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1408 No. 1408
Um, I don't know if there's a line between genderbend and OC (and if so, how thin it is), but if yes, this Soldier is definitely in OC territory. Would this be a big deal here?

Still a work-in-progress, but here, have some lines.

I'm still developing her character, so if I were to ask for input in fleshing her out some more, would it be okay to include her information here for feedback, or should I make a separate thread in /rpg/?

I have a few other ideas for fem classes, so they might eventually appear here, too.
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>> No. 1409
I like it, she looks like she wants to kill someone
>> No. 1412
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>>1409

I think she already did.
>> No. 1417
Well there have been a few threads with some "redesigned" genderbends, like that lovable Indian demolady. I'm no expert, but I figure if you were to put in other OC stuff like her "information" then it would probably be to the level where she would need to go to the OC board. Otherwise you should be fine here.

But I do see your point. She is certainly has the look of a gruff, no nonsense badass of soldier's caliber, but she doesn't look like a female version of THE soldier.

onto a bit of criticism, constructive I hope. First I notice that the heel of the hand holding the knife sticks out a bit too much, nothing horrible, but it is there. Second, the shirt looks a bit too wrinkly and baggy, as if she was wearing something way too big for her. Of course, that could be what is happening there, in which case ignore me. the last bit is more of a nitpicky thing, and might not even be a problem (the face being a weak spot on my limited knowledge) but I feel like the cheek bones are uneven, the left one looking a tad too small compared to the right.
I won't even pretend I'm some expert or am even better than you, but I hope you can look at what I am looking at and judge for yourself whether or not I'm making any sense.
>> No. 1418
>>1417

(Oh, yay, a reply!)

In regards to her hand, would reducing the size of its heel help, or do I need to adjust the wrist so the whole hand is in a more natural position? And yeah, now that you mention it, the cheekbones do need some adjusting, so thanks for that.

As far as the shirt looking too baggy... part of her character history includes that she nicked the uniform off a fallen Marine. But, the one she's wearing here isn't that same one, it's just based off it, so I can't exactly cite that as a proper reason. So, mentioning that was probably pointless. I... don't think I'll go back and adjust the bagginess on this, since I kind of like it as it is, but I'll try to make the outfit fit her better in future drawings.

Thanks for the feedback; it's much appreciated.
>> No. 1419
Okay, well, as far as her info goes, I have a thread for it now in /rpg/ if anyone's curious enough to look at it and provide feedback.

http://tf2chan.net/rpg/res/1878.html

In the meantime, I should hopefully have more art up here soon.
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Suuuuper-sketchy shit here.

Uh. If that's a big deal, let me know? Was figuring I'd clean it up at some point anyway.

Fem!Sniper concept. Once again, simply genderbending canon Sniper was not what I had in mind.


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