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5341 No. 5341
...mainly on Medic's shrinky-dink looking arm. And please don't hold back, I live off of criticism.
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5342
Wot?
>> No. 5343
I like this
>> No. 5344
I definitely like your style! Can't critize much other than saying draw more. Medic's arm in the first picture is simply too narrow and small, and Sniper's hands in the second look stumpy. Other than that, awesome! Do more!
>> No. 5345
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5345
Did this real quick while my internet was getting fixed.

I'm trying to care about color application in Photoshop, but it has just frustrated me to no end so far.
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5346
Not much to do at the beach with no internet outside of McDonalds wifi.
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5347
Spy is fun, pencil tool is fun, photoshop colors make me unhappy.
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5348
Welp, school has eaten up most of my life this past year. So I decided to try getting away from digital art since sketchbooks are a bit more pocket-sized than a laptop and tablet. Sorry that I only have a bad phone camera to transfer them though.
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5349
Another one.
>> No. 5350
>>3118
That is a marvelous picture. The fabric folds are perfect, and Sniper's figure is just...wow.
The only critique I can think of is that in >>3119
his head seems just a tad too big. other than that, it's great. Don't ever stop drawing snipers, please.
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5351
Decided to re-do a year old, unfinished sketch. Wanted some feedback before I got too far into it.
>> No. 5352
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5352
>>3278
Try tilting the whole composition nine to twelve degrees anticlockwise, and cropping about 5% off the right edge. Just try it and see if you like it. I'm not promising that you will like it, but it's an experiment.
Also, I wonder if you could adjust the positioning of those arms in the back. I had to stare at them for about twenty seconds in order to figure out which hand belonged to who and how they were attached. I came to conclusion that Snoip has two left shoulders, as illustrated in the redline. But having those struggling hands back there really does add to the composition--it would be great if you could get them sorted out somehow. I took the liberty of experimenting with a few different positions for their arms, and left my best idea for your viewing agony, but, as you can see, it's still pretty awkward. My guess is that you're going to have to reposition their chests before you'll get any really good poses.
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