This is a picture I did late at night probably in fall or winter. I was immensely proud of the original, but each time I open the folder containing it, I saw more and more problems.

I spent enough time initially to justify a "go back and fix it" so here I go.

Oh, you are the nicest person, really. I will definitely take you up on that offer and I hope others will too! Your help is so valuable and insightful!

I love you. Seriously. If it's not too much trouble, could you redline >>1799 ? I wanted him to be leaning back in the chair with his legs up on the desk, defiant and casual-like, but I could get a handle on it. Crossed legs always seem to give me trouble.

Thanks in advance~

I will aways remember kilo and you for help me improve. Thanks alot alotalot!!

>>1872


hmmm... quite a predicament we are in here. I am no master of perspective, but I can take you through how I would try to draw this were I you.

pt 2 :how to use your reference effectively coming soon!

hope this isn't a tl;dr moment

>>1876

Well that was fun. Please let me know if there
is anything I can help further with. If you have any questions about the steps or i wasn't clear on what I was doing I'd be happy to go further.

Eep! A cry for help here, as people usually only mention what I've Done Wrong after I've given up revising it and gone nuts with stuff like colouring.

This is kind of a joke picture; I guess what I want to get across is the REDs being a bunch of smug bastards, and the BLU Medic being a nagging bitch and subjecting his Heavy to a screechy conniption fit.

Anatomy is always a concern of mine, but what I really feel unsure about in this picture is perspective (not of the ring itself, but of the figures). Obviously I don't expect you (or anyone) to go over the whole thing, but if anything looks screwy to you, I'd love a second opinion.

This thread is already amazing. It doesn't deserve falling down to page 2!

>>1876
>>1877
Oh jesus, how did I miss this?

I'M OFF TO REDRAW.

Thank you so much. You are an amazing person.

>>1972
Hurray! It looks much better. At the very least, I can look at it without cringing.

Any last suggestions?

I have a thread at >>654. I don't know what's wrong with my artwork, but people really don't seem to be impressed. I'm a little desperate here.

>>1887

I'm sorry i fell off the face of the earth. I moved and picked up a second job for a while.

I hope this can still be useful to you even at this late moment.

So, as apparently outlined, I'm having problems with the leg here. Also, needing input on how to have it look like he's having weight put on that 'counter top', eventually it'll be a scene filled with mass amounts of filing cabinets, ect. Trying to resurrect the will to finish this out of my sketchbook, 'model' sitting at the bar wasn't too still, so dodgy anatomy, and having a hard time finding a good reference.

>>2975

I hope this is what you were looking for

>>2972

Ah! That is indeed useful, I keep glancing at that in my folder now and then, but hadn't been able to make any progress on it. Thank you very much for the advice! (I've been realizing over time that I have this stubborn compulsion to include entire figures in everything I draw, even when cropping some of them to allow a better layout would help...)

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anyway, something I'm working on. I know it has errors, and I'm working on it. Anything you can point out would be great and I would be greatful!