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>>4713
1) Medic and Engie's heads are the wrong shape.
2) Engie's torso is too wide and he needs to have better defined hips. He probably should be moved over a bit so that Medic is sitting next to him more clearly (because right now it looks like Medic is sitting on only one of Engie's legs).
3) I personally tend to draw nipples more close together; the way you have them now, you should probably draw more boob sag as well.
4) Medic's back also should have an explicit transition to his buttocks; my redlines might have his waist too high depending on what sort of pose you're planning, so see if you can find better refs.
5) Medic's arms are too long; in general, wrists begin at about the crotch line (so you can cover your sensitive bits with your hands).
6) Engie's hands are too small; the palms should be bigger, and his fingers should have a slight bend to them since he's not laying his hand perfectly flat against the bed.
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