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No. 5377
Scout's face looks too generic and boyish in that last one. He's young, but he still looks like he could kick the average person's ass. Plus he has huge buck teeth and a much more defined chin than you've drawn on him. And he should have more defined musculature (especially in his legs) and a little bit of body hair.
Plus his expression and body language is way too passive and stiff--even if he's pushing back against Engie, his back should have some arch in it, and his legs and arms more bent. Even if his current mood is "Not Sure If Want" (not my thing, I hate how that sort of face implies either rape or slut shaming) this is the Scout we're talking about. He's cocksure and hammy.
Engie's could also use some spicing up. Even if this is a loving consensual romantic relationship, the act of sex should be more dynamic just in considering the physicality of penetration.
This picture looks less like a thing that's happening and more an erotic, posed photoshoot.
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