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No. 3697
>>3688
It is damn sexy. A few anatomical suggestions, though. Forgive me if this is a bit hodgepodged (Uni has left me with a sleep deficit).
Facially, I love the eyebrows. If you rotate it (35 degrees CCW, as reference) though, you'll notice his face is very long, but without the usual definition of jaw. If you broadened the jaw out a bit and brought the corner to a sharper point, it might better suit his design. His ear also seems a little too low, though I like the detail in the shape.
I adore his expression, nose, adam's apple, and cross-hatching on throat, gloves and fingers.
The back portion of his torso seems very short, especially too short to match its arched front length. It might just be the way it is curved that's throwing me off so badly. If you're able to get a reference for this pose, it may be of benefit. I'm afraid I'm not sure exactly what to suggests in terms of torso alteration.
Heavy's nipple probably wouldn't look rounded - that's more how it would look straight-on, I think. If you were to slant it's shape further, that may help.
The tendon-y detail between Heavy's fore and upper arm is lovely. Their arm muscles seem a little bulky and soft in shape, though. They could use indication for the separate muscles within them (especially upper arm). The shading could also be heavier in the foreshortened / shadowy areas - Medic's right arm, Heavy's back, etc, to keep some consistency in your light source. Some of it seems shaded from both the front and the back, which is confusing since (I assume) the medigun is the main source of light. Also, the fumes themselves - are gorgeously stylized and fun to look at. That is all.
PS - thank you for leaving his gloves and tie on. Kinks ahoy.
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