more than a little drunk. He’d probably never agree to this otherwise. Still, Engie was sober as a judge and looking for an excuse to call this whole thing off. Soldier had to pull off one hell of a juggling act.

On one hand, he had to show Tavish enough attention so that he wouldn’t feel embarrassed and left out. On the other hand, if he showed too MUCH attention, Dell would get furious and send him out on his ass.

There was absolutely no fucking way this would turn out good.

Jane liked those odds.

Finally, he had them both naked and on their backs on the huge, luxurious bed. It’d be a tight squeeze, but Soldier knew Engie had a way of making things fit.

Speaking of, Dell’s mood had done nothing but sour in the time it took for Tavish to strip. He’d have to be first, or else this whole experiment would end before it began.

He kissed his way down the stocky engineer’s solid chest, pausing at the nipples. Had to get him riled up again, first. Not wanting to leave Tavish out in the cold, he massaged the dark-skinned man’s ballsack.

Tavish jerked a little in surprise, glancing about in embarrassment. It’d been longer than he thought. Dell glared at him for a moment and clutched Soldier’s head tighter his chest.

Jane chuckled. “Easy, now…” He had to let Dell know he was still the priority here. Think – what else? Something that wouldn’t ruin the mood he was trying to set. If he went too fast, he might lose Tavish!

Trying to relax his partner, he stroked the man’s sensitive thighs. He continued licking at the man’s nipples, shooting the man a warm, loving gaze every now and then.

Dell rolled his eyes. Still, his grip loosened on the back of Jane’s head. So far so good.

Eventually, Jane moved down lower, brushing Dell’s ticklish sides and kissing his pudgy, muscular stomach. The engineer squirmed slightly, trying his best to stifle a giggle, but to no avail. Jane dipped his tongue into the man’s navel, and he moaned. The Soldier couldn’t help but snicker as he felt he lover’s erection pressing at his bare skin.

Removing his hand from Tavish for a second, he took a moment spit a generous amount onto Engineer’s cock, and stroked it with his meaty hand. Dell was now laying back with his arms folded behind his head, smirking at his lover as Tavish silently looked on, absolutely transfixed.

After a bit of this, Soldier began licking up and down Engineer’s length, earning a throaty moan. With his hand now slicked up and ready, Soldier returned it to Tavish’s cock, stroking and teasing it. He watched for any sort of negative reaction from the two.

He was pleased to see that Demoman was huffing with a somewhat embarrassed grin. Engineer was grinning too, pressing Jane’s head down a little more, but out of pleasure, not dominance.

Surprisingly, Dell turned his smile to Tavish. “He’s good at that, ain’t he?”
“Aye – yer tellin me…” the Demolition expert chuckled, clutching the sheets. “Ah, that’s the stoof.”

Dell didn’t say anything else, but at least he stopped shooting Tavish dirty looks. He seemed a lot more relaxed now in general. Maybe he was warming up to the idea of a threesome? Surprising considering he wasn’t one for sharing.

Things were going better than expected. Maybe he could finally speed things up.
>> No. 12040
>>55

Oh, I totes forgot to thank you for this! Thank you!
>> No. 12048
Damn it. Annnd nobody cares.

Look, I hate to sound like someone who has no life who waits around shamelessly for comments on their works (which I am, but that's beside the point...), but I'd really appreciate some feedback on this. Even if it's not good! Anything but silence.

Love you guys, as always.
>> No. 12050
Sorry for the lack of feedback. There's just not much I can say except: MORE! MORE!!

I love the humor mixed in your story has, and I love the Tavish/Jane relationship while simultaneously having a Soldier/Engie pairing. This is great. Please continue.
>> No. 12051
No one commented because they're all too busy fapping to it.
/only explanation

You already know I love this, and I look forward to more. And by 'look forward to', I mean 'will hold you hostage until you write'. Teehee.
>> No. 12052
Sorry.
There really isn't much to say. I am reading, I read it when you only put the first part up as well. There's just not much to say other that that its hot and I will be sitting here consumed with anticipation until its finished.
>> No. 12055
Seriously, I'm wearing out my F5 key awaiting an update to this!
>> No. 12135
This is one of the best adult fanfics I've ever read, thanks to the very detailed style of writing and adorable characters. I was very happy to see you continued this, I was afraid you'd had stopped. Like the others, I'm impatient to read more of this!
>> No. 13034
Very well written piece! I like the tension that is in this between Dell and Tavish. So many stories have the "third person busts in and is immediately invited to join," which is just so unbelievable. Do go on.
>> No. 13035
I cried. Please sage before you post.
>> No. 15891
Last post from 2012, I lost all hope this will be continued.
Nonetheless, this is a great fic.
>> No. 15892
And yet you didn't fucking bother to sage. Thanks. Thanks a lot.
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