Sage for off-topic!

It really pisses me off when people go and say that there is "proof" that Medic and Heavy are 'made for eachother'. Uhhg...
I love this comic, and this pairing, and I'm not gonna let MedicXHeavy fags ruin it. Kthnxbai.

(ur a fag)

If you guys keep this up, I'm gonna lock the thread, and I sure don't wanna hassle Cherevatenko with making another thread for their art.

And sage only works if you put it in the E-mail field, not the message field.

Not so friendly neighborhood modster, out.

Thank you, because I am a fag. And proud of it!

Sorry about that, it won't happen again!

Thank you for the art, Cherevatenko. It's quite yummy. Please allow me say that your move to more mature men is quite successful. Normally, I'm more of a Scout-lover - but I'm digging your Sniper/Medic. Thank you again! ^_^ Vm

>>3145

I hate to fill this thread with more junk, but I figured that before someone shits down your throat, I'd politely tell you that most people here dislike emoticons and consider them a sign of immaturity.

Guys, I just want to see Medic and Sniper continue fucking each other. More of this, please.

Whoa, sorry guys, I have been a bit busy and uninspired lately, but I'll try to update soon.

Thanks for all your kind words, but please stop with those pairing fights (I, myself, don't think Medic/Sniper makes much sense, but I really enjoy drawing both of them).

>>3142 Thanks for not locking it up, I'll try to update more often to avoid these fights.

Sorry for taking so long, here's page 10.

It seems like sniper just realized this was pretty cold hearted.

>>3155
FUCK. YES. FINALLY.
Something bothers me about the copied and pasted first three panels, but everything else about this was exactly what I wanted.

Whats wrong with her style looking alittle anime, its not like the characters have huge eyes or what not, I love this style. Just my opinion tho.

Oh, I love this.
Sniper's face on the panel is awesome.... I dunno why but I just love it....

>>3155
Yeah, I like where this all is going.
Thank you.

>>3088
You know, with all the commotion, I think I should be apologizing to you.

>>3155: The mouths look a bit odd. Kinda...snaky, I guess? Slightly verging on side mouth. I wish I could explain how you could do a better mouth, but I am having the exact same problem myself. Sorry.

Only way I can think of to explain the mouth thing, would be to think of how the mouth is connected to the rest of the face. Your mouths are too independent, and have a tendency to sink to the bottom of the face (which also makes the chin too small).

>>3048


Oh my fucking NNNGH. Don't you ever stop.

Good idea, by the way. Comics are a fun way to measure your progress/improvement.

>>3166
>>3168
Yeah, I think I understand your point. I think my problem is that most TF2 characters have a lot of "space" between their upper lip and the nose, and also a lot of chin, so their faces are pretty long and they usually look disproportionate when I draw them. I'll pay more attention to them.

Here's page 11 by the way ♥

>>3186 Aww, thank you! Though by doing this, the drawings will change a lot through the comic, but oh well.

Don't change your style of how you draw just because some people here don't like it!, Do what you wanna do, I love this by the way.

(This is a good example of what NOT to do)

>>3190

...I hope you realize that style has nothing to do with mechanics, yes? I don't think anyone is asking them to change their style.

>>3190
Jesus, guys. Quit being twats in this thread, seriously. There is too much red text here! No one is putting Cherevatenko down for drawing in an anime style. They are merely pointing out errors that stem from issues with stylization without drawing from life.

So if you wanna tell the artist that you love their work, go ahead and do it. Just don't feel the fucking need to put down everyone else who has tried to help the artist improve their style in that comment as well.

I better not have to come back to this thread for this shit again. And keep up the good work, Cherevantenko. You got some great potential to grow even more as an artist.

Cher, just say the word, and I'll recreate your entire thread without all the bullshit in between if you want me to. I realize that it's kind of a hassle and that's why you don't want to do it, but just like Kilo said, this thread's just getting too ugly over all. I'd love to give you a fresh start.

So, yeah. Just say the word, and I'll recreate the whole thing on another board (so that I can still upload the images without the chan spazzing on me), then we can delete this thread and get a mod to move it here. If you want me to email you the password to remove the posts, I can do that, too.

