Hello friend! Hope you stay a while - I personally love me some femclass action.

Here's a redline for you. The main issue I could see was that the medic's hips are on a different perspective plane to her torso. Of course, being the numpty I am, I may have mistaken what could be a fold of fabric from the sniper's vest(?) for a gap between the two bodies.

Not sure how you can address this issue in the future. If it is meant to be fabric, then more folds would help explain that to your viewers (which wouldn't go amiss in other places, like where their hands are gripping clothing). If it's meant to be a gap, then check the redline for a guide on how to draw her hips.

Hope that helps. Keep it up!

>>1704
I can see how you mistake that for a gap. I'm so sorry about that. It was to be a fold from the vest, where her zipper would be. And the square is the starting of a belt buckle. But I really love the red lines though I am colourblind with red. I will try to fix what I can make out what you drawn. I hope I did this respond right

>>1705
Oh shoot! Is there a colour that would be easier for you? Let me know so I can use that if you need another "redline" in the future.

So here is a quick painting of the two coloured. >>1721 greens or blues are always better for me. thank you for the help.