Hmm for some reason the thumbnail made me think of Gumby...

Anyway her legs seem too straight and in a standing position to match the more "crouched" stance of her top half. It looks like you tried foreshortening a leg but it's really not enough, I think you need to bend her knees further.

>>2227

originally, i did have her legs bent more, but they looked even more awkward than they do now o_o and i changed it to this. now that you mention it...i really should've just left them bent. it probably looked better. LOL. thanks for the crit, though!

repaired it, but unfortunately, i can't seem to correct the foreshortening problem...

Here my horrible red lines. Sorry if it' is look animu. I hope to help you derp.

>>2232

omg this helps SO MUCH, you have no idea. doesn't matter what it looks like; the leg positioning helped me figure out how to make it suck...a bit less. LOL.

Something like this. I dunno. I tried.

>>2261
that helps much, too! i needed a good re-positioning.
can't believe i'm actually receiving crit. i'm probably gonna redo the whole drawing based on these, even though it was just a sketch.

The leg and arm shapes could use a lot of work, as well as the head shape and facial features. I suggest you brush up on some anatomy textbooks and get a feel for the way the muscles are set.

>>2371
i hate to admit it, but you're right. i should've sketched out an anatomical pose first, before adding any details like clothes. it's a mistake i too oft make.

i redid the anatomy and position. thanks for the halp guys!

>>2417
I definitely see a HUGE improvement. There are still some minor flaws (The earpiece looks 2-d and her eye is very large, though that could just be style), but overall, it's very good.

>>2418
thanks very much, i appreciate it! and i apologize for her eyes, my style is in an awkward stage right now between animu and semi-realism and i'm working on it to get it to not look disproportionate.

>>2419
I know what you're talking about - been there myself as well. I use to draw all anime but TF2 is making me appreciate a more realistic style. The change in eye size is one of the most striking difference between the two, imo.
And exactly - keep working at it. You'll get it in no time.