and things got gay really quickly. kind of a continuation piece.

>>8293
oh thank you. im new to this whole chan thing since ive only lurked before. so i have no idea what im doing ever.

Very slight nitpick: Sniper's tan lines are too sharp considering what caused them. Only the ones on his hands might be clearly delineated and probably not even then. His glasses also wouldn't cause tan lines that deep, only a slight paleness behind the glasses (because they're translucent) and then paler lines for the frames. He also has a very subtle hat tan.

>>8295
thank you for the critic. im glad to have your input. however, i think its more a matter of opinion and personal headcanons. and my headcanon is different. i will take into account the lighter sunglasses tan and hat tan, though. that sounds like fun to draw.

tried out the different tanlines thing. not to sure about how it worked out.

I suggest you keep on experimenting so your tan lines look less like an obvious Photoshop layer effect (because in my opinion, it does). Google Image Search up some tan lines to see how they curve around the body and fuzz out a bit deepending on the material.

That sure is some unnecessary snark with your crit dotchan.
Googling farmers tan still provides plenty of examples of drastic skin tone tans. red eye jedi could stand to blur the shades some but it's not entirely unrealistic and still clearly a choice made out of preference rather than ignorance.

i drew something that isnt shipping. i might do more in a similar fashion. if i can remember. so i guess that's a hesitant no.

someone was like outback steakhouse and i was like shit yea so i drew trucks n vans on a romantic steak dinner date.

Sniper could use more manjaw and the characteristic underbite (all of the TF2 classes save Pyro have them, but his looks the most pronounced, IMO).

Engie's also not quite..."Engie" enough, for lack of a better description. I think it's probably because I'm not used to seeing him without his goggles on, but there's minor details about him that are off that make him look kind of nondescript.

someone drew sniper with a beard, saying hed probs have one in the comic updates when he showed up, and i really liked that idea. so i drew it. and made it gay.

>>8380
I like the beard a lot. Reminds me of Dr. Gordon Freeman.

I'd actually be totally okay with more Valve crossover crackshipping, I miss when there was a bunch of Medic x Gordon stuff in the fandom.

(I know the above isn't criticism, but I have nothing really constructive to say other than I think your art could benefit from some shading. But a lot of people leave out shading because shit is hard and I feel them on that.)

>>8382
yeah i should probably shade stuff but i kind of hate coloring, even flat colors just make me go. ugh. but ive done it before, so. i can try. but i s2g im the worst at it.

>>8383
i should probably stop drawing so much shipping but. wheres the fun in that? i really love dude with beard. facial hair is great. now uh, id appreciate stuff on the huntsman, cause i didnt have any refs except for the huntsman, so. but idk if id change it. im basically the laziest person. however, i have been experimenting with jawlines. i only have a sketch for that, though. helmet party doodle, not sure i should post it until its done...

i finish the helmet party,, i basically never draw anyone in tf2 w/ hat and i think thats sad... ah well. anyways this is what it looks like when i shade things,,
note: probs never gonna do it again.

drew hat,,

>>8386

Umph, dat delicious volume information! It could use a bit more blending, and maybe some rim lighting (i.e. a thin strip of highlight on the shadowed side of the body to imply reflected/diffused light from the environment), but please do more of this! What program are you using?

>>8388
i use paint tool sai, a free version,, if you have any tutorials on painting/blending/rendering, i would really appreciate it, all the ones ive seen havent helped me any! im real lost, its one reason i dont shade much, aside from chronic laziness...

>>8389

Wouldn't be able to help you with Sai. I use Corel Painter and I love how well it emulates real media.

>>8391
o ok, i might rework it or something, but ive got 3 things im doin right now and im tryin to get all 3 done by christmas so, shit,, but ive been workin on jawlines, got a reference for all the characters heads at every angle, so its helped a bit. i think i got some kinda style issue with pushing the facial proportions as much as the models, but im tryin to work around that. sorta debating whether or not i should leave a wip,, doin a demo/snipe holiday thing,

>>8393
haha good god, you don't have to rework it - I only ever supply redlines as a means to help others see things from a different angle for next time. Sometimes people do rework the original piece, but don't feel any pressure. It's just for you and your own reference.

Can't wait to see what you make next, hrng

>>8405
oh phew good cause i am way lazy and i just ,dont even ask me to change anything past the lineart cause i am done once those lines are done.

also im vaguely upset no one commented on dorito faced sniper , gosh,

here is sketch of thing i hope to finish someday, but probably wont, because its 5 days until christmas,,, goddamn.

happy holidays!!!

i tried to make comic, and this is it. tiny demo,, this is my first time making a comic in a long time, i hope it makes some sense.

>>8411
Dorbs. The whole thing gives me the fuzzy-wuzzies.

>>8419
Oh teeny Demu, why so small
The perspective here is great, too! Are we going to be treated to more Tiny Husband Problem comics?

>>8420
there are a lot of reasons uhm, one is cause i got a tiny red demo figure for christmas, and another is cause i need short prompts to practice comic making on, so, yeah. and yes! if i have more ideas there will be more, maybe with other tiny husbands? or not, you know, there isnt much better than a tiny demoman, imho. thank you for kind words, also. i have received a lot of them, for the comic in particular, and it makes me eager to draw more.

wow i actually drew them in their normal outfits,,

>>8428
ah yes, i see what you mean in both cases. im thinking of fixing it, seeing as im using it for something else, so if i do ill post the redone version. but thank u! im glad to be told ive improved, my goal is to never stay stagnant, so its nice to read.

that said, here is another tiny husband problems, which i was uncertain about posting, but oh well.