Might want to add some meat on those legs and arms there. Scout's gotta play baseball and run, a lot.

>>2497
Your wish is granted.

>>2515

WHY DOES IT LOOK LIKE CHELL
Dammit

No offense meant, but it still looks the same to me.

I had a go at making a red line - hopefully it makes sense/helps!

>>2544
Ooh, thanks.

The pose itself is very difficult.

I just added lots of meat. I know Scout may be the skinniest and lightest out of the bunch he's not that skinny.
I hope this helped and if you have any questions or any details on the redline you think I've skimmed out on by all means I shall reply. Also if you can't read my chicken starch (nothing new there) I'll reply by just typing them out for you then me trying to write...

Over all good image. I hope to spot improvement on your drawings.

(Hint: Don't be afraid to look up reference pictures to help along. It's not cheating.)

Keep on drawing.

Thanks for the redlines and crit, everybody.

Here's another WIP.

>>2578

Don't be afraid to add more meat on them bones--so far, you've just been making the Scout's arms thicker with no real apparent understanding of what muscles go where. I'm a skinny weak-ass non-athletic chick, but even I have some muscle definition, even more so when I flex.

Also, I suggest you add some rim lighting on the opposite side of your light source to help better define the volumes of your shapes. Whatever she's sitting on probably does reflect some light.

Thanks, dotchan!

So I went and stared at some anatomy books for a while and here this is.

finally done