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5372 No. 5372
I am trying but sometimes it's good to have a second opinion. Thanks in advance.
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>> No. 5373
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5373
oh godd what is thiss
>> No. 5374
These are really good, and I love your Scout. Some colour would really enhance them, I think.
>> No. 5376
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>>3219
thanks so much. Yeah ahh... I really should colour them but the anatomy is so fail that I don't know if I should bother. Oh well.

Here's a new one. Ughg. Engineer always looks weird when I try to draw him.
>> No. 5377
Scout's face looks too generic and boyish in that last one. He's young, but he still looks like he could kick the average person's ass. Plus he has huge buck teeth and a much more defined chin than you've drawn on him. And he should have more defined musculature (especially in his legs) and a little bit of body hair.

Plus his expression and body language is way too passive and stiff--even if he's pushing back against Engie, his back should have some arch in it, and his legs and arms more bent. Even if his current mood is "Not Sure If Want" (not my thing, I hate how that sort of face implies either rape or slut shaming) this is the Scout we're talking about. He's cocksure and hammy.

Engie's could also use some spicing up. Even if this is a loving consensual romantic relationship, the act of sex should be more dynamic just in considering the physicality of penetration.

This picture looks less like a thing that's happening and more an erotic, posed photoshoot.
>> No. 5378
>>3264
Hey, thanks for the super in depth critique. You're right, it is pretty 'meh' at the moment. I'm gonna go ahead and fix that up right now.
>> No. 5379
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5379
Updated. Hopefully this is better. Also background. Yay.
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5380
The dick looks really strange because it's basically two straight lines. Dicks kind of get fatter at the base and also curve slightly - as do most things in the human body. If you have to use a straight edge for it, you're doing it wrong.

Here's an excuse to post porn.

(Looking good, though, umpf.)
>> No. 5381
>>3277
Haha oh man. Thank you for that reference image. That's amazing. And yeah, you can tell I kind of got lazy with the dick in that last one. But if that's the only drama then I'll fix that up and then maybe slap some colour onto it.

Thanks for the advice!
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