>>1071
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFU--

That should have been in my thread, but apparently, I am an incurable idiot who doesn't know how to noko.

My apologies, Mod team. (Squad?) I'll try to be less stupid in future.

>>1072
You could just delete your post... Just sayin'.

Just check the little box by your name, scroll to the bottom, and click delete.

>>1073
Thanks for the tip! Right now, it keeps 'incorrect password'-ing me, but I'm hoping later it will decide to work...

>>1063
You just completely made my night. Thanks for letting me know

>Straight female
>Fucking loves this fic
>IT'S JUST TOO CUTE

>>1060

ADORABLE

I also drew Delena's Scout because I love her.

>>1037
RIGHT AWAY, M'LADY.

Captcha: salmonella

lol wat

>>1045
HOW DOES I ASK QUESTION

I would say you could easily make Engie a bit bigger. She's certainly not going to be the smallest of women.

Or you could just add her goggles or something. I dunno.

Yeah, I'd agree on thickening femgie up a little (right now, femscout has a thicker neck), and not just fat-wise. She's gotta carry around a pretty decently-sized toolbox around and metal for her constructs, so she'd have some natural muscle to work in. Also, dropping her jawline or sharpening it may help, as well as give her face a more mature structure.

Dayum, girl! Do continue. I would agree that Fem Engie's neck could be a bit thicker. And maybe fuller lips would help? That might just be opinion, though. I guess I always picture Fem Engie with full lips. Anyway, I'm excited to see more from you, I like where this is going.

>>879

I already freaked out on Hipstr about how much I love this but I'm gonna do it again here aaaaah
Thanks for giving me the inspiration to draw her again~

Hey Red, are you related to that one BLU Scout?

>>1039

I see no resemblance whatsoever and we all know Spy is a lady of her word. That is good enough for me.

Her dismissive expression and hand motion is to die for. Scout's hair is just so frisky, I love it.

>>285
Ok this is bugging me, what is that picture from?

>>384
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0780521/

yar so i unlurk for a minute to present a genderbend how...typical. Anyway i really tried to do something different with Femsniper cause most of my bend are very vanilla. Dont know how well it executes but i had fun :B

>>971
oh my sweet jesus i love your style. please moar

Oh wow thanks guys! I didn't think many people would like that.

I just mucked around with colouring, style and haircuts with this one - crits would be super cool.

>>1031
Scout's mom's left arm looks a little too long, and spy's left hand looks a little small.

The shading on the hair looks awesome, I absolutely love it.

Other than that, all I can say is great job! Your scootmas are delicious

>>993
YEEEAAAAHH

Thanks to the guys over at /workshop/ this thing finally got finished
yay

I really like your designs for the Fem!Classes, they're quite excellent, and your style of drawing displays it well. Good work!

>>2578

Don't be afraid to add more meat on them bones--so far, you've just been making the Scout's arms thicker with no real apparent understanding of what muscles go where. I'm a skinny weak-ass non-athletic chick, but even I have some muscle definition, even more so when I flex.

Also, I suggest you add some rim lighting on the opposite side of your light source to help better define the volumes of your shapes. Whatever she's sitting on probably does reflect some light.

Thanks, dotchan!

So I went and stared at some anatomy books for a while and here this is.

finally done

Sorry. I realized that.
It'll be fixed with the next update.

The thing about female faces is that the lack of chin may get the idea across that she is indeed female, but adding one and knowing where to add your details can make your stylistic choice pop more and seem less cartoon-y and gain more structure. But adding very detailed cheek bones or jaw lines, or wrinkles can take away from it and make your figure look older or man-ish so be careful. (Check out the first sticky Help thread in Workshop, it has wonderful tuts and references for anatomy.)
(I'm not the greatest at females, but here is goes.) Remember that although females may be curvy, they have certain parts that are not as fluid at some other parts. (The face can be a prime example)

Hopefully this helps and if you have any questions about my Crit or you can't read anything be sure to reply and I'll get back to you and see if I can shed more light on my horrible chicken scratch.

Study more females and you should do fine.
It's a very cute picture.

Oh, thank you kindly, Anonymous. I was going slightly for that cartoonish kind of style, but this'll help.