Try posting in Workshop if you're after con-crit and all, they're really good in there and not to mention helpful :)

>>6205
Aurgh, sorry for the smilie, been typing to my family for too long!

Workshop is incredibly slow, unfortunately. Looking at your picture, what I can suggest is to use differing line weights to better suggest dimension.

>>6206
Honestly, the occasional smiley isn't a problem. People only get riled up if your entire post is peppered with, "^______________________________^".

Bugger me dead. Several days ago, I'd redlined this and written about half of a doctoral thesis on the virtues of deconstruction, but then I decided to take a break for gloomy Russian novels, and that was that.

You may or may not get your deconstruction essay after I'm good and drunk.

Disclaimer: I failed miserably at making this post twice before this, which means that the fairies are probably trying to tell me that something is terribly wrong with my redlines. Fortunately I never listen to them.

Thanks for the Redline! Its just now that I finally realized a quite some stuff was out of place.

You don't have to, but if you really want to write a whole critique you can take your time.

do you run "Soda's Frag Server?"

>>3402

I don't run that server. Sorry.

Though I might want to start my own once I find some way to get the money...