Just feel like it's the least I can do after all the bullshit that's happened on your art thread.

I was just reading through your comic again and round of applause to you. The first page and the latest page are pretty different and generally improved.

I think the shading is much better, lines are thinner. The anatomy isn't absolutely perfect but it's much improved.

Also_ captcha says "clothed" Clothed? For this thread? Hopefully not for long

>>3193
Whoa, thanks a lot! But I don't want to bother you, I'm okay with how the thread is going, I actually enjoy reading them even if they are off topic.
The only thing that could bother me a bit are sages, but the ones on this thread are just because of shippings. Thanks anyways, you're very nice!

>>3194
I'm glad you think I've improved! I notice how the drawings have changed, but I can't predict if they will be considered improvement or just different, so thank you for telling me.

I just discovered your thread today. I love it. Please update soon!

Continue... Everything you ever do in you life, oh my... I can't even form proper things called sentences anymore....

>>3293 >>3286 Thank you, here's an update~

Page 12!

Sorry, I just got a new (freelance) job so I have been kinda busy.

I hope you guys don't think docking is gross.

I had to look up docking, which means that you probably didn't convey it as clearly as you should have.

Unless it's in the next page?

But, kudos for trying something newish. You don't see it everyday here.

>>3305

Docking isn't my bag, but I wouldn't call it gross. Something like felching would be gross.

I do agree with the above poster's complaint- it's not at all obvious what is happening in the bottom panel. I can't suggest a better way to make the activity recognizable, maybe zoom the frame out a little so that you can see the shape of the characters' penises better.

Ohh Hells yeah. My medical fetish enjoys the idea of Medic saying, "Just stay still."

>>3308
>>3307
Oh, maybe I said it too soon, but yeah, it's gonna be more noticeable on next page. By the way, I had no idea what felching was.... Uh, not my thing.

>>3309
I've been urging to use the sentence "relax, I'm a doctor" but it's so cliché, haha.

Oooh now this is getting interesting! You keep improving with every page you deliver. Now I will sit here and wait for the next page.

>>3305
Why is this so hot? If someone told me a year ago that I would find docking hot, I would have punched them in the face. But this is seriously good stuff.

captcha: decrease tMoner

My new job is killing all my free time but at least I can buy hats now, sorry once again for the long delay.

Thank you once again for all your support, you guys make me really happy!

ohmygod. This is so intense... UNF. Can't wait for more, seriously. Well done!

Woohoo! An update. Me gusta...

Eagerly awaiting moar!

I notice you like to give attention to detail (focusing in on specific body parts). This is a good style, but sometimes you get a bit too close, and it's hard to tell what they are. For instant, it too me a while to realize what was going on in the first panel.

>>3392
Sniper's face got me.

I love this comic- please keep it up!

>>3392
I love you.

>>3392
I love you. Nothing says real love like sharing your foreskin with a buddy that has none.

>>3392
Yes, please, draw more.

Anyone know what happened to the artist here? I hate to sound pester-y but I can't help but get worried when someone disappears silently like this.

And I'm missing the art, too, of course.

MORE!!!

I really don't want to post this as Anon., but I'm in love with this.

This style is great, and you're really doing a good job with your characters. Can't wait for the next update!

>>3392
>>3392
Mate. You just unlocked an achievement!

>>4070
Why is it red?

Agh, where did Cherev go? I need more of this sexy.

I'm sorry everyone! A couple of real life friends and classmates found out about this comic and it was really embarrassing to keep uploading knowing they'd see it.

Time passed by and I had forgotten about this comic. Also, birth control pills have decreased my libido to zero and I no longer feel any need to draw porn or even think about sex...

I'm really sorry to have kept you waiting.

If I remember right, the end of the story was really dumb, because they had completely forgotten about Sniper's hair issue, so they decided to do it again some other time.

>>5614
hey Cherevatenko. do you have t umblr and/or de viantart page?

>>5622
Hi, yes I do, here's my valve tag: http://laburatory.LOOK AT THIS FUCKING HIPSTR.com/tagged/valve (I'm sorry it's full of anime characters)

>>5635
anime characters don't bother me. also, thanks so much for post your t-umblr.