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No. 1417
Well there have been a few threads with some "redesigned" genderbends, like that lovable Indian demolady. I'm no expert, but I figure if you were to put in other OC stuff like her "information" then it would probably be to the level where she would need to go to the OC board. Otherwise you should be fine here.
But I do see your point. She is certainly has the look of a gruff, no nonsense badass of soldier's caliber, but she doesn't look like a female version of THE soldier.
onto a bit of criticism, constructive I hope. First I notice that the heel of the hand holding the knife sticks out a bit too much, nothing horrible, but it is there. Second, the shirt looks a bit too wrinkly and baggy, as if she was wearing something way too big for her. Of course, that could be what is happening there, in which case ignore me. the last bit is more of a nitpicky thing, and might not even be a problem (the face being a weak spot on my limited knowledge) but I feel like the cheek bones are uneven, the left one looking a tad too small compared to the right.
I won't even pretend I'm some expert or am even better than you, but I hope you can look at what I am looking at and judge for yourself whether or not I'm making any sense.
